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  1. Baby Hold On pt 5 Amazin laughing so much, hilarious update soon! dh trailer beautiful too

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  2. Baby hold on....Part 5
    Wow...that's real TROUBLE... For both of them ... Both equally disturbed by the other...
    Buaji's choice of song...really really hilarious... Poor Arnav had to put up with it...
    Aranv is just too devil... Not leaving any chance...he used the word TRUST first and then... asking for a KISS as return for the favour... What will khushi do...? I guess she won't blackout but probably kiss his hands or cheek at the most...
    Can't wait for next update

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    1. haha to kiss or not to kiss right? ;) u'll find out very soon!

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  3. i loved the chapter, soooooooooooooo cute

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    1. i hve changd my user id to MINKRISH.jst wnt through fateful love.interesting.

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    2. secret passion was amazing,really paisa vasool.

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  4. Baby, Hold On ,part 5
    wndrfl updt. Arnie,u hav a great self cntrl. Naughty boy want a kiss. Khushi ,my girl u give tht kiss. Buaji & her song ,lol. Updt sn. Waiting 4 SP

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    1. lols glad u like tip tip barsa pani hun

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  5. DH..17
    There was so much pain there...hope something happens during there journey so that the whole situation changes...you keep us all highly intrigued with your writing!

    Mrignayani

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    1. I know, DH is in a rough patch at the moment, but how long can arhi stay distant? ;) Glad u liked it!

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  6. Baby Hold on!
    Awesome update.............loved it!

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  7. That was awesome...
    Buaji in this ff is some sort of cartoon I mean that song seen was hilarious...
    & aw... Our raizadas is recognising his feelings...
    & the last part, I m still blushing
    Can't wait for the next update...
    Update soon

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    1. haha yeah maddy bua and even butterball are cartoons. hope u like part 6 Shipra!

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  8. Baby hold on!
    Lol! Wonder who buaji was imagining while singing that song??! And for the first time! Arnav's POV was given! Brilliant! And thank God for the comments page! Won't take the other pages long to load now I guess..

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    1. lolz good question about Buaji hun. Yeah, this page should help with loading and I can reply too! :)

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  9. Baby hold on, DH and fateful love:
    Geat updates as always! Loved them all and your writing makes my day always!

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  10. DH and Fateful Love
    cant wait for the updates

    Baby Hold On
    Mr Raizada is certainly losing sleep over Ms Gupta
    and Ms Gupta is surely very attracted to Mr Raizada

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    1. Spot on analysis ;) DH coming today!

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  11. Ha ha ha
    I would love your description of how the earth moved from both their perspectives

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  12. Ur all stories r amazing n u r most wonderful n fantastic write.i read ur stories again n again. Keep it up:p

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    1. Thanks so much, doing my best to keep up :)

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  13. I am loving Baby, Hold On...what a fun story!!

    cheers
    what_the

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  14. Omgggggggggggg...Mr.Sexy is churaing my neend now..he is to hot too handle..n m meltin in his hotness..freakk dat song part was damm funny n khushi thot it was a dream hahahahaha..nw lookin frwrd fr der awiated kisssssss
    Baby hold on..Chp-5

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    1. agreed, he lives up to his nickname for sure ;)

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  15. Amazing! Update soon!

    .Boss.

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  16. Baby hold on part 5: hahhah that was an awesome update.... he wants a kiss awwwww lovely chapter...really enjoyed reading it.... oh one question.... y is the background of the story gray?? it was a lil hard to read

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    1. Glad u liked part 5 :) The background is grey to prevent copying on phones and iPads. If u increase the brightness on your phone/laptop it should be still quite readable.

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  17. BABY HOLD NO PART 5
    The fact that he did not want her sleep to get disturbed was so cute and the way he calming her with those hush hush and caresses hayee mera to dil agaya.
    loved reading his point of view on things.
    master bed and all hmm raizada seems rich.
    that line about park been known for activities after dark was epic.

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    1. Yes, he really took care of her very sweetly. And she didn't even realize her dream was half real.

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  18. videos -

    loved it all...it was a fantabulous creation...so stunning....is there a video going to be for shameless??....my fav are desert heat and fateful love..so intense...mind games hilarious and HOT...loved it...any update on mind games...reading it for the 4th tym...:)...never got tired of it

    -deelax18 IF name

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    1. So glad u liked the videos :) No plans of shameless video at the moment. MG vol 3 i do have the story set in my head, but too swamped right now to take on a fifth story. Once SP ends maybe.

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  19. Baby, Hold ON....
    I have just read all the chapters in one go and I loved it...
    It's truly amazing...
    Totally different and Mindblowing...
    Plz plz plz update chapter 6 really really soon.............

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  20. Baby hold on part-5
    that is the one story whenever i read it my mind gets fresh.. amazing hillarious update.. specialy that LOVERS park scene.. he ask for kiss in
    returnhis favour. waiting to see wether khushi is going to fulfil his demand..

