Sunday, January 11, 2015

Secret Passion Mega Update Now Up!

SECRET PASSION MEGA UPDATE NOW UP
I hope this really long update makes up for some of the delay. I almost split it into two chapters but what the heck, it is Arnav's birthday after all so enjoy!
I would have posted Baby Hold On's update today along with Secret Passion but the SP update is so long and well, so important, that I don't want anything to take away from that.
BHO will be posted this Thursday, Jan 15th sometime in the evening (US Eastern time).
So are you ready to find out the mystery behind Mr. Sexy's 3 month long disappearance? I know Sushi is... Check back soon.
...Arnav's long-held secret will be revealed in just a few days…
Special Shout out to Sib for the "Quote of the Month" suggestion, I think that's a great way to remember stories that have ended. Feel free everyone to leave suggestions on the comment thread. First one is Sib's nomination from Storm Within...
ps. Really, really glad to see the great response to Enemy Lines--it will begin once BHO and DH conclude within the next month or two. SP is designed to be a long-running soap opera saga so it will not be ending any time soon :)

pss. The current comment thread is getting very crowded so please use this post as Comment Thread #8. I will reply in a day or two to everyone on Thread #7.
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COMMENT THREAD #8

We've crossed almost 200 comments again, so the last comment thread has been moved to the  'Archives' page. Please leave all new comments here (with the Title of my FF and Chapter Number). This will help with page loading issues and also increase security so this blog can remain public for honest readers.
I appreciate all the feedback everyone.
--Tina
ps. instead of replying with individual posts, I'll be posting one giant reply with my response to each person in order of date and time of the comment. After a round of updates, look for it and I'm sure you'll notice it. Happy reading!

157 comments:

  1. Omggg! You need to update SP again ASAP. This wait will kill us.
    Amazing update.. loved how Khushi planned for his day.
    I'm sure Khushi will handle the Nicole situation well too.. Nicole needs to get as bad as she gives. :|
    Continue super soon. Pleaseeee!

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  2. Just read SP chapter 29 and I must say that the MAHA update was indeed a treat. I loved it and thank you for that. �� Loved the fact that khushi went to such lengths to make Arnav's birthday special. The interview with Nicole seemed really interesting and can't wait for khushi to give it back to Nicole. Hope khushi realizes that Nicole is lying and believes Arnav. Eagerly looking forward to the next update. ☺️-- ship13(IF)

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  3. SP chapter 29 was awesome & well writing as always, i just hope khushi will believe Arnav & put Nicole in her place. please update soon SP chapter 30 :)
    Rose

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  4. nice story please update soon

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  5. hi tina, why is nicole sabotaging anrav? what will be khushi's answer to nicole. will the family understand their love and support them. please bring anjali from her illusion world and make her to see and realize what is happening around her life. she should be the matured one to stand and support arnav in difficulties not the other way around. how many more difficulties will he endure in his life? i hope Khushi and Arnav stand with eachother thick and thin in all their problems and face the world. please dont separate them. and why does payal hate khushi so much. how will arnav be able to revial about payal to khushi. will she believe him. the way problems are going on in their life, i think it will be very difficult. its a live interview so payal must be very happy seeing khushi's condition. how will they come out of this problem?

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  6. Hey TINA

    It was an awesome long update of SP!!!
    I really hope that Anjali would be able to see he true colors of her husband and how he is taking her to his advantage! Hmm I wonder who was the person who watched them, was it Nani?
    Finally his birthday somewhat went the way which most of the readers wanted was Arshi loveable and romantic passion moments, though there was some misunderstanding between them at first. Love the idea of Khushi kidnapping him to have some time with him on his birthday. The place was super!!!
    I was happy that Arshi cleared their misunderstandings and now came another problem by Nicole... I wish Khushi will trust Arnav and not believe that evil and jealous Nicole's unwanted accusations, who is trying to create problems in their life
    Can't wait for the next update!!!
    Pls don't keep the suspense long...
    Thanks for the pm ;)

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  7. Hi Tina episode 29 of SP was absolutely amazing. I was worried that arnav would be upset through out his bday but i loved how khushi convinced him. I hope u are not plaaning on separating them after all those hurdles they have faced i want them to behappy and believe obe another. The title of the next episode seems positive and i hope khushi gives a very very hard time to nicole and her belief in arnav does not less a tad bit. Eagerly waiting for the next update and thank u for not ending SP early.

    Nivi21

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  8. Nice update....please continue soon

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  9. Update was amazing... But I want this kind of lengthy update twice in a week... Ohh it would be fun... :p
    P.s . u r an amazing writer.. :)

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  10. Wow!!!!!! So good yaar ur keeping us on the edge that bitchy gpst !!!! Hope their love survives this test also .... Wonderful chapter as always ... U R THE BEST . . u have kept the story and its theme so centered e end after so long ... Kudos yaar

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  11. Hi again tina... I couldnt control myself so posting another comment... Poor arnav he felt so bad... But let me day one thing I seriously thought that there will be some 50 shades stuff here . but he was so hurt by khushi and what a way to mend ways ... Khushi is a genius. And nothing could surpass her birthday gift though .... Such beautiful chapter with emotions... When u said 2 of us stories will come to an end I thought it will be BHO and SP but thank god it will continue. Even though I like the other stories SP is my favourite.. U gave me peace .... Eagerly awaiting the future episodes... And lastly MMMMUUUUUUAAAAAHHHHH for the best writer of arshi stories u r the best

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  12. amazing update!!! pls.. no MU between them.. continue soon... :) :) :)

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  13. TINA!
    Hello back... Hope you had a nice holiday....
    now the update:
    Loved the way the emotions are portrayed early on in the chapter... Arnav's hurt and Khushi's dilemma... I guess Khushi is being her natural self... all self doubting and its also the pregnancy hormones running wild... Thank god for Khushi's weirdly amazing idea of kidnapping Arnav, the birthday was an absolute treat to read...
    phew...Arnav just barely got away without telling the truth about Payal to Khushi... <- that sentence sounds weird but anyway moving on... Payal should really get that she stands no chance...
    Anjali!...can anyone be anymore delusional? I wonder who was the shadow in the dark, though... and now coming to the end of the chapter...
    Tina *whine* <-- yes i am whining right now...because the chapter was going soo great until Nicole James chose to make an appearance... that B**th Troll...excuse me for that... but seriously...she ruined everything... though i have hopes and faith in on Khushi, Arnav and their love and trust... hopefully she won't be able to do much damage... you won't let her...

    I was sad to know that your stories are coming to end but am so happy its not SP because though i love BHO and DH... Sp is definitely my favourite...
    would be eagerly waiting for the BHO update on Thursday...
    ok this is getting lng so i'll take my leave...but thanks again for taking your time to write and share your stories with us... looking forward to and year like last field with lots of ArShi stories and updates...
    ps: thanks for the PM... :D

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  14. Just read SP. Lovely update. The way khushi kidnapped arnav was wonderful. Happy that they did get over their misunderstanding. But at the end what nicole said wouled it affect tear relationship. I have a feeling that it would not. Hope my feeling becomes true. Please do update fast. Because I can't take the sus pence.

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  15. Loved SP. What an update. Hope nicole doesn't create rift between arnav and khushi. I think it will be fine. Please do update soon. So that the us pence is over with.


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  16. The drama!! That's what SP is all abt and what feeds of my satisfaction reading your master pieces!! That was an absolute cliff hanger! CNt wait for the rest to be updated tii.. Pl update All of them soon :(

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  17. Hi Tina..I loved the recent update of SP. Im a great fan of all ur stories. My fav though was, Fateful love. But im simply in love with all the FFs here. U r an awesum writer. Eagerly waiting for next update of Baby, Hold On. Anddddd also, ur new FF, Enemy Lines seems really interesting. Pls start it asap.

