Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Comment Thread #6

5.5.2014 Comment Thread #6
We've crossed almost 200 comments again. So I've replied to all the old comments and moved those to 'Archives' page. Please leave all new comments here (with the Title of my FF and Chapter Number). This will help with page loading issues and also increase security so this blog can remain public for honest readers.
I appreciate all the feedback everyone.
--Tina
ps. instead of replying individually in this thread, I'll be posting one giant reply to each person in order of date and time. After a round of updates, look for it and I'm sure you'll notice it.

205 comments:

  1. Hav been waitin for ur updates since long........ checking ur blog every now and then. Thank God ur updating 2moro.... Btw, ur stories are fabtastic!!!!

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  2. can't wait for the next update

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  3. was there a one shot that followed mind games 2?

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  4. wow,,,,,wow,,,,,,2 updates ,
    cnat wait 2 read them.

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  5. Yay 2 updates can't wait for them :D

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  6. Hi Tina, i really appreciate that you take time out of your busy schedule to write such wonderful stories for us. i check the blog every two days for new updates with fingers crossed and cant wait for tomorrow.

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  7. Secret passion chap-23
    All the payers are now in the open. Anjali and Shyam seem to be perverts while Payal is in a league of her own.
    I'm loving it.

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  8. Secret passion and baby hold on

    Wonderful update . Eagerly waiting for the next

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  9. SP
    As alaways lovd the update.. Their passion, their chemistry, their love is alaways unique..
    I hope their wont any bad news about khushi's pregnency..

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  10. Wow. . Both was indeed a hot n sizzling update. Was checking ur page every hour to know whether u updated. Y can't u use twitter. Just asking. No offence dear.
    Brkn angl

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  11. Wow! So hot nd sizzling..
    Lovd it..
    Arnav's all surprise is amazing..
    Finaly they cnfessd their love nd arnav's proposal, its wow!
    Cnt wait for nxt part..

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  12. Phew!!! Finally two maha updates.... OMG finally Mr.Sexy nd Sushi confessed love.... nd SP as always was hot and sensuous....

    Nivi21

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  13. SP n BHO
    Awesome updates
    Sida(IF)

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  14. Baby Hold On - ch 16 Tonight

    whoa Mr Sexy proposed to Mrs Sexy and even made her his

    Secret Passion ch 23 Guilty
    God! Shyam is so sleazy and Anjali is just mentally imbalanced
    Damn can't wait for them to find out that Payal is the one trying to kill Khushi
    I believed Payal is in love with Arnav, that is why she hates Khushi so much
    Hmm Mr. Raizada certainly can't resist Mrs Raizada

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  15. SP 23
    Anjali seems as much twisted as Shyam... He manipulate s people for lust n money,...and Anjali for Control n Sympathy... Is there more to Anjali...story...?
    But what's wrong with Payal...? Why does she hate her Khushi sooo much... ?
    Why is it that the Shantivan is like Mental Asylum...? All lunatics and Psychopaths ...
    How is Payal going to be exposed...?
    Now what's going yo be with the baby...?
    Waiting for teaser..

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  16. BHO- was amazing!
    the update was truly blushworthy....
    Their confessions of love and ASR's proposal was so romantic...
    Mr. Sexy and Mrs. Sexy... wow
    will wait for the next chapter...

    SP- was.... well i dont know... there was so many emotions going on while reading this update...I was confused with Anjali's behavior, disgusted and loathing Shyam , hated and felt like killing Payal...grrrhh...and banging my head against the wall seeing Khushi behaving all "professionally" ,the Sexy, Stubborn Wife knows very well that Mr. Raizada couldn't stay away, yet...I so miss their lunch hour adventures... ;)
    well I believe my guess was right! It has everything to do with Arnav...Payal hates Khushi... Is it because she's jealous, because Khushi being the adopted one got more importance, then it was because of her Payal's first wedding was called off, and lastly when finally got married in Raizada family, Khushi falls in love with The Arnav Singh Raizada, Payal's jethji... and I think Payal's in love with her jethji or maybe its just some stupid obsession....?
    well Raizada mansion is just full of lunatics and psychopaths... its more like a mental asylum! BUt when and how are they going to find out the truth???
    I just hope Baby Raizada is fine ,healthy and safe...
    waiting for the teaser....