    Sorry for not commenting on last part of DH-Goodbyes.. i hav read that part not get chance to comnt.. that was an absolutly amazing part.. i m very happy that they ar not seprated thanks their frnds.. now they are alone hope khushi make him understand whar she is planning after reaching there..waiting to their journy to north to start. update soon.

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    1. Yeah, BHO is totally light and fun, which is nice for me to write as well. No prob on DH, I'm glad u got to read it now :)

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  21. Heyy..tina!! U r stories r amazing yar..i hv read each nd every update f ur stories.secret passion,deserted heat,fateful love r mindblowing..nd mind games is my fav i luv reading it again nd again..pls pls cntinue mind games 2. Nd ur new story baby hold on is awesome.dnt stop writing.

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    1. Aww thanks so much! No plans of stopping any time soon :)

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  22. Plz update the stories yar...
    It's been really a long time now...

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  23. Part 5 of BHO
    Loved every letter of the update dear. Superb park scene - my heart beats were accelerating. Arnie u ROCK!!!

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    1. Arnav at his flirty best ;) Glad u liked it!

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  24. About Ch-18 of DH
    Knew Arnav wouldn't be able to stay away from Khushi. Hope he understands her decision to at least meet her 'fiance'. It's not right for a person to just forget about responsibilities just because they are in love. But she could have done a better job of explaining herself. Waise bhi, Arnav ka gussa is legendary na and the way he jumps to conclusions and takes rash decisions. Khushi - stay strong - he will come around :)

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    1. Yes, his temper is legendary for sure. For him, the world is black and white while Khushi sees the grays of life. Interesting twists and turns ahead in DH :)

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  25. It's been a long time...
    Plz update any story na yar........

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  26. hey the last update was awesome, but i have been waiting whole week for the next updates, please do it soon yaar! can't wait to read SP after reading the teaser and also desperately waiting for the updates of FL, DH and also the next volume of MG!
    ...Khushi...

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    1. I'm updating very soon hun. BHO and DH. FL and SP are almost done too, will post teasers for them

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  27. hiii I am a silent reader but read every story on the blog n loved them all!
    DH is my absolute fav! I knew arnav cldnt stay away from khushi! waiting for next update :)

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    1. Nice to hear from you. DH is close to my heart as well :)

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  28. nice update ....loved baby hold on

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  29. Secret Passion chapter 18 part 1
    Karan is so evil and sleazy, I could just throttle him
    He is just bad mouthing Arnav ,Garima and Buaji is so gullible

    Fateful Love chapter 8 Teaser
    can't wait for the update

    Baby Hold On chapter 6
    wow I loved the water fight, but idiot toad had to ruin it
    ah so she told Arnav she didn't want to marry Shyam
    can't wait to see what they do

    Desert Heat chapter 19
    the awareness between them is sizzling
    at least she told him she was going to break the engagement but he doesn't believe her
    their riding together was so sensual
    can't wait for the next part


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    1. lolz everyone wants to get their hands on Karan lolz. Glad u liked the other updates too :)

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  30. DH: loooved the update.....just arnav and khushi with all the intensity in emotions! Your update always leaves me wanting for more

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  31. awesome updates of DH n BHO


    sida 4rm IF

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  32. Amidst the chaos of this stressful week, which has only just begun, could only read Part 6 of BHO, simply splendid and hilarious!! Mr Sexy called Sushi 'Khushi' for the first time, wow and he wants a kiss :) I was hoping beyond hope that she would kiss him, but boring Butterball just had to ruin the moment....Looking forward to the next update, and what Mr Sexy is going to do now that he has Khushi in his arms and how will help Khushi get out of marrying boring Butterball. Also very excited as to whats coming up in FL....As for SP, slimy Karan must be evil Shyam's twin, but silly fool does not know that Arnav and Khushi are already married, hope they silence all of them with that revelation. Can't wait to read DH, unfortunately not know....Wish I could loose myself in your stories forever, but reality bites:(

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    1. Wow I'm so glad u liked BHO part 6--Mr. Sexy and his Sushi lolz. Hope you like DH too once u get time to read it :)

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  33. 1st my comment on DH-Dey both cnt resist each oder present..drr passion is unimaginable..n arnav is to hot to handle..humlogo se ni ho rha..i pity hw khushi is resistin herself to touch him n feel him..drr love is seductress yaaa..damm hot!!

    2nd comment BHO-Seriously tina r i takin sum sort of revenge frm us..by intro such hot n ahhh wala arnav..r u tryin to kill us?
    Khushi is so mad..arnav is askin her to him so many tyms..bt she is mad..i would hav kissed him senseless..agar aisa baar baar pucha hota th..
    N wat a mission name..dis is 1st tym m hearin such a mindblowin mission..melt the butter..hehehehe

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    1. haha agreed, Khushi is either very strong or very stubborn to resist the Dark Prince's charisma.

      BHO--lolz that's always the plan ;)

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  34. just read ur DH and BHO.marvelous and excellent updates.

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  35. loved the chp 19 of desert heat and the 6th chp of bho. hopefully arnav will believe khushi.

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    1. I hope so too :) He's stubborn but he's got to see that she loves him.