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  18. hi Tina!!
    wish you a very happy new year once again.

    thanks for the best surprise of the year..
    'Enemy Lines' that was such a treat..cant wait to this journey to start. thanks once again & sorry for coming here late..

    coming to SP chp 29

    that was brilliant.
    a lot of things happen in this part. from their little misunderstanding to their make up.
    from one villian Payal to the new Nicole James.. all were just fantastic.
    i know that Nicole is not just trying to creat difference between Arnav & Khushi but want to seprate them, (may be i m wrong but with her attitude gives me this feeling..) but she dont know that they love each other deeply, & Khushi trust Arnav more than herself, which nobody can break.. though i know it will hurt her but she'll answer Nicoles every damn question & save AR reputation, Arnav's & to top it all to their Love..

    waiting for the nxt eagerly..

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  19. very nice update. there mu got clear.khushi kidnap arnav. there chemistry. there love. i hate payal dadi and Shyam very much. garima finally accepted arnav. that Nicole is a witch. i hope khushi answer her well. continue soon. take care..

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  20. (Welcome back! I hope you had a head-clearing vacation!)

    SP 29 – ‘His Birthday’ felt like my birthday. :)

    I loved their opening conversation. Arnav was honest, brutally so, but Khushi very much needed to hear that she is indeed different from his other women. With his wealth, his looks – he could have chosen anyone, but he chose HER because she’s KHUSHI, it’s as simple and as complicated as that.

    It also made me realize something. This version of A & K has never shied away from difficult conversations. They lay it out, have at it, and move on. Their relationship comes out stronger, their bond more secure after being tested by fire. That it’s hot, goes without saying ;)

    Anjali and Shyam were deliciously insane in this update. I read each line with fascinated horror. And the ultimate reveal of him painting a bull’s eye over her naked flesh… damn. (Who’s left at the house to witness this scene?)

    Your jab at the kidnapping scene is much appreciated LOL
    This kidnapper was way more effective, the hideout well chosen, and the results much more… pleasurable ;)

    Sexy cunning Mr. Raizada is my favorite. How wicked of him to seduce his wife while sister-in-law was on the line. I love it!

    You left us on such a dramatic note! Nicole’s attempt at payback is pathetic and laughable. On live national television, really? Someone must have interned for the Jerry Springer Show. :D

    Thank you for the fabulous update. It was yummy, scandalous and left me wanting more, i.e. a typical SP update. :) I will be anticipating ‘An Eventful Party’.

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  21. BHO update was intense. Almost made me cry. Loved the update..

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  22. hi tina

    happy new year...sorry for late commenting.. i read all updates in one go ..hehe
    i didnt knew u will be ending DH nd BHO soon..i will be mising it soo much...ok nw for update...
    DH i loved the oasis..though they have finally untied after soo long..arnav is soo much in tension due to nk truth ..i hope he reveal himself before too late..anyways khusi wont leave him ever...but if someone else told shewil be hurt...

    SP what can i say ..awsm is short...arnav doing all detective for payal is great decision..since khushi wont accept it soon..her birthday suprise turned bad for a moment ..i loved how arnav told he couldnt even think of doing that with her...he was hurt ..but i loved how khushi tried to make up everything...even that kidnap was fun..and finally birthday was awsm so was gift of baby showing presence...now we have more pyshcos ..payal will remember same sound during khusi aptt days and fume more..shyaam is added psycho now..dunno who saw..nani or khan?? that nicole is such a big drama and liar ..attention seeker..i m sure khushi will handle this jerk well..

    BHO..was awsm and emotional...finally after soo much of running and chasing and all mus the truth is out...gosh arnav suffered real hell for sure...that is the reason he safe guard khushi first as he didnt knew he will survive...but who is spy betwen them who is leaking everything..can it be really lavanya?? i hope not..that man isreally dangerous..i was so emotional when finally truth was out and when khusi saw his marks ..the way arnav finally broke down in front of her...it was really heart touching.....dunno what khusi is planinng now to end this all...i m curious now

    Aruarshi

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  23. Hi Tina,

    BHO update was fantastic. Just loved it. I am completely in love with this story. It has humor, passion, mystery and drama. Brilliant writing. You are really a fabulous, gifted writer and your stories are really amazing TREATS for us readers. Thank you for it !! �� Coming back to the update, I loved the fact that khushi finally got to know how much Arnav loves her and how he had been tortured. Loved her response that she too starts crying when she realizes the truth. The mystery deepens that who is the mole. Maybe lavanya !! I must say khushi is very smart that she thought that the room might have been bugged and mentioned it to Arnav in the shower. Loved the closeness of arnav and khushi. Really really looking forward to the next update. ��
    - ship13 (IF)

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  24. Hi again Tina...
    BHO update was everything you promised it would be...
    I would never have thought that what happened was this... there were man speculations but nothing close to what actually happened... the update was really intense... but I'm glad everything's cleared between ArShi now...

    Aman & Sheena... well well well... but that's so cute... but is Lavanya really the spy... or is there still something amiss...

    But all in all the update was trul amazing and now looking forward to DH and SP update...
    thanks for the PM

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  25. Hi tina di....this is my first comment..but i have read all your work. Every single ff ss and os is just awesome... Specially baby hold on and secrete passion..i am feeling sad that i can't read desert heat from start...but i loved all your work...and i promise i will comment on each chapter from now on..thank you- Radhika

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  26. sp n bho

    awesome updates loved both of them

    sida(IF)

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  27. wonderful chapters. cant wait to read desert heat. was very eager to read that....

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  28. Hi Tina BHO was everything u promised finally the truth is out but it was really heart wrenching to know that Mr.Sexy had gone through hell those three months. Finally khushi knows how much arnav loves her. Waiting for the next update i hope she doesnt do anything stupid so that she doesnt risk their lives... well well aman nd sheene were cute though.... nd who is dat mole?? Could it b lavanya really i hope not but whoever it is has to pay hell once Mr.Sexy comes to know about it.

    Nivi21

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  29. Awesome chapter of BHO!
    Finally the truth on why Arnav went missing was out... Felt bad for Arnav that he sacrifice himself to save the innocent people. But he was a strong person!
    Thanks for the pm;)

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  30. just read the maha update of secret passion and i must say one word

    MARVELOUS

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  31. ohh just read bho. can't believe arnav have to go through so much. feeling really sad for arnav. and the hate for those people. continued soon. waiting eagerly. take care.

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  32. ohh just read bho. can't believe arnav have to go through so much. feeling really sad for arnav. and the hate for those people. continued soon. waiting eagerly. take care.

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  33. ohh just read bho. can't believe arnav have to go through so much. feeling really sad for arnav. and the hate for those people. continued soon. waiting eagerly. take care.

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  34. OMG wat a fantastic update... both BOH and SP
    just awesome....
    SP: tht was so cute...Khushi kidnapping Arnav for his birthday..... and wat is this Nicole up tooooo...y ..y now...when everything was going on so great btw them atleast.... n with that payal in the picture too

    BOH: FInally the secret abt where arnav was is out...omg it was so painful to read the parts where u described what he went through...and how aman saved himmm.....for some reason i think shyam works for NK....just a guess...i dont knw y though

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  35. Awesome chapters!
    So sad about Arnav's truth :( I didn't think it would be this sad..
    I also still don't trust Aman, nor do i really trust khushi's best friend at this point.. something seems off
    SP was as hot and steamy as ever! absolutely loved it! I especially liked the part where Arnav deliberately makes Payal jealous, i hope her truth is revealed to khushi soon... and also want to find out the truth about her that they shared with her previous fiancé... does she have a mental illness?
    and I really hope Khushi doesn't believe Nicole's words! and also makes her look like a fool on TV!!!
    so excited for the next chapters :)

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  36. New reader alert!!!

    Finally caught up with SP so far of all your stories on arshi. And let me tell and I'm sure up you already know, that you have a pandora box of beautiful arshi stories. This is one couple I can't seem to get enough off even now. So finding your stories and especially this blog was a haven for me.

    For SP all I have to say is I'm in awe of the love, trust and passion you weeve around arshi and between them. With a twist of Payal being the tormented one here than a usual Shyam I came along in most stories.