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  17. Thank for the updates dear. .. hope everything is alright with khushi and baby and about papal. .. is she want area. .? The way you portray kitchen scene where arnav khushi and payal were... I got the feeling..... anyways loved it......

    and about baby hold on.... gosh she got the best and unforgettable gift on her birthday. .. got proposal and then share the moment with your lover... just hope they they'll be together forever......

    love ya
    Neha aka Nea aka Neag

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    1. Sorry for mistake.. on second line.. its payal not papal and it's arnav not area.... my phone auto spelled it.... gosh it's hard to write comment via phone..... sorry again

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  18. Hi tina aanya here
    I am not new to your blog but was not commenting.
    And I am damm sure that you know this that what you write cannot be expressed in words....how amazingly well you potray all the arshi emotions, their love, passion and everything else.
    Just wanted to say that I love you equally as I do to arshi or sarun.
    Tina since you know that ispkkd has ended a long back but still all its fans are as crazy as they were when it started with its magic.
    Dear you know that how many of sarun fans wanted them to be together even in real life But that didn't happened as barun and sanaya are with their own spouses.
    See I really and truelly respect their personal lives but it's just that I can't get over this fact that now at least we can't see arnav and khushi together forget about barun and sanaya
    Tina pleseeeeee this is my heartiest and deepest request to you to please write a story on sarun and not arshi.
    Let their fans imagine them together happily married at least in your story.
    Please think about this and reply as soon as possible and I hope that you will surely make my thid dream come true and will bring back our sarun our magical and stunning and wonderful and beautiful sarun.
    Only you can do this tina, only you can bring sanaya and barun together in their real life be it in your story only.
    Pleaseeeeeee tina bring us sarun back with the same offscreen masti of idpkkd cast , barun and akshay's bromance with more of romance love and passion.....
    Pleaseee tina I beg you for this
    Hope to see your reply soon
    Love you but I love sarun a little more. ..
    Byeee and take care

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  19. BHO
    so much expressive. Can't help but share their happiness.

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  20. SP: awesome update. The behavior of Anjali seems weird Luckily Khushi and Arnav moved to guest room to sleep. Payal is so evil Khushi just escaped for getting killed even though unknowingly. Wonder what is Payal's motive to kill Khushi...

    BOH: amazing update. So wonderful on how Arnav planned his surprise. Finally they have confessed and became one that's awesome.

    Thanks for the pm and 2 wonderful updates :D

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  21. His home's name should be ASHANTIVAN. Its more apt. God psychiatric wards are more peaceful than that. Anjali s acting no surprises der I love her as a manipulative villain.
    Wonder what's the story of payal??? Ignored childhood, jealous y???

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  22. i always heard so much about you and your writing, but never got a chance to read..... today finally i am lucky enough to start..... and i read Fateful love in one go..... this is AWESOME..... i m in love with this story...... i really dont know what to say or how to say..... i smiled..... cried....... got anxious.... even prayed for them while reading...... this is way too brilliant...... looking forward to read the next chapter already... and also ur other works too.....

    Nishu

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  23. Chapter 23 of Secret Passion was simply superb --- sexy Arshi aside, I'm mesmerized by how well you tapped into the disturbing aspects of Anajli's nature. The emotional manipulation she utilizes in controlling her surrounding, particularly Arnav was a treat to read. And OMFG please take a bow for writing in the scene of Shyam joining them in bed - I was so mentally disturbed by it, especially how Arnav handled it. Applause to Khushi for her plain speaking. I'm a mass of nervous excited energy - can't wait for the next update!

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    1. Almost missed your comment, I guess you commented while I was replying to the others :) Anyways, Anjali and Payal were never fully utilized in the show IMO so I'm trying to make that happen here. I try to include stuff that hasn't been done ever before--like Shyam in bed with arshi o.O (if it fits the storyline of course). :) More soon!

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  24. Vatsala: Thanks! :)

    Anonymous: Updates up now!

    Anonymous: No there isn't a OS that follows Mind Games 2 but there is a crossover OS that incorporates a bit of it.

    Meena Gul: Hope you like them

    Fauziyya: Thanks for the message, means a lot.

    Amina Mahmood: So what did you think??

    Smita Leslie: Yes, things are finally coming out in SP though lots of twists and turns ahead ;)

    Slowsun93: Glad you liked them!

    Sanghamitra: Glad you liked the chapter, spoiler being posted shortly for SP. And BHO was finally bit more hot ;)

    Broken Angel: I'm already on IF, FB, and here so twitter would be too much. There is a follow option on the blog, just feed in your email address and blogger automatically sends you notifications when there is an update. Hope that helps.