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  36. Desert Heat Ch 19 Back on the Trail
    mindblowing updt. Khushi,u already broken his heart. Poor arnav,fighting with his heart & mind. Loved the way u narrated everything. Try to add sum pic of tent,building etc so tht it help to imagine everything. Itz like watching a movie. Then the last part, wht wil happen nw??? I love tis arnav, so brave <3 . Hope tht he wil stay with her til she find abt her fiance. Loved tis updt v much.

    Baby hold on part 6 kiss me
    excellent updt. Missed the kiss. Better luck next time. Mission started, nw lets c hw butter melts. French kiss turned into fries, whaa khushi. Arnav,ur replies was fantastic. Each 1 is like a slap, great boy. Cntn sn.

    Sry to knw abt copying of ur work. May be wordpress can help u by restricting the entry of new ppl. Wil miss re - reading ur work. Try to find a solution ASAP.

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    1. Glad u liked the DH update! I did try looking for a pic of the tent, but didn't find right one. Since then, however I've found something close so u'll see it soon.

      BHO---Mr. Sexy is Mr. Smart as well ;)

      Yeah the copying is unfortunate, but I've put a lot more security in place. More than wordpress. Hopefully that ends it.

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  37. Amazing updates yar. Part-6 of baby hold on was awesome.:-) the way arnav calls sushi..its so cuteee.ur stories has creatd an imaginary world of arnav-khushi in my mind.waiting fr next updates.:-)

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  38. DH ch 19 - loved it there is only so much control arnav can have whn khushi is involoved! hot n happened ch 20 maybe lol

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  39. Just read DH Ch19 :) Loved it!! Brilliant update, the passion and intensity between Arnav and Khushi whether when trying to keep their feelings in check or having an outburst is amazing....Can't blame Arnav for not wanting to trust Khushi, however he is also stubborn in not wanting to hear her reasoning, but the love is so evident in how protective he is and how he saved her....Cannot wait for Ch20 to find out what happens, they are more than soulmates, they cannnot be away from each other for too long:)

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    1. yes, both are stubborn and set in their ways, but belong together. Hope u like ch 20!

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  40. BHO-chp 6- Kiss me

    hmm... a kiss like from khushi secrate romanti novel, i must say she is also naugty like arnav.. amazing.. i loved every bits of this part that Jha- Jaa wala part, bua thinks that she & her frnds are trim, arshi water fight but argh that butterball had to disturb them..
    but never mind i m happy that they are frnds now & she is sharing her feeling with him & they are planning to Melt the Butter.. superb name... waiting for their mission to start..

    DH-chp19- Back to trail
    amazing udate.. i m a bit sad that khushi told him her reason for going there but he is not believing her. i think he is scared to believe her now that she might leave him after meating that singhs.. but im sure he believ her soon.. love their sensual jounerny as one..waiting for nxt part eagerly..

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    1. BHO--true, at least they're friends now

      DH--exactly, he got his heart broken once and even though he wants to believe her, he can't :( it will take time no worries.

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  41. DH-Ch 19 and BHO-Ch 6
    Loved both updates...!! Really enjoying the banter between A & K in baby hold on...
    and DH...well what can one say...I can feel the heat of the desert....sitting in a really cool AC room... :)

    cheers
    what_the

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    1. so glad u liked them! Yeah DH got heated even though they didn't even kiss once. :P

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  42. TINA......WONDERFUL NAUGHTY PAYING GUEST VERSUS A PRETTY

    LANDLADY'S TALE ALONG WITH A CUTE TWIST ...LOVED ALL 6 CHAPTERS

    THANKS N KEEP ME POSTED

    I COMMENTED ON 'SP' N 'DH' IN I F ..READ N ACKNOWLEDGE



    KKKA

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    1. Hey KKKA, so nice to see u after so long! missed u!

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  43. .TINA ...AFTER A LONG LONG TIME I AM COMMENTING FOR D H

    SAY AFTER 8 MONTHS

    LIFE IS SO FULL OF TWITS N TURNS JUST LIKE YOUR TALE OF

    TWO INFLAMMABLE CHARACTERS

    AFTER THE SHOW DISAPPEARING FROM MY TELLY I WAS HOOKED

    ON TO YOUR N MANY OTHER GOOD STORIES

    I OPEN MY INBOX EVERY DAY WITH CROSSED FINGERS AS EVERY

    NOW N THEN WRITERS ARE FADING AWAY

    N MY B P GOES UP IN ANTICIPATION

    TRUST ME IT A RELIEF TO SEE PMS FROM YOU

    KEEP WRITING IT IS YOUR TALENT

    A DOCTOR HAVING A PEN IN HER HAND ALONG WITH THE

    STETHOSCOPE IS A DEADLY COMBINATION

    YOU COUNT THE HEARTBEATS OF YOUR PATIENTS THROUGH THE

    STETHOSCOPE N YOU FEEL THE PULSE OF YOUR READERS

    THROUGH THE PEN

    JUST TRY N BE HERE YOUR PRESENCE IS LIKE A LIFE SAVER FOR

    US FANS



    N NOW THE STORY

    POOR HE N POOR SHE ...AHH HUN PANI PAO JI ISS AGG TEY

    BOTH NEED TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE LOVE FOR THE OTHER