    Even though Anjali, Dadi, Shyam are all twisted characters in there own peculiar way, Payal is the most dangerous here for obvious reasons that no one knows her ute face.

    So far I'm enchanted with this story and wanna read more so will be following this blog and story from now on.

    And now I've to make a pick among your others stories for me to pick and start reading from.

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  37. first of all thanx for the double update.they were grt.as for the ending part i know arnav will save khushi.i hope akash and payal will be out of shantivan .

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  38. Oh my!!!double whammy!
    I hate all the freaking raizadas of shantivan now
    Excluding Nani
    Hate aj
    Hate Nicole
    Hate lavanya tho I think she wanted to tell arnav abt payal in DL. Maybe she is ms.x?
    Freaking hate shyaam too
    But I absolutely loved the updates
    Who pushed khushi? Aj maybe? Coz I don't think payal would risk that.
    I'm so glad u r continuing tho.
    Take care

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  39. OMGG!! My head is exploding right now. So literally, there's no one but Nani who's the only positive thing in Shaantivan. I really hope Arnav's trust in Aman remains intact otherwise it would be too much for him to take. As it as things have made him so skeptical.
    DL - was the worst kind of thing ever. I hope places like this with so much darkness cease to exist one day. I'm trying to feel sad for Payal since she has Akash as her husband but then dont they say - what goes around comes back around? She has brought this on herself.
    What baffles me is the ArHi are surrounded by so many vile and greedy monsters! Shyam-Anji-Akash-Payal-Dadi-AJ-Nicole even Lavanaya and you know who else. Everyone has some or the other selfish reason. I just hope these people are out of ArHi's life soon.

    As for Khushi, I'm hoping that she'll be fine. She's pregnant and she has so many shocking revelations on the way that am really feeling bad for her. She doesn't deserve all this at all.
    Is that Payal or AJ who pushed her? Waiting for your update.

    Also thank you for continuing with this.

    Lots of love

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  40. OH MY GOD....where the hell did that come from.... u got a really devious mind tina.... it was mind blowing,,, and u had to just stop at the climax.... :( hope nothing happens to Khushi and the babies... plssss.... and hope she realises the truth soon,,,

    great update ...keep rocking

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  41. Hello i very recently came upon your blog..and i must tell since then i have been hooked to your stories. All are very interesting. And I really felt bad that someone stole ur stories.. But its great that u didnt allow that to be a set back. Now coming back to the updates. My fav story is undoubtedly Secret passion. And seriously what twists! Best part was how khushi gave it back to nicole in style! Totally unimaginable twist was Aj and Akash..goodness! He has totally betrayed Arnav.. And i really pity arnav..he s really surrounded by betrayers...except for his khushi.. Hope he save khushi in time...but seriously u left us at the lurch...cliff hanger.. Hope u update quickly! U r a wonderful writer..

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  42. Hey just finished reading SP again and it was just awesome ur writing is absolutely a treat for me. I loved every bit of it. I hope u'll update soon :))

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  43. i love it....it was great....i cant tell you how much i love this update....i cant wait to see what happen next.....update soon....please try to update the other stories too....

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  44. Hi tina I thought you would quit writing. But to my relief I found SP updated I am so Dam happy seeing that update thank u so very much for posting it. And for the update true to your word it really was a roller coaster ride. I was on the edge through out the update. I hope khushi and the babies are fine and arnav turns to ASR so that he can beat that person black and blue for hurting his pregnant wife. I am hoping to read BHO ASAP. Bye

    Nivi21

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  45. what an updates of sp. just wonderful. i can't find words to describe it. there r so many twists an turns in the two updates. arnav n khuhsi are attacked from all sides. and finally that attack on khushi. hope arnav can save her well in time. i never thought that akash would go against arnav big time. is he influenced by payal and his mother. i liked it when arnav asked akash to get out of his house. u always finish the sp upadte with suspence. please do update it soon.

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  46. Finally a SP's update , Thank you , an amazing update :)

    Rose

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  47. wow Tina, the updates were as you promised... A total roller-coaster... But thank you sooo much for continuing... Payal is mental, i tell u... gosh... I felt bile rise up my throat reading about her and Akash... total made for eachother... Nicole got as good as she gave... I was so thrilled to see Mrs. ASR in action... but the week long separation was heart-wrenching... poor ASR... but as we knew they found their way back to eachother... AJ is in the picture now... and i think i also know who Master Horatio is...and Mrs.C...seriously? Payal is a psychopath... NK helping things out was a breather... and he saw Shaym and Anjali... poor thing...
    Akash...that ungrateful b**t**d... God.. i felt like killing him... Khushi in the pool... Arnav will save her... no doubt.. and then he will ass...of a lot of them...
    waiting for DH and BHO now... update soon... also...dont worry about people not reading your work in the future... I for one am never going to stop stalking your blog... xx

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  48. SP part 30&31

    Nicole deserved a few more slaps

    Crap Payal is sick
    hmmm i think the dom maybe AJ or Shyam

    Dammit Akash is really a coward, he saw AJ manhandling Khushi and he just stood there
    he is lucky Arnav only gave him a few punches and threw him out
    CRAP did Payal get enough guts to push Khushi in the pool?

    ASR will kill her

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  49. Day before yesterday I ws gng to post asking u whether u r fine or not n here I c double dhamaka. Thanks fr dat..

    A lot of revelations here.. Nicole coming back khushi furious n payal omg.. mrs. C is fr chote.. she s really delusional n crazy. Finally arnav gt a glimpse of it. The man is it AJ? Frst I thought aman wen arnav questiond his loyalty but latr while AJ talking to khushi of dominance n discipline I think its him.. Did AJ n akash started business to bring down arnav n khushi. Akash is fool his wife needs asr n his partner khushi. If payal pulled khushi she will b knwing soon abt her intentions.

    Welcome back n dnt think dat u have to stop writing arshi ff because no one readz it.. at least a bunch of ppl stil read it.. wil b waiting fr ur new ff.. update wen u feel so n please dnt stop writing bcs of stupid brain less jerks..

    Brkn angl

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  50. after a long time...
    nice update!!!
    very eager to read the next one..... :) :)
    continue sooo soon... :) :) :) :)

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  51. I love the updates of SP .......Please continue soon

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  52. SP- The double update had me absolutely glued to the laptop. The twists!! They're not twists, they should be called "super-twists" or something along those terms. The update were simply fantastic. Arnav's confession about Nicole, the week-long tension, the reconciliation!! The party and the black saree also deserve special mention. And not to forget the changes in Akash... talk about twists. Whoa!! I can't say I expected him to condone any form of BDSM but you definitely have a logical basis for him being jealous of Arnav. It makes an incredible amount of sense!!
    I loved how Arnav gave them 20 mins to get out of HIS house. Everyone seemed to have forgotten certain essential facts.
    The last bit, obviously has me pining for the next update. Khushi was pushed by Payal!! Brilliant update!!! Also, I loved how Khushi stood up against Nicole and proved Nicole wrong!!
    Special mention: The DL portions must have been a real challenge to portray... you managed it wonderfully. The entire scenario had me completely creeped out but to be honest, the way you handled the content was pretty impressive. As a writer, you handled those moments and images with a great deal of caution and have managed to aesthetically present something that is essentially innately gruesome and revolting.