    Nivi21: Glad you liked both. SP is almost always sensual ;)

    Sida: Thanks! :)

    Seeta_naips: Good theory about Payal--if you read part 1 you'll get more clues hint hint. Baby spoiler coming shortly.

    Jyothi Parsi: Lots more to come in Anjali and Payal's stories but most of their psychology you now know. Baby spoiler on its way ;)

    Zyrah Ayok: Glad you liked the romance of BHO hun :) SP was a roller coaster ride for sure, all the craziness of the side characters against Arshi's romance. Great theory on Payal, more soon!

    neag: no prob, auto correct is annoying sometimes. Well for SP, Baby spoiler is coming shortly and as for Payal, reread part 1, it might point you toward more clues ;)

    Aanya: Glad you like my stories, but it is strictly Arnav and Khushi only for me.

    Namita11: Aww glad you liked it!

    Arshi Alai: Anjali is weird for sure, and Payal can have multiple motives--the thing is which one is it? Will be revealed in time ;) BHO--yup, finally they're one :)

    Thavaputhalvi Chandran: More soon :)

    Namita11: Haha Ashantivan, perfect! Payal can have lots of motives, part 1 gives a small clue, hint hint.

    Nishu: Aww so glad to hear you liked FL. I think it's my most emotional story and not everyone gets it, but I'm glad it's struck a chord with so many readers like you :) Next chapter soon!

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  25. BHO chp 16

    absolutely an amazing update.
    loved every part of this update their confession, their little passionate dance in rain qnd specialy his surprise, he proposed khushi for marriage..
    like & he already start calling her Mrs Sexy like khushi call him Mr Sexy..
    & big thanks to u coz there was no disturbns from buaji *wink*
    now waiting to see what wil they do when once again buaji will be there to distrub in their private moment..

    SP chp 23

    its really a brilliant update.. i m little confused with anjali's behaviour why she 's behaving like this & what mrs singhania told to police about anjali ...
    & after reading payals behaviour in this part when she sees arshi together & their love & care towards each other, i also feels that she wants & obsessed with arnav or sonething like thats why she hate khushi & want to kil her..
    their off encounter was realy a passionate one..his sexy stubborn wife is really a stubborn one asr is asr now they are back to their usaul lunch time with passionte moment.. looking for next part..

    SP baby spoiler
    i m realy excited after knowing that they are having twins.. eagerly waiting to see arshi's reaction specialy arnav's . pls update soon

    & sorry for commenting late, some work is giong on at home thats why i m little late..

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  26. Wow Tina, 2 lengthy updates were indeed a treat, especially with your work constraints, thank you so much!! :)

    BHO - Part 16
    I read this one on the day you posted them and was so excited that I had wanted to comment immediately but thought I rather complete SP and then comment. Now I can understand why you called it a 'blush-worthy' chapter, indeed it was and so much more!! God bless you for not writing in any interruptions (doing a happy dance!!) I thought it was incredibly romantic, from Mr Sexy and Sushi on the motorbike (21st century version of galloping off with one's knight in shining armour...) to the cabin and even the leaking roof which just added to the ambience. Khushi's love for Arnav is so powerful that she isn't afraid of the dark anymore. It was so sweet how he had tried to meet Khushi on several occasions and was so near, yet so far. Mr Sexy really made Sushi's birthday so wonderfully special, the chocolate cake, jalebis, the lingerie and a poem in hindi, that was most impressive Tina:) And when I thought that him telling her that he loves her was going to be the big surprise, you went a step further and added the best surprise, his marriage proposal!! It was perfect, I just loved it, didn't see that one coming yet. I also loved the very bold, forthright and decisive Khushi, who was not ashamed of her choices but acknowledged her love for the man her heart beats for, openly. A perfect way to end her birthday, he made her his in every way, passionately and with so much love!! Mr Sexy and Mrs Sexy finally one....The use of the title at the end was awesome. Now wondering what Buaji's reaction will be and Arnav's family too and hope there aren't any obstacles and that they reach home timeously too.

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  27. I apologise Tina for my lengthy comments, therefore had to split them....