    TO THEMSELVES WITHOUT INHIBITIONS

    THE BOND IS THERE BUT KHUSHI NE BOND KI BAND BAJAA DI HAI

    ARNAV KAB TAK GHODE DAUDAYEGA RE ...THAK GAYA HAI

    BECHARA GHODA [HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND HINDI N PUN-JIBY]

    JOKES APART THIS WAS AN ANGUISHED JOURNEY

    BOTH FEEL THE POWER OF LOVE IN DENIAL

    BOTH FEEL THE HEAT N YET REFUSE TO BURN IN IT

    BOTH FEEL THE NEED TO CONFESS N STILL WORDS FAIL THEM

    BOTH FEEL THE HURT N YET HIDE THE PAIN

    IT IS A TALE OF TWO TORMENTED SOULS SO IN LOVE THAT

    SEPARATION BRINGS THEM CLOSER THAN TOGETHERNESS

    JUDGE SAHEB ISS KE AAGEY MUJHE AUR KUCHH NAHI KEHNAWink

    WAITING FOR S P



    THANKS




    KKKA...NAAM TO SUNA HOGA ....THIS IS WHAT I SAID ON I F

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    1. Aww this is one of the sweetest comments I've ever gotten. I have no plans of leaving the fandom so no worries :)

      So glad u found time to read DH, I'm glad ur liking this desert journey.

      Ps. I will add this comment to my reviews section ;) It's amazing and so witty :)

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    2. TINA ....THANKS DEAREST FOR THE ACKNOWLEDGEMENT

      YOU DESERVE NOTHING BUT THE BEST OF APPRECIATION


      WAITING FOR THE NEXT


      LOVE N LOADS OF IT



      KKKA....KKKA NAAM HAI MERA

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  44. TINA N SATINA ...AN UPDATE FULL OF DOUBTS

    I SEE A GREEN KARAN

    A SELFISH MAN

    A MANIPULATIVE COWARD

    A GUY WITH NO REASONS

    AN IDIOT OF SORTS

    A MAN PLAYING SAAS BAHU TACTICS WITH BUA JI

    A PERSON WHO HAS WITNESSED THE WRATH OF THE HUNK

    BUT HOW TO BE SURE THAT HE HIMSELF IS NOT AN ANGRY HULK ?

    SOCHEY KA PADI ..PADI ..PADI

    HOPE HE DOES NO HARM TO THE DELICATE SITUATION HERE

    THANKS FOR THE PM GIRLS



    KKKA

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    1. u've described Karan very well. he is playing saas bahu games with Khushi's life.

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  45. Baby hold on!
    I can't seem to get enough of this one! That's one muddled khushi and one sexy raizada!* Sigh! * arnav seems such a typical author imaging shyam as a toad and him prince charming while khushi a true food lover names him a butter ball! Well let's see where these roads meet.. From the looks of it, it'll b one lavish fairytaleish feast :P
    DH-
    I'm glad I read this one before bho! The emotions just ran waaaay too high..arnav in his typically egoistic heart broken condition refuses to see khushi' pov and khushi can't seem to stop having wet dreams with him! Well at least its upped a level and they have got to the basics of combat verbally let's see how long before it all combusts in passion :D

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    1. Aww glad ur liking BHO <3
      DH--yes it's heavier on the emotions for sure. haha with these two, the passion is always waiting to be ignited ;)

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  46. My first ever comment on your work !
    You are the BEST Arnav & Khushi Fan Fiction writer! Period :P
    I love all your stories I have read ( except shameless ) and you are great!:)
    Keep writing :)

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    1. Wow thanks so much :)
      Yeah, I'm gonna keep writing on ArHi, love them too much to stop <3

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  47. DH 19...you give me chills every time You update..something intriguing appears and the ARHI moments are precious! Good job as always
    Mrignayani

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    1. so glad u liked the desert journey :)

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  48. BHO- Tina just caught with this story..must say as light as feather....enjoyed every bit of it, especially the flirty raizada! Sometimes ARHI stories are so depressing as they deviate from the actual characters, not yours...all your stories make me want to keep coming back to read more!
    Mrignayani

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    1. no worries, nothing depressing in BHO. it's totally a light romcom :)

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  49. Hi
    Absolutely love Baby Hold On - looking forward to part 7 - please continue writing!

    SB

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  50. baby hold on- lovely update...am glad that finally khushi told arnav that she doesn't want to marry the butterball...eiiiiwwww....can't wait for the khushi-arnav romance to start...
    continue soon

    desert heat- it was hot in the desert finally...hehe...loved the horse ride scene...well that wasn't a horse ride truly but something different altogether.....loved the romance
    i wish arnav listens to and believe in khushi...khushi should make him believe that she loves him and him only...can't see them both hurt...
    continue soon

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    1. BHO--romance has started from the first meeting ;) And it'll keep growing.