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  53. Thank you for taking the time to write again after such an awful episode. Really missed your thoughts. As far as the updates go, they were simply "Superb" !!! You really made my day by giving me a double treat with two updates of SP !! :) Absolutely loved it and thoroughly enjoyed it. You are such a mesmerizing writer that I can never get enough of your writings !! Seriously I am addicted to your stories and thank you for my addiction !! :)
    Coming to the updates, loved the fact that khushi gave a fitting reply to that awful Nicole and that finally both khushi and Arnav made up. I really love NK, he is so cute and is the perfect friend to khushi. He brings a smile to my face. Also liked the fact that Arnav finally got to know the extent of deviousness of payal when she said ASR in the video. Seriously both payal and Akash are loathsome and you brought it out beautifully. Really looking forward to the next update. Can't wait !! :) :)

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  54. Now that was amazing, u gave up Double update thank u so much...
    Aakash is seriously a coward, I hate him for not coming for khushi...
    & u asked if something stood out, ya there is something which caught my attention in dl the senior member with whom Payal was involved, I have a doubt that it may be shyam because Arnav fad a feeling that he could recognise the voice

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  55. So happy to see Double update of SP
    Both the chapter held a lot of surprises...
    Hate the part on Arnav and Nicole...
    And the DL part was kind of gross...
    Too many tensions for ARSHI and the number of people troubling is increasing... Firstly it was Payal and now it's AJ and somewhat Aakash also
    Aakash was seriously a pain and he had the nerve to say nothing was wrong when Khushi was suffering.
    Like the part where Arnav confronted him back and also ask to vacate the house. Good job Arnav
    I guess Payal took the opportunity to push Khushi down in the pool... Hopefully nothing happens to her and their babies
    Continue soon!!!
    Thanks for the pm;)

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  56. SP 30 & 31
    Wow what a twist.. Payal is way too sick that I have imagined.. Akash's character shocked me.. All the sweetness n politeness gone .. He seems more like frustrated resentful teenager trying to get back and prove he is more capable and intelligent and shrewd businessman than ArnAv but all it shows is does not know B of business.
    AJ .. I guess he was the man with Payal in the ring @ DL..
    Now that you have told that we are no way near the ending of this story and new twists shades n news characters entering.. I only request you to take your time but please don't leave the story without finishing ...

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  57. hi Tina,

    you really make our day for sure, just thanks is not enough for giving this update after a very horrible phase..
    i really appreciate & respect & love your dedication towards writing & keeping ArShi alive still..

    & i m sure with time & after compeleting DH & BHO, you will definetely come with a solution for the continuing Enemy Lines & other story..
    & like now, there will be always alot of readers to read Arshi stories..

    & now coming to an update.
    SP Epi 30 & 31

    with double update there were a lot of double dhamaka i must say & i really enjoyed reading that..
    Khushi handle that Nicole very well.. & Arnav's revealation of his gruesome past with Nicole & AJ (one more in Arshi versus the world)
    as Arnavs pov i clearly understand why he didnt tell her about this chapter of his life which he had closed before, & as Khushi she is also not wrong on her place but i was not expecting this week long sepration between them..
    but really happy that they made it now..

    i m also suspecting that when Arnav was watching that video & finding that voice familier & his visit at DL with AJ & his desperssion to get the premium card, with all these point i think that man with Payal was AJ..

    & Akash really shocked everyone out her with his attitude, he is the one who have respected other & well mannered person, now he is so desperate for getting success in his life that he had gone ahead & make a sick & disgusted person as his partner & to top it all that very same person is the biggest enemy of his Bhai who have done a lot for him..
    & i came to think of it that he might be wearing a mask of sweet & politeness till now & his real face come infront of everyone now. but the way Arnav handle him & the way he gave him the timelimit to leave Shantivan was very bravo & really proud of him.

    & in all these someone take the opportunity & pushed Khushi in the pool & i m guessing that person to be Payal or AJ

    & i hope nothing go wrong with Khushi & the kids.
    ps: pls ignore the mistakes..

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  58. Hi Tina,
    First if all love u again for posting the story..... I was going through ur site everyday for the past month just to see if there are any updates... Now that u have I can get some peace :-p ...
    Now to business . that bitch payal !!!!!!! Oh how I want her to strangle her.. But I am really happy that now asr knows the truth abt her.sometimes I feel angry at khushi can't she listen to him ???? What if something happens to her? What will we do ? Anyways now I seriously hope that arnav teaches hiss good for nothing brother a lesson and punishes payal also and that the story goes for a long long time.....
    Thanks a lot for this wonderful story again.. Keep up the good work.... Mmmmmmuuuuuaaaaahhhhhh

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  59. its soo gud to have u back:D
    AWESOME updates of SP.

    sida (if)

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  60. SP- wow the double update was a blast..so many things happened... oh no khushi... payal finally pused her??? oh n the guy with payal in DL ...was it AJ???
    OH i hope Aman is not betraying ... Arnav trusts him....oh god Akash is gone made... all this horrible ppl around arshi.... i hope Arnav is able to save all 3 ...biting my fingernails awaiting the next update
    n hope no one copies this story again... good to see u back!! :)

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  61. really missed it.....
    Payal s twisted with a capital T..and the master horatio is t aj??? and how did payal knew about ararnav's past. if she was not totally psychopathic she couls have made a spy r something. .aj calls arnav mr. c and payal calls herself mrs.c..ccoincidental? ??
    and akash he may not attack a person as such but he will watch if t gains him.

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  62. Hi I'm twinkle I'm a new reader I read secret passion and baby hold on and
    Must say they are amazing but I want to read your ff desert heat so can
    You pls repost chapters 1-13 pls
    Your ffs are unique and thrilling its a treat to read them

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  63. Please post the next part of BHO...I am dying to read it...!!!!

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  64. I just started reading your blog after seeing the Sarun interview with Sanaya. It's the best thing that's happened since IPKKND stopped airing! Please don't stop writing! I know you must have been disappointed about people taking your work, but I hope you know that your work is much appreciated and I'm eagerly awaiting your update!!! I can't wait for the update for SP and BHO!!! So excited! Best of luck and keep writing because you're AMAZING! You keep the spark of Arshi alive even after so many years! I hope Barun and Sanaya work together again soon! :)

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  65. Hey jus now read bho 27.. Still the black sheep goes disguised... Cliff hanger again..bt nevertheless am not complaining..another chapter of this wonderful story.. U have managed to heighten my curiosity.. Well brilliant writing..plsss dnt make us wait!!

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  66. Outstanding
    i loved their insatiable passion.
    The respective thoughts of arshi really made me overwhelming....it shows their immense love for each other.
    It was so heart touching to see arnav promising the baby tht he will protect both of them.
    I was first got feared abt who broke into their hiding place.
    Glad tht it was arnav.
    It was indeed a treat to read abt arshi reunion after been separated.
    Now i suspect Sheena to be tht spy. Why did she want to go outside? How can she fell in love with aman within a short span of time?
    I highly have doubts now.
    Then tht escape scene....OMG like watching an action thriller.
    Khushi,my brave girl awww she stood for her arnav.
    Finally they reached a safest place.
    It will be intolerable for both of them to think abt being separated forever.
    In the end Tina Di will make sure tht they r together will their 4-5 children (i wont mind if they want more-Arshi and their own nursery school....Awwww )
    waiting for the next chapter.

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  67. Sorry forgot to mention the chapter.
    BHO Chapter 27 : Break In

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  68. BHO 27...was amazing...as the arshi reunite and with no secrets now it felt so awesome...their love passion and his love and determination to be together now is heartouching...all that bunker thing and then how khusi made herself in front to save arnav was just outstanding...thankfullly all escaped..but arnav is ryt this matter is more than what seems..his own men are against them now..to hell with that toad and secret man...and new place for hideout seem be good for now..and khusi was true this where they belong..with each other... i m happy for sheena and aman too...i hope they are able to find maady bua and escape safely ..they are married in every sense now ..all they need is happy family with safety ..

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  69. chapter 27 of BHO is SO great, I can't express how much I loved and enjoyed it, all I can say is WOW!!, your writing is wonderful, keep iton

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  70. BHO 27 Amazin update!!really love the intense passion they share
    Y O Y r dey after Arnav nw.......his own colleagues....a job dat he so dedicated to....unbelievable!! thankfully dey hav Aman n Sheena...hopefully dey won't be found

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  71. BHO part 27
    Hmmm things are getting worse
    who is after Arnav and why is Khushi so important?

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  72. wonderful update.. cant wait to read the next update "bait".