      DH--so glad u liked the romance hun! More steaminess next time!

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  51. Hey I read all of your ff all our mind blowing. ..
    I really like BHO hope they kiss and make a plan to get rid of toad... I just read Fateful love oh god I really like your story its so different. .. I hope khushi can help in changing his future now... can't wait for ch 9.. Really want to know how will they end up together in the end..
    Hey should I send you a buddy request in IF...

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    1. hey glad u liked BHO and FL :)

      sure u can send me buddy req on IF if u want. I send out pms to regular readers. Or u can follow this blog--up to u. My id on IF is TINA!

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  52. U r a beautiful writer...making me confused to think which I love more DH or SP but now it's FL... am thinking of their reunion while doing my work...pls do write more n god bless

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  53. As usual Tina, the update for FL-8 was awesome, honestly, I had tears in my eyes and a big smile on my lips reading chapter 8. It was such a treat to read them meeting again after 3 years. I must all the waiting by us- the readers and Khushi finally paid off! thank you so much and please continue soon!
    ...Khushi...

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    1. yes their love triumphed.. reunion coming next chapter!

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  54. Fateful Love Chapter 8 - Arnav's trunk
    My heart hurts for them and their separation

    It is worse for Arnav because he is in the past with no knowledge if and when she would see his letters

    at least for Khushi she has his letters to know what he is thinking and feeling

    at last they meet after 3 agonizing years
    can't wait for the update

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    1. yes both are facing their own challenges being separated by time but next chapter is worth the wait!

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  55. Hi Tina,
    I am absolutely in love with your stories....you are an amazingly gifted writer. Just one request , pizzazz never never stop writing. I m enjoying each stories....and check everyday for updates....knowing very well that you r a busy person. Wishing u all the success.
    TC,
    Ritu

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    1. Thanks so much. No plans of stopping, i love arhi too much :)

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  56. Just read Ch 8 of FL, a beautiful, intense update that tugged at the heartstrings....You are an amazing writer Tina, reading the chapter, it was as if I was experiencing what Khushi was feeling....the deep, powerful, soul-merging love they share, truly magnificent....Finally, they have united!! My heart was racing, I was feeling nervous and excited :) Also loved the part were Payal was so understanding and helpful, really sweet. Just can't wait for Ch 9!!!!

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    1. aww glad u could feel their timeless connection through words alone :)

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  57. Fateful Love : Just read your story and what should I say about it.? Its AMAZING. Truly and utterly touching. I have cried along with Arnav & Khushi. Hopefully their love will cross all the obstacles of time and they will live happily ever after. Can't wait for the next update. Like Khushi, even I am happy and somewhat nervous about their meeting. You are really talented TINA! God has blessed you with such great gift and I thank him for that. I love all your stories and feel a little sad that couldn't read Desert Heat from starting as I came across ur blog recently only but still I am loving the ongoing chapters. Thank u so much for sharing ur stories with us. Do share ur other stories too. Eagerly waiting for ur next Fateful Love update and Shameless e-book. Best of love and muaaaahhhhh :) :*

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    1. Aww thanks so much hun, your words mean a lot to me :) tc!

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  58. Fateful love chapter 8:
    I've been silently reading the stories but couldnt comment as I have my exams going on
    This time though I just couldnt resist!
    Arnav's back!!!!!
    Yipiieeeeeee!
    They reunited!!!
    *doing bhangra*
    I'm soooo happy
    The chapter like all others touched me and I loved their letters
    I sooooooo cant wait for the next update
    Can u skip BHO and update this instead? :D
    Though I love all your stories, I just cannot wait for chap 9
    Rabba Ve!!!!
    Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

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  59. FL 8...Tina I had goosebumps when reading it..loved the flow and the pain you depicted so well. Now, eagerly waiting to see how you shape their future!
    Mrignayani

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    1. Glad u liked it, arhi's reunion coming up :)

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  60. Hi Tina,

    Fateful love; chapter 8
    I am in tears again, I don't know why but every time I complete reading fateful love I would feel wetness on my cheeks...
    How can someone portray emotions so well, it as if everything is happening in real in front of my eyes...
    I just don't know what to say...
    But I must admit I m really really really happy that our arshi would meet, they will meet....

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    1. aww *passes kleenex* yes they will meet next chapter :)

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  61. FT-chp 8- Arnav's Trunk

    if in start you make me cry by explaining khushi nightmare about arnav death - i litrely cried on that part,but at the end you bring my smile back on my face by uniting them..

    i m so happy that finally their sepration period us over now.. amazing amazing amazing update tina.. the way you explain every emtions, seriously girl i dont hav words to explain. god bless u..

    waiting for next

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    1. aww thanks hun. yeah the nightmares were very dark for sure but it was to show what likely happened. thankfully next chapter will change things :)

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  62. fateful love - chapter 8
    wow
    how true love transcends all boundaries of time. way to go tina. i now want to read abt their meeting - the passion should rise

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    1. yes it will go up a notch next time ;)

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  63. Fateful Love-08
    Awesome......they are meeting after four years..not only Khushi but I too felt nervous at that..............plz update sooon......
    waiting..

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    1. aww so Arhi are not alone in feeling that way :)

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  64. Fateful Love>>> Chapter 8 Arnav's Trunk

    Di,my tear glands r perfectly fine. But y r u checking it by updting fate mate.
    When i read tis updt,i was wiping my tears.
    Reading the updt,then wiping my tears,then reading,then wiping.
    U r making me cry.
    Poor khushi ,felt sad 4 her.
    Emotional & heart touching updt.
    I dont hav the guts to read it again, bcz i dont want to cry.
    Itz very painful to seperate frm ur love.
    Khushi,u r so strong.
    Im sure tht u wilnt let any harm near arnav.
    Waiting 4 their union.
    Updt sn.
    Eagerly waiting 4 a happywala updt.
    Hope tht i dont need tissue paper for the next updt.

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  65. Just read chapter 8 of Fateful Love.
    I normally read and comment on IF, but doing so here for the first time.
    The letters were lovely. Their words of love were a joy to read.
    Their love for each other changed the time frame and he came to see her early. Hope she can do something to bring him to the present time. Kudos for writing this dtory Tina. Must have required a lot of research. A truly great and entertaining read.

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  66. Dhak dhak....
    Is all I can say. Chapter 8 was awesome. I love all your stories but DH is close to my heart. Keep writing Dr.

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  67. Fatefull love-Omgg..Omggg..arnav is back
    m soooooooooooo happpyyyyy*doin lungi dance*
    M at awwww..seein khushis selfless love fr arnav..its so amazinn..she is crazy..mad...deeply..innocently in love wid him
    She cn do anethn fr him..anethn..its so perfect!!
    Next update is full of romance..cnt wait fr it..jaldi update kari!!

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    1. *doing chamkili dance*
      yes their love is something else in FL, something beyond the norm

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  68. awesome story,. its my 1st comment,. read it in 1 go.. no words to xpress..
    continue soon,. eagerly waiting for next update..
    RS

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  69. Hey Tina...
    Just read Fateful Love ..ch 8
    Loved it...I'm very eager to know how Khshi is going to save him...but will saving him even possible...? If she can how can they still be together...? They r true soulmates...
    Happy to see them together finally ...but for how long...?

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  70. fateful love-

    loved the update....i was keeping my fingers crossed throughout..i just wanted to know once that arnav would be safe...that khushi will find some way....i am sure this will happen for sure..khushi won't let her love die...
    i can't wait to read about them together...finally the wait is over...loved the last scene where u described the transition in the room...after a long long time....
    continue soon

    secret passion

    i so hate this karan...he is the trouble maker truly....all because of him..khushi had to break all ties with her family...but her family is no less too...how can they choose karan over khushi's love....
    i loved the way khushi and arnav stood up for each other....
    beautiful mansion it is...
    can't wait to read the next part./..

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    1. FL--completely right, their love will triumph and their reunion is proof of it :)
      SP--haha everyone hates Karan. someone organized his bbq lolz

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  71. Secret Passion - chapter 18

    In my last comment I wanted to throttle Karan, but now I really want to beat the living daylights out of him

    He manipulated Khushi's family to go against her and Arnav
    Damn but her family is so stupid they would believe a mere neighbour than their own daughter

    And Arnav's family only uses him for the money, they live of his earnings
    They certainly don't love him
    He should just cut off all their money and let them fend for themselves

    the only people that Arnav and Khushi can depend on is themselves

    Good Riddance to the Gupta's and Raizada's, I hope Arnav and Khushi doesn't forgive them so easily

    They will eventually come back crawling to Arnav and Khushi, begging for their forgiveness

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  72. Pls can ur next update be for Fateful Love not anything else. pls wanna see how Khushi and arnav meet

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    1. aww i know, i'd love to but i think some readers haven't read the update yet. i will update FL soon :)

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  73. TINA N SATINA ....S P HMMMM....

    FINALLY HE HAD TO TELL THE MARRIAGE TRUTH

    THIS KARAN IS AN IDIOT GET HIM SHOT

    HER FAMILY ACTED TYPICAL

    THEY TRUSTED AN OUTSIDER MORE THAN THEIR OWN FLESH N BLOOD

    THEY DID NOT GIVE KHUSHI HER DUE KHUSHI

    THEY FORGOT WHAT SHE DID FOR THEM N HOW MUCH SHE LOVES THEM

    I GUESS THEY EITHER ARE NOT AWARE OR CHOSE TO IGNORE

    GARIMA N BUA JI BROKE HER HEART

    THE ONLY SANE PERSON WAS ARNAV THE SUPERMAN ALWAYS ON A

    RESCUE MISSION FOR WIFE JI

    HE HANDLED IT WELL .....NOW

    HE HAD MADE UP HIS MIND LONG AGO ABOUT KHUSHI ...INTERESTING

    THEY STAND BY EACH OTHER THAT IS THE HIGH-LIGHT

    HOPE IT REMAINS LIKE THIS ...THE FAMILY TYPHOON IS ON ITS WAY

    ANOTHER ENTRY ...WO BHI LADKI ...AAILAA KAMINI KAAMINI TO NAHI ??