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  73. BHO...
    Beautiful beautiful update...loved the way arnav and khushi are literally inseparable now....I loved the way they both hv took the matters and problems head on.....the way khushi stood in front of arnav to protect him was amazing. ....I am sure that God will help them both and keep them together always. ..
    And that butterball and his both will pay for this trouble...arnav will make them pay....my hero...hehe...
    So arnav wants a little sushi? ? Awwwwwiiee...so cute. .can't wait to read about that in detail....I hope u write something on the baby scene too....
    Continue soon

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  74. BHO27....this update was just like a scene from an action movie... its just wow..
    is there some detector attached to aman or arnav tht their every move is known by tht bad guy????

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  75. BHO chp 27

    that so intense part..
    the longing, the crave, the love, the desperession to be as close as possible after knowing the horrible reason for their sepration was so intense that we can imagine with thier passionate moment..

    after facing alot till now, they still facing problems,
    till now it was butterball & his boss & now that the officers also include in that list of creating problem in Arshi's life..
    but i m sure that they will soon solves all the problem & stay together without searching secrate place to hide with any fear..

    waiting for the nxt where we can found about the 'Mole'...

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  76. BHO chp 27

    that so intense part..
    the longing, the crave, the love, the desperession to be as close as possible after knowing the horrible reason for their sepration was so intense that we can imagine with thier passionate moment..

    after facing alot till now, they still facing problems,
    till now it was butterball & his boss & now that the officers also include in that list of creating problem in Arshi's life..
    but i m sure that they will soon solves all the problem & stay together without searching secrate place to hide with any fear..

    waiting for the nxt where we can found about the 'Mole'...

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  77. Superb update, absolutely thrilling. :) Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It was the perfect blend of mystery, action and of course romance. This story has really been an exciting adventure. Loved the fact that khushi never left Arnav's side even when the killers were on to him; the romance, the passion of Arnav and khushi was fantastic; being chased by bad guys and then ditching them was indeed a high !! Am not being able to guess who the mole is... Really looking forward to the next update. Brilliant writing. :)

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  78. The suspense and thrill in SP and BHO is just killing me. I so wish you would get more time to write and update regularly! After reading the updates my mind just goes haywire nowadays ....too much suspense lol!

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  79. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NO NO NO NO NO NO NO WHAT THE - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    ZAYN JUST LEFT 1D I DONT DESERVE THIS OMG. Arnav!!!!!!!! I knew Sheena, that stupid little - damn.

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  80. Oooh my goodness...its sheena like many suspectef..where did that aman run off when most required??? He was the one who created the whole mess.. Or wait was sheena planning this whole thing when n that cottage ?? Maybe coz there s none to protect khushi then..so if thats d case.then thanks to aman arnav knew abt the whole thing..bt this time no precap??? And butterball was caught..bt my dear poor arshi..how r they gonna fight back??? Eagerly awaiting...brilliant and a thrilling chapter...arshi's passion s always toooo magical!

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  81. Oh my God, this chapter was absolutely stunning !!!! Tina, you were just brilliant, and that is an understatement !!! I could visualize every little detail. Arnav and khushi's love, passion, the ball and the betrayal by sheena left me speechless. Poor Arnav got shot by sheena !! What a terrible friend sheena turned out it be. I hope that aman can come and help Arnav so that they can get khushi back. I wonder who is desai. This update was full of thrills and I just can't wait to read more. Please please update soon. Thoroughly enjoyed it !! :) - ship13(IF)

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  82. Hi tina what an amazing update. It was a real roller coaster update as u promised us. Sheena turned out to be mole. Poor arnav is shot I hope arshi are not seperated. I hope aman comes to arnav's rescue very soon. And finally finally the idiot butter ball is caught that's the only happy thing. Waiting for next update. And if possible please post BHO as next update. Loved the update completely. I am head over heels with your writings.
    Nivi21

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  83. OMG!! Amazing update.......Sheena, unbelievable......just hope Arnav's ok n Khushi is saved on time from dat disgusting man......poor Aman he is the only one who can help dem now.

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  84. OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    CLIFF HANGER for our poor hearts TINA :(
    But that was a superb update. YOU had mentioned earlier that you were planning for taking writing classes but here you are the perfectionist.
    You have a mind blowing skill of taking your readers along with you on the roads of twists and turns. Really a Roller coaster ride

    After reading chapter 27, i thought of sheena and lavanya playing with Arnav and Khushi.

    Can't wait too long for the next update. Please do update as soon as possible.

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  85. bho

    awesome update

    sida(if)

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  86. wow you updated BHO ( when i saw this i was thinking is this a dream or reality lol ) thanks a lot .
    Rose.

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  87. BHO part 29
    crap Arnav was shot
    Damn had a niggling feeling that Sheena was somehow involved

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  88. Awesome update on chapter 28 of BHO
    At last Shyam was caught but unfortunately, Khushi was trapped by another person...
    And Sheena shot Arnav...
    Eagerly waiting to read the next chapter!
    Hopefully Arnav would be able to save khushi and his child from them!!!
    Thanks for the pm ;)

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  89. I have a feeling that Lavanya is going to save these all in BHO

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  90. omg..... i so hate sheena right now. i could kill her if she was in front of me....

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  91. BHO 27 & 28: wow just wow.... arnav shot...oh no....oh n sheena??? yyyyyy ...y did she say she had to??? where is aman?? oh i cant wait to read further... oh tht butter monster.... glad that at least he is in custody....hope tht is true though....
    pls update soon...cant wait enough for the next update

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  92. for sp update as usual awesome

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  93. BHO chp 28

    sorry for being late..
    i have missed this part last week but now i read it..

    thats really amazing part..
    from start to end there's bait only..
    i really loved their plan to catch that butterball..
    he is so easy to trap, i really salute to Claudia to handle that cheap person & sicknening acts..
    but the fruitfull result of that he have caught by them..
    but even after that, everything & situation is not normal instead getting worst..
    some time back i even doubt Sheena, she actually shot Arnav thats really shocking, wondering what might have force her to do that but whatever the reason behind her this move, i really heat her..

    after butter ball, his boss is also behind Khushi, thats another shocking surprise after Sheena..

    & after Arnav been shot, i m really worried for Khushi now..

    pls Mr. Sexy get up now, Mrs Sexy really needs you..

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  94. Tina, it has been many days. Please update SP, DH or BHO soon. Eagerly waiting ..

    Pinkly (IF Id)

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  95. please update SP ?

    Rose

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  96. BHO PART 28... indeed a ride ....khusi had very well adjusted to his life...but all thru this running and chasing gave me indeed rush...hehe..bait i knew wil be khusi and in end what happenned was what arnav feared most...i m curious who forced sheena ?? is that aman ?? or new someone...well desai is another toad in their life who is after khusi for same purpose...i know even then arnav will manage it ...the dance thing was sweet as arnav did sensed her well...

    waiting for next.. but pls update desert heat..i just love that story too

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  97. Thanks for the note Tina. Take your time. No, no... Not too much please :-). Thanks for taking time to update in your busy schedule. Looking forward to this weekend for the next chapters

    Pinkly (IF Id)

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  98. All the stories are going mindblowing!!!
    And BHO took my breath away!!!

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  99. Plz plz update BHO really really soon...
    Waiting for it like hell!!!

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  100. what an update it was, mixed of everything love,passion, fury and most of all payal's hate.i can't wait to read payal's reaction on knowing khushi's wellbeing.eagerly waiting for the next.

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  101. i love all your stories....i cant wait to see what happen next in all your stories...the update of SP it was amazing.....i hope khushi believe's arnav....i wait the others stories......update soon....

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  102. SP chapter 32
    I could just strangle Payal, she a monster
    Thank God Khushi and the babies are safe
    Arnav will destroy her for this

    Can't wait for the stupid Gupta's and clueless Akash to pull their heads out of their behinds and find out about the REAL Payal
    WHAT THE ! Who the heck is Rita?
    Now Payal has sealed her faith, she is DEAD!!!