    TINA I AM HUMBLED AT YOUR CUTE GESTURES OF ACKNOWLEDGEMENT

    NAYA GHAR...NO LOG ..NO FURNITURE ...NO HINDRANCES

    NO SAAS ..NO NANAD ...AHHA AB AYEGA MAZAA



    KKKA ....NAAM HI KAAFI HAI

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    1. agree, arhi handled it very well :) Against all the opposition their love stood firm. and yes no interruptions now ;)

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  74. its realy hurting khushi to get separeted from her family and from same for him....but they don't have other choice.....
    waiting for their married life....
    if-Joarshi

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    1. hey Anusha :) yes, SP is deliberately written very gray, anyone can be the villain ;)

      yeah, love arhi. no one comes close <3

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  76. Brilliant update - Ch 18 SP.... Arnav and Khushi's love is so pure, powerful and passionate that it transcends the physical level, their connection on the spiritual level is almost indescribable. Just love how strong and fiesty Khushi is and how she stands her ground and supports Arnav and fights for their love empahsised in the parts where at breakfast she would not allow her family to insult her husband and when she slaps the slimeball Karan....My opinion on the way they handled the situation is that it was the best for them under the circumstances. They wanted their families blessings and Arnav was willing to follow the customs and traditions for Khushi, however her family made that practically impossible with them being brainwashed by evil Karan. And accusing Arnav of being disrespectful when he was simply straightforward. Considering that Arnav takes care of his family and they are living in his home, they had the audacity to treat him the way that they did. I feel both families never gave them the opportunity to explain their love,or even try to understand their love instead branding it with negativity. Payal instead of being angry should be grateful that Arnav arranged her marriage with Akash! I think that the mystery woman is Dadi, she hates Khushi vehemently but willl have to wait to find out.....Now it is most definitely "them versus the world", I hope that after this tumultous ride they experience only love and togetherness in their married life, eagerly awaiting the next update!! Btw, magnificent pic of their new home:)

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    1. agreed their families reacted quite badly. ArHi thankfully stood firmly with each other--which is just what we wanted to show with the the 'them versus the world' theme ;) better times ahead <3

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  77. Secret Passion>>> Episode 18 ASR's Proposal (to his Wife)

    nw i dont care abt any1. Arshi is together. Karan,i hate u i hate u so much.
    U made them separate them frm their family.
    I hope tht u wil nt separate them.
    New home, alone,romantic atmosphere.
    Wht more needed???
    The woman may be anjali or dadi.
    Mindblowing updt di.
    Cntn sn.

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  78. Fateful luv!! Its juz amazing.... ur a brilliant writer.... an awesome work!!.. em eagerly waiting fa the further updatez!! continue soonn... :) !

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  79. SP ch 18
    What can I say Tina ...when I was just scrolling down the page ...I did feel it was a long update ...but when I was reading it...it felt short...not to miss very very interesting ...intense..ofcourse dramatic...
    What was KARAN thinking...just by persuading Buaji, khushis maasi and maasa he can get Khushi...
    Did he forgot that Khushi loves Arnav... And what's with Garima and n her hatred for Arnav...? Why is she sooo against him...?
    Khushi did so much for Payal n she can't even support her love for Arnav...that's mean...
    I pity buaji ... She was thinking on right lines but got carried away by Karan's words..
    I did guess the lady behind the photos was Dadi but if it is Anajali...it's even worse..
    I'm scared for them....

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      Garima was swayed bc Karan's mother is her very close friend. And she is a staunch arranged marriage believer so she was looking for something neg in Arnav.
      Better times for Arhi coming up!

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  80. secret passion 18

    wow ...just amazing update... that evil karan make it difficult for arnav and khushi..but my strong man arnav take the lead and take her...wait for there life together in there new house .. loved it very much and thanks for amazing stories my dear

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    1. yes, both were very strong :) aww no thanks necessary hun, i love writing and esp on arhi <3

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  81. Loved ur story fateful love. After shameless this one is beyond my understanding. Khushi can change what happened to Arnav im confident. because just in Harry potter how harry and hermoine changed what happened khushi too can. But the other part is the mystry for me how are they to live their lives when they belong to two very different time zones. Just give a hint Tina its unbearable I just read your stories very late because i can never take the suspense in them. God !!!! How am i too while away one week???? Its going to be torment guess even my husband is going to find it difficult to take my mind away from this.... PLS PLS PLS UPDATE ASAP DEAR!!! once again to tell you ur en excellent writer....MIND BLOWING!!!!!

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    1. aww i will update FL soon, and you're right arhi have to find a solution to the time difference but the problem is how? right now neither know but it'll all come together--eventually ;)

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  82. sp 18:
    yep totally not long enough. but i really liked how khushi supported arnav in front of karan and her family. glad to see her standing ip to them finally.

    fatefull love:
    cant wait for the next part.

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  83. Fateful Love - waiting along with Khushi for Arnav to come back...Hopefully u will make him return soon ;) after reading this story I can hardly even remember the other stories...

    as my X-Mas present from u, please Hit Karan on the head with a frying pan & lock him up in the cellar ...

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  84. all ur FFs are mind-blowing,,,,i love each one of ur ffs...i cant even say which among them is my favorite since i love each and every update of all the ffs very much...ur an xtra-ordinary writer....waiting for the next updates..

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  85. SP -chp 18-ASR's Proposal

    20 stiches are less for karan, he should gets stiches allover his body but here is not only his mistek their family also needs to understand both of them but nevermind like Arnav always says that " them versus world" its true.. but i m happy that they are there for eachother, i loved the way they support each other & stand for their love..and its better to live alone rather than a family who dont understand them, & anyways they dont need anyone just for each other..

    and u r right its short update..
    but seriously we cant get enough of your stories.. brilliant update ..

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    1. yes arhi stood up for their love and neither backed down :) better times for the two ahead..

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  86. Loved all your stories.each & every update of ur story is special to me.
    You are an amazing writer, reading ur works for quiet some time now. I don't see ant repetition in any of your stories, hats off to you for pulling this off. I'm intrigued, fascinated & dazzled by your works TINA. Keep rocking dear :)

    IF- diakumar17

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  87. FL ch8 - omg u had to stop there! wairung 4 next chapter!!

    SP ch 18 I still wamt to strangle karan! lol but arshi r together everyone else don't matter!

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      and SP--no interruptions now for ArHi ;)

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  88. all your work is fantastic :)
    kparidhi (IF)

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  89. Please update baby, hold on and fateful love - eagerly awaiting!

    SB

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    1. Omg read chapter 7 - *screams* aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Absolutley amazing!!!!! Not going to spoil it for others but so worth the wait!!!!!! Brilliantly written, funny, just amazing! Going to read it 10 times before you'd next update! A fab end to my weekend! Thank you!!!!!!!

      SB

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    2. Sorry forgot to say, my comment was in response to Baby, Hold On - Chapter 7!

      Fab!

      SB

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  90. Loved bho chapter 7...their chemistry is mind blowing n their banter is super cute!!

    Cheers
    What_the

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  91. Baby Hold On - Chapter 7

    Whoa Mr Raizada has become very flirty
    they certainly can't keep their hands off each other
    Ah finally they kiss
    No TOAD thank goodness

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  92. BHO- Damn I love it! That movie is my absolute favorite! And finally our leads are in each others arms thanking the French and what not! The best part? No toad! Can't get any better
    DH- time to prove love is it? Just cant Wait!

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  93. bho- finally they admitted that they liked each other and kissed. double bonus. now can't wait to see hot they get rid of butter shyam.

    sp and fl- update soon.

    dh- I want to knock arnav's head for not understanding khushi's dilemma. I hope all of their misunderstandings get over soon.

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  94. Hope you had a great thanksgiving weekend. I did and special thanks to chapter 7 of bho. My a kiss! But now i am waiting for FL Arnav is back and I cant wait to read whats next. Please update soon.

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  95. BHO - Chapter 7....I had a huge smile plastered across my face as I read the chapter, funny and witty as always but sweet and tender too....Loved the stolen moments between the two :) he told her she looks beautiful and he is calling her Khushi more often :) And they have acknowledged their feelings for each other....Yippeee, they kissed!!!! And what a kiss! They could teach the French a thing or two....Mr Sexy and Sushi turning up the heat, excited about the next chapter :)

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  96. another mindblowing, sexy update of BHO.

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  97. BHO is better with each update, my fav...

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  98. O.m.g...!! Bho part-7 was amazing tina...iam speechless...iam lovng d story specialy d naughty arnav here..i wish we cld hv sn him lyk ds n d show..lkng fwd fr d nxt update...pls update soon yar.:-)

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  99. BHO 7
    Hey Tina...
    Loved the kiss...loved Arnav's confession....
    Sooo cute
    Can't wait for the things to get more spice up...
    Not to forget mission toad...

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  100. BHO-chp 7- Not So Fast

    yeyy... finally they kiss.. i m so happy how their relationship is growing with every step. theres wow moment throughout the chp which keep my smile on my face there's fun moment , sweet moment, romance everything..

    loved it very much.. waiting for nxt

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  101. Part 7 of BHO - Loved it to bits darling. The second kiss was perfect. The heat between them -OH MY MY!!! Can't wait for Mission Toad to start :D

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  102. DH - Chapter 19 - Am sorry for both K and A. His anger and mistrust is justified - she has a lot to prove actually. When she said she was going to break the engagement, my mind was saying 'too little too late now' as this is what she should have said the first time.

    But STUD SERVICE??? Arnav should be slapped for that. One thing he does know is that K isn't like that :(

    God - what will it take to convince Arnav now? The teasers are giving me nightmares

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  103. Fateful Love Chap 8 - Amazing awesome!!
    LOVED ASR in Baby Hold On!!
    God Bless U!!

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  104. Waiting for Fateful Love!!
    IF

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