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  103. SP Chapter 32
    O.M.G
    Have I said I hate payal?
    If I have, I'll reiterate that fact.
    I freaking hate that woman n the Gupta family except maybe bababuji n that Karan n the raizadas except of course asr n Mrs asr
    Rita is a name or some abbreviation? RITA....hmmm
    Mystery mystery
    I love nk aman n khan...sigh
    N...just a lil thing when payals truth comes out hope you let us all in the story to personally strngle that woman
    I'm being violent :D
    Waiting for more...
    Take care

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  104. Now one more Rita. How many of such idiots are there to spoil Arshi's bond. I do hope Payal is only having an illusion. An illusion that would back fire on her. But you know what, I hope her laptop is in a retrievable shape. Its a goldmine of info on her.

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  105. Hii Tina
    I was eagerly waiting fr sp update n I everyday checked it so lyk everyday when I was checking today n I saw that u have updated I really started dancing haha
    see u make me crazy
    I read it n after reading I culd say only one thing that update was FABULOUS n FANTASTIC n MINDBLOWING eagerly waiting fr another chap plz don't make us wait dis tym u r fab literally

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  106. Hi tina it's been so long nevertheless the wait was worthy. And now coming to the update I seriously hate that payal gupta raizada ugh. I freaking hate that woman and the chicken head guptas and karan for that matter not to forget that idiot akash. Thank god that khushi and the babies are fine and I seriously hope that khushi believes arnav. And now who is this Rita??? Good I hope payal fails in all her plans and arshi would be together as they said once is us versus the world. Waiting for the updates now and I hope we don by have wait thoda long for the next updates. Thank you tina for writing these beautiful stories.
    nivi21
    Nivi

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  107. SP Episode 32
    It was awesome and felt so glad to read after a long time!!!
    Phew nothing happen to Khushi and the twins
    Hahaha Khuhsi was crying because she cannot have ahem with her husband :D
    Wonder how is Khushi going to react?
    And who is this Rita now? Pls don't let it be another ex of Arnav's
    Another cliffhanger...
    Pls do continue soon!
    Good to see u back Tina
    Thanks for the pm;)

    IF: Alai123

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  108. amazing update!!
    continue soon...
    who the hell is this RITA??
    hoping that there wont be any MU between arnav n kushi..
    have to leave this site for few months i hope u will not delete this story after completing it.
    plzz.. dont delete any of ur presnt stories..
    continue soon....

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  109. wow wonderful update after soo long of a wait..... and please dont make anymore negatives for arnav and khushi... and plz make sure arnav has the upper hand in all the schemes against payal now.... i so hate payal...if possible just kill her abruptly in an accident... hehehe just kidding... but make sure she or matter a fact no one has upper hand on arnav.... it was so cute that khushi was so sad coz she cant have sex with arnav...that was hilarious...all in all a wonderful update

    cant wait to read the next update....and bho and desert heat toooo......

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  110. Payal is truly evil. I have a doubt on Akash. Is he truly dumb? The man at DL seems like Shyam.gosh it is a hell of a ride! So many questions but only your updates can answer. Enjoyed each part. Brilliant

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  111. BHO
    I never thought sheena would backstab. Khushi was very hilarious sometimes. Awesome updates.

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  112. Just read SP. wonderful have no words to describe it so many twists in it hope khushi believes arnav and i feel that whatever arnav said khushi had not listened to it i dont want any misunderstanding between arnav and khushi i loved the way arnav treated akash and payal and lived it that NK is also on atnavs side waiting for the next update eagerly please do update soon

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  113. This update was totally worth the wait. I absolutely loved it from the first word to the last word. You are such a brilliant writer that it's an awesome treat to read your works !! :) loved the fact that despite the horrible fall khushi and the babies survived. It was heart wrenching to read the pain of arnav and khushi when khushi was moving in and out of consciousness and wasn't sure if she would make it !! Was really glad that arnav finally gave it to payal and said that she hated khushi and was behind khushi's fall. Wonder who is Rita and what hold does payal think she can have on ASR with it. I hope whatever it is, arnav comes clean in front of khushi so that payal doesn't have any scope to creat disharmony and misunderstanding between arnav and khushi !! The story is becoming really interesting and can't wait to read more !! :)

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  114. Wow awesum update!! Payal is truly a devil incarnate!! Love the way Arnav just charges towards her to literally murder her for all the deception she
    displayed towards her family so she shud nt be surprised wen strikes right back
    @ her! Just hope things go well for Khushi and Arnav afta knwin her sister is her
    biggest enemy!!

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  115. First things first... an update! yeay! thank u.. thank u... thank u.. TINA!
    and thanks 4 the PM.. :D
    Now the update:
    SP- Thank God and U that Khushi and the Babies are fine... i was actually so worried.. poor Arnav 4 what he went through and Khushi... love her 4 her courage... God knows she is going to need it... the no s*x conversation was sooo cute... but I am sure ASR will find a way... he always does... and he told her about Payal... I just hope khushi believes him... he really needs her rights now... with every one against ArShi... its literally "Them Versus the World"
    Glad that Arnav has NK and Khan on his side to help him...

    ASR does what he says and Payash are out of Shantivan... I was VERY delighted to know that they burnt all of Payal's stuff... Gosh that woman is absolutely disgusting and her soul is twisted beyond repair... However I wasn't entirely comfaortable with Arshi moving to Shantivan... I kinda feel that place is corrupted and filthy...lolz...weird I knw... but I think it also makes sense...like Arnav said: its time they confront everything head on... no more playing safe... its time that everyone pays for their sins...

    Akash... God I hate him soo much... that Coward, what a spineless and ungrateful git... its like he thinks Payal is a goddess or something...the epitome of perfection, she cant do nothing wrong, how blind can he be, he's been living with her 4 a year, yet not a clue... but then she's such an actress... and then there Karan... so much like Akash... they are kinda made 4 each other types... I freaking hate him too... "kidnap Khushi from Arnav" yeah right, in your dreams!...

    Not forgetting Anjali and Dadi... did not expect anything better from them... delusional fools... ironically...they both are inseparable... and they both need psychiatric help!...

    And and and, last but in no means the least... we have our own Jiji... PAYAL... she's such a vile b*t*h, absolutely despicable and did I mention twisted... she's taken her obsession to a totally whole new level... I was so happy when ASR went ahead and grabbed her throat... i wish she was dead already... but atleast she's afraid now... and when one's afraid they tend to defend and make mistakes, she's bound to leave some clue or evidence now... hopefully because who the hell is RITA now? First AJ and Nicole and now this Rita... gosh the surprises just keep coming... i hope when Arnav sees the text he clears it with Khushi... before its too late...

    All in all, it was an awesome update... and now waiting 4 DH and BHO... update as soon as u can...

    Love u, ur work, and ArShi....

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  116. Ooops... sorry about the essay... :D

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  117. yey i m so happy that you updated..
    thank you so much for this Tina..

    SP epi 32
    in this epi everything was there drama, action (a kind of), revelation, sadness, emotional, little sweet & so on...

    i just hate Payal soooo much that i wanted to kill her very badly..
    thank god that Khushi & the twins are safe..
    Guptas & Akash are so dumb & blind that even after telling Payals real face they didnt belive it & why they blieve coz who revealed everything was none another than Aranv whome they hate so much & doubt they even going to that any soon..
    but happy that Akash & Payal are thrown out from Shantivan but i think Arnav should have kept payals laptop considering to get proof but nevermind he will definetly getthat any way..

    after all that tention full moment i really smile when Khushi said that they cant have s*x thats really cute & very sweet..
    & now that payal came with another ASR past RITA, if its true i m affraid that what will happen now & if he was hidding this from everyone including Khushi, that means it will affect their relationwhen its reveal..

    hope everything goes well & before payal he should make aware Khushi about that Rita..
    & hope she will belive him about payal..

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  118. Khushi and the twins are safe..
    Being such a stalker, doesn't Payal know no one trumps ASR? Blackmailing him is not so wise on her part...
    Lets see who this RITA is...

    Now, the update was very nice... you covered so much...
    Khushi's fear, Arnav's helplessness, Payal's craziness... everything was penned down the best...

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  119. it's really amazing update, i hope u update the next one very soon wating

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  120. payal should be in a mental asylum, she s like a smaller version of Dr lecter. who is rita and if hasn't shared it with anyone hw does she knows this.this.her stalking capacity is that good??? if she was not this deranged she could have been a spy or something. has payal tried to kill anyone before kushi. is thst what she said she has done something like tjis before. .
    who ever rita is I hope she won't break arshi not even temporarily. .

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  121. Hi again Tina! another update... wow! and DH chapters 1-5....lucky day, indeed... thank you!
    Love the beginning of this... but lets talk on chap 29... woah! i can't say i did not see it coming... Arnav had it, ever since he lied to her... but well, it still hurt... Now we all know Khushi would not exactly leave him or anything, she loves him too much, but she'll be really angry, cause she is hurt and feels betrayed... and Arnav would not let her leave even if she wanted to... and he will move heaven and earth to manaofy her... Either Khushi goes the Maya way or is understanding... we will know... but either way it will be fun to read...

    Since u said we're nearing the end, I guess we'll be seeing more of Shaym and Akash...

    Loved the beginning of the chapter, Taj's soo cute, Aman n Maya... would they ever change... they are still fighting but its cute... U said about recasting Aman... how about Gurmeet Choudhary... Drashti and him made quite a pair in 'Geet'... Zara and Imran need to talk and Zara needs to tell him the truth about herself...

    thats about it for now... waiting not so patiently for BHO update... and the next chapter of SP...

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    1. You said the first few chapters might help understand chap-29, but reading the first five has just made me greedy for more.... you said u'd wish u could someday repost the whole of DH ... i wish that day comes reeeaaaally soon.... thanks Tina, awesome work u got there... xx

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  122. Hey !
    I am a new reader
    I read ur stories ,they r amazing
    But I can't read desert heat because of missing chapters ,I got it that u removed them for security ,but now since u reposted 1st 5 chapters ,can u repost others too!
    Plssssssss������������
    And also mind games first chapters plssss��������
    And is shameless available anywhere for reading ?
    I have heard and seen so much about this ff ,that I really want to read it
    Sorry for demanding so much ,but pls try

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  123. Hey I'm amira039.303 on IF. I just reread the first 5 chapters on DH and I just realised how much I'd missed it! Please please please repost the other ones too! I understand why you had to take them off but I just missed this story so much! I hope you can repost the other chapters of DH back soon... Thank you so much for reposting the first 5 chapters - it was wonderful to reread it!

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  124. DH chapter 29
    Wow what a hot honeymoon!

    Damn I feel so sorry for Imran and Zara, they both love each other but cant express it

    Crap I knew Arnav's silence about NK was gonna come back to bite him

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  125. What a surprise!! first 5 chapters...I chanced on your site later and always lamented missing on CH 1-13 of DH and Vol 1 of mind games...you took me by surprise today! I loved the first 5 chapters, once you re-post 6-13, I am going to read 6 to end again...all of it would make much more sense this time I am sure! Also, please re-post mind games missing part some day...!!

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  126. Awesome update of DH chapter 29
    Hot and romantic honeymoon Arshi had
    Felt bad for Zara and Imran. I wish Zara could have told him and clear his misunderstanding where they could have expressed their love for each other...
    So now Khushi knew about NK being Armav's cousin and slapped him...
    Wonder what is going to happen next!
    Maybe Khushi might or should give Arnav a chance to explain
    Pls don't make Khushi to be separated from Arnav
    Looking forward for the next update
    Thanks for the first 5 chapters of DH that's amazing surprise
    Thanks for the pm ;)

    IF: Alai123

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  127. Can you update a teaser of SP, is Rita's story will separate them (temporarily!) or will khushi believe Arnav about payal ?? pretty please :)
    Rose

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  128. Hey Tina!

    It's been quite a while since FL. I've read most of your stories too after FL. Gotta tell you, I'm amazed by the way your mind works. Such prowess and finesse in the concepts and your writing, I'm all in awe of your creative blessed genius mind. Is there any genre that you don't excel in? Touchwood! :)

    As of now, I'm confused as to which of your amazing stories is my most favorite. It's difficult to decide, really. ;)

    DH -

    I remember reading its earlier parts when your site was safe and protected from the evilness of plagiarists. I'd to go to India for vacation and I couldn't keep track of your stories there. When I'd returned, I realized DH's initial chapters were taken down. It'd upset me so much and I wanted to personally strangle those people who selfishly hurt writers without having an ounce of guilt before doing so. Well, I was glad I'd already read all the chapters but I love to read and re-read my favorite stories. I keep going back to the finished ones too and relive the parts I enjoyed most. I see the same has happened with FL. This had my blood boiling, I tell you. I'm not a writer but the thought and energy that goes while I simply comment on the stories isn't even a fraction of when writers create their work.. I can barely imagine the extent of effort and time put into creating such beautifully composed stories. I'm glad you didn't let such idiots deter your spirits. Bravo! :)

    Now that the secret is out, I wonder how Arnav's nightmare turns out. I'm sure Khushi is more hurt and angered by his lack of trust in her. Than the fact that he hid the truth from her. Zara and Imran.. Sigh! When will these two realize it's high time they confessed their true feelings to one another? Get back together already!

    Waiting for what's to unfold in the next chapters. I love you for taking time out of such a hectic schedule and writing for us. Thank you! <3

    SP:

    I'll soon comment in detail about the entire opera.. As of now, I'll only comment on the last update. I'm entirely sick of this poor excuse of a sister that is Payal. Initially, I couldn't quite fathom and grasp the evilness she had hidden within her. But now, even her name makes me cringe with disgust. Such a low level she's stooped to that she fantasizes her brother in law. May she rot in the darkest pits of hell, for that alone!

    I'm really glad that the babies are safe. I knew Khushi would be safe but I had my apprehensions for the twins. I'm so glad they're good and healthy. Thank you, Hun!

    How indifferent and cold can one be? Towards their own daughter in law/sister in law? Dadi and Anjali need to open their eyes and look with their hearts. Incredibly feeble minded and selfishly foolish women, I tell you!

    Even amidst all the chaos, the dumb head is worried about her so called souvenirs that'd be destroyed? Just what clay is this woman made of? Get rid of her from this story, already. And I'd be really grateful if at least Khushi is made aware of Payal's true colors. And soon, at that. Please? I'm tired of the ping pong ways of the Gupta family. Aka Garima and Buaji. One minute they're howling abuses at Arnav, the other they've mellowed. And when something happens, they're back to square one. I only sometimes think that they're feeling what they're being shown. They're fooled by the circumstances and their folly is that then dint reals is Payal's ugly nature. The only one concerned about Khushi's health and safety, is Shashi. I hope he realizes Payal's evil intentions and helps Garima understand the same, too.

    Please update soon, darling. Take good care of yourself. I know you love Arshi and your stories way too much but please don't neglect your health. We will wait for you with complete faith that you'll not abandon any of your stories. So, if and when you take time to update, know that we all understand. :)

    Much Love! Hugs! <3

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  129. Hi Tina,

    Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for resposting the first five chapters of DH. I had never read them so it was such a fabulous surprise to get the chance to read them. I just love DH and right from the beginning to it chapter 29, every instance has been brilliant and WOW. Just loved the way you introduced arnav and khushi to each other. This story has everything - romance, passion, thrill, danger !! I also have to say that you have taken the characters of arnav and khushi to another level and have immortalized them. Your penmanship is mesmerizing, addicting and is an absolute pleasure reading !! :) :) Chapter 29 was fantastic. Hope khushi is able to look beyond Arnav's attempt to hide the fact that NK is his cousin and can actually hear out his reasoning for it. Really looking forward to reading more of DH; please please post the rest of the earlier chapters of DH when you get a chance. Thank you. :) :)

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  130. Awesum updt of DH :)
    really wish zara and imran unite again. :(
    n i am sooo Happy u reposted 1st 5 chapters.! really wish u will repost other parts too.! :)
    n precap will arnav take khushi to his nani.?!
    do updt soon dear. :)
    really excited fr next part. :)

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  131. hi tina

    thank u sooo much for reposting DH first five chapters as i never got to read that and i hope u repost its other parts too...and regarding new update it was awsm....the way arshi bonded is beautiful...the honeymoon was really awsm...zara and imran had to talk seriusly...and as khusi told her..she loves imran and so does he so they need to confess now..its too much..aman and maya were cute...but in the end khusi was realy heartbroken..she loved him and even thrown ring in front of him but he never told truth..so she was right on her part of his lacking trust on her love...well arnav need little punishmnt...and he need to tell everthing ...
    excited for next...i just love DH :)

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  132. hey i am new to this blog...couldn't find desert heat chapters 6-13...:(...could you plz send me the link?pretty plz....:)

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  133. DH:
    i think arnav deserves that slap he has to come over that fear, as khushi is already his no body can claim her his other than him, continue soon.....................it's been a long time

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  134. wow DH
    after a long loooong time..
    that was so awsome..
    their spent time alone was so passionate, so hot & so loving..
    & Khushi became little bold with that & left the hesitation & shyness which she was feeling for spending passionate moment in broad day light thanks to Arnav off course..
    & suggest to shift their bad out, really loved this side of her;-)

    & far from them Maya as usaul taking revenge from Aman & postponing marriage date ahead every time he asked but given solution also to reduce the gape, really sweet..
    & at one side feeling really bad for Imran & Zara hope they also came together..
    & now after their returning & Arnav going back on trails(& i really appriciate the way he punished that Shyams man & left him for suffuring more) & in the mean while Zara telling Khushi about that Nidhant singhs truth & being him Arnavs cousin..
    i m little worried now & to make it more worse she slapped Arnav..
    i really hope & wish that she defintly take revenge from him & making him suffer little BUT first understand his pov also..
    waiting for next..

    ps: thank you sooo much for putting first 5 chapters back..

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  135. Renee from IF.

    Sorry I had been away for a while.

    But finally catched up on SP till the latest update.

    This is getting murkier.
    Payal is some real twisted psycho.
    if it weren't for khushi she might be rotting in Lucknow.

    This women has been really truly obsessed by ASR.

    I love how you have written this story.
    honestly I am out of words for every story of yours.

    Payal is a sick woman and lusting for Asr forever.
    The heights she has gone is beyond imagination.

    However what's surprising is why didn't Arnav not order to check her belongings for evidence.
    Karan is another psycho.
    What kind of cheap people these Guptas are.
    how can they encourage another man who's pursuing their daughter even after being married and having kids now.
    Is this their culture or tradition.

    I wish Arnav has thrown that in their faces. That's they are family who has no qualms about chasing after married people.


    I wish he has done this before. Unfortunately if he wasn't willing to go to Thailand initially why didn't he take khushi along.
    I somehow feel khushi is a bit too naive didn't Arnav warn her .
    not only did she go to RM but she also went out alone after NK told her to be there.

    I do not know what is gonna happen next.

    Khushi and Arnav are literally against the world.
    I think khushi has done for than enough for her adopted family.
    she should have put her foot down when it comes to her family constantly disrespecting her marriage and her and shipping up her with karan.

    Even now if she doesn't use her mind Arnav should put a stop. It's either him or her family of that's what it will take for khushi to get it through her head.

    If Arnav has left everyone and even she did in the past then she has to do it again for her little family.

    Now what is it that payal knows and a certain Rita.

    Whatever it is I m sure Khan or PI could have cracked on the website payal has created and her id as Mrs c.
    Once they have her she goes to jail and then she can do whatever it is with Rita or whatever she's holding on to.

    I hope Arnav and khushi don't separate now that Arnav has said her name but so not prove it due to her threat it's very likely the Gupta n their notorious gang will play with Chicago's mind

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  136. Hey I just came across your ff desert heat on IF. It's an amazing ff and was wondering where I could find chapter 6-13? It's a really interesting concept and I love historical romance and arnav khushi are my favourite tv couple!! Please let me know. Thanks 😄

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  137. Hi Tina..
    loved reading about the hot romantic honeymoon of Arnav-Khusi. And even Arnav knew it would end well for him if and when khusi comes to know about Nidhant/NK And all his fears seems to be coming true.... Khusi is angry, hurt and rightly so.Lets wait and see how it pans out for Arnav.
    Thanks for reposting 1-5 chapters of DH.... as this is the first story of yours which I read and I still remember it evoking such clear pictures of desert when I read it. Have always loved reading your work and would love to read mindgames again
    Yet to catchup with SP... will do so asap :)
    poonam
    IF paaskhanna

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  138. Hey tina
    I m a new reader of ur fiction. I have to say u absolutly rock. Secret passion is one of the best stories i have read. I have sent u a buddy request on IF forums too and i hope u will accept it. I cant wait to read more of ur stories.

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  139. Hi Tina!! I have been reading ur blogs for quite some time now.. nd I have commented before as well.. I have completed the Mind Games and currently I am reading Sceret Passion And Baby, Hold On.. Please update them soon. Waiting eagerly for their updates
    Also I wanted to know where can I find Chapters 6-13 of Desert Heat. Please do tell me as I want to read this fiction as well of urs. Thanks for writing so beautifully..
    Hope u do reply..
    Aakanksha Mohanty

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  140. hai tina. i have been reading ur blog for some time ....... i have completed reading all the readings and waiting for ur updates.... ur writings are awesome ..... secret passion is our best. all the best and i hope you will come up with more beautiful stories

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  141. hi tina i am one of your story reader and must tell u each and every story of urs is awesome nd i should tell u this cause i came back probably after a year because life is being hectic and can not take a break nd after coming back i saw that fateful love is being deleted and i felt very sad about it nd also the reason behind it .though i love all the ffs this one is very special for me in which love has no bounds and even god has to re write their fate.i hope u repost the story again waiting for it and all the best for ur present and future writings.

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  142. woww...tina di loved the 33 and 34 parts of secret passion...really damn good....
    but didn't tell who was rita.....waiting for next ..plz di update soon and also the 6-12 parts of desert heat....

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  143. di plz update soon...waiting waiting and waiting

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  144. plz update todayyy...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  145. di plz update 11-13 parts of desert heat...
    i so wanna read them ....
    i can't wait..
    plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  146. update soon di..
    waitinggggg

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  147. wowww..finally you updated tina di...
    and that too SP...awesomeeee....
    mar jawannn...
    it was hot pasiionate..everything...
    but what at end...dead????

    noo diiii....

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  148. SP - chapter 36

    it was super awesome!!...i feel pity on payal and good for nothing karan....
    the ending is shocking?!!...anjali dead?!!! not sure what feelings I am having now- happy/sad/confused may be??

    -xyzsm

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  149. di plz update next part od desert heat plzzz.....especially chapter from 11 to 13.............plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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  150. diiii where are you??(cryinggg)

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  151. when will v get d nxt update for secret passion n dessert heat???

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  152. Hey Tina....
    I am a new readeer....Just started reading your stories on monday....n oh my goddd.....u r THE BEST.....u just make the stories come alive....i read baby hold on and secret passion....n both are awesome....i was going to read desert heat next but read your note that u would not be continuing it.....i will desperately wait for your ebook and read it then....please please please dont stop writing....the arshi fans are still out there who r waiting for your posts....n there are whole category of new fans like me who r just discovering you...we all love you...

    Love
    Sonali

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  153. Hey Tina....
    I am a new readeer....Just started reading your stories on monday....n oh my goddd.....u r THE BEST.....u just make the stories come alive....i read baby hold on and secret passion....n both are awesome....i was going to read desert heat next but read your note that u would not be continuing it.....i will desperately wait for your ebook and read it then....please please please dont stop writing....the arshi fans are still out there who r waiting for your posts....n there are whole category of new fans like me who r just discovering you...we all love you...

    Love
    Sonali

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