    SP - Episode 23
    The Raizada household houses a bunch of raving lunatics who should all be committed!! Anjali's behaviour is psychopathic and it was great that Khushi made a firm point on that later in the chapter. Very kind gesture on Khushi's part to withdraw her complaint, in order to give Anjali piece of mind and at the same time placing herself further in grave danger. I don't like Dadi at all and her constant berating of Khushi but was thrilled to bits that she was put in her place by Khushi's actions. Anjlai's interruption of Arnav and Khushi's romantic interlude was one thing, wanting to sleep in the same bed as them was a little preposterous but the slimy Shyam joining them is just ludicrous!! I think Anjali and Shyam are perfectly suited for each other, both manipulative and scheming. So glad that Khushi had the good sense to say she can't sleep there but then walking right into the lion's den. Payal is far more dangerous than anyone could imagine, I shall have to re-read part 1 for the clues you have mentioned. It is obviously something of great importance to her, if she is willing to kill Khushi herself, and in the Raizada mansion at that too! Thank God her plans were foiled by Arnav's appearance, unfortunately the too trusting Khushi has now shared the news of her pregnancy with her, which is a scarier thought. Khushi is always lovable but I have to agree with Arnav that her stance of drawing the line between personal and professional, was becoming frustrating....The passion between them is combustible and she knows it, the lunchtime visits had become a routine and they can't stay away from each other no matter what she says or does. So after all the madness at the mansion, you more than made up with the sensuous rendevouz in the office and particularly the conference room, a rather brazen Arnav taking some bold steps. Love his possessive nature, Khushi is his only! Rather concerned with Khushi's bouts of feeling ill and with trepidation was going to read the spoiler....Arnav and Khushi have been through too much to be tested even further but was doing the happy dance yet again with the double surprise (pun intended:) -> twins!! I am thrilled, hope it is a pigeon-pair. For Arnav who is just getting used to the idea of having one child, wonder what his reaction will be to twins:) But of greater concern to me, is the crazed Payal still at large, hope she will be exposed soon....

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  28. oh what?...i thought i already posted a comment...hmm i wonder what happened...or maybe i did and i just cant find it...anyhow, ill just post it again :p

    SP 23:
    whaaaaaaa....that was soo good. feeling really sketchy about both sisters here..anjali and payal. what is payals motive? and anjali....shes so complicated.dafkldfjsklf whoaa :p but i must say im really suprised with arnavs behaviour in this update, usually hes so feircly protective of khushi but this time he just like let go of the case and even didnt get all protective when she told him shyam was staring at her and making her uncomfortable. so yeaa....really liked the update tho. :)

    BHO 16:
    THAT WAS SOO GOOOD!!!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG IM FANGIRGIRLING. I had butterflies in my stomach the whole time..the way you just described everything...omg SOO PERFECT. i loved their confession and the whole proposal and their love making. :))))) it was just beyond words

    thankk you so much for both updates, i will be looking forward to more soon.

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  29. Hi Tina,this is jassi here. I googled up your blog after catching the mention of your stories in an interview of teamSarun with sanaya! have been glued to this place ever since! needless to reiterate that you are a wonderful and prolific writer! not just as arshi fanfic your works stand to beat many established writers and their novels! To take two characters out of the show...keeping their characteristic traits intact you put them in different situations masterfully! Not once does it feel incompatible with the characters we've seen on the show...wether they are playing out in Secret Passion, BHO or DH! The backgrounds keep changing...but our beloved arshi keeps mesmerizing! Thanks for giving this pleasure dr.tina!! You are awesome! :)

    But here's a request....i found it very disappointing unable to read the first 13 chaps of DH! I understand the pain and disgust which caused you to pull it down..but it would be great if you could allow some honest die-hard fans like me to read it :/ i guess the bitter sweet part of arhi is their hesitation wether to "do or not to do" in terms of moving towards one another. In DH that part gets over before chap 14...so finding it very painful that i cant read such a gr8 story of yours! :(

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    1. I completely agree, it is tough for people like us who got to your blog only now and dont know what happened in DH 1-13 or Mind Games 1-3 :(

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  30. Catching up with your update! Needed some alone time for that! ;). So worth the wait! Amazing amazing....all of them! Thank you!

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  31. Hi Tina, this love_for_serial from IF, hope you remember me.
    Just finished reading Baby Hold On, another classic from you.
    I have been very busy lately so just catching up with the Arshi world weaved by you.
    Will comment when I am done with one more , is there any chance of MG vol 3?

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  32. SP is turning out to be more interesting and with khushi having twins it's double dhamaka

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  33. Loved ur writing very much.. all of ur stories r fabulous

    In SP, I guess payal trying to kill khushi bcoz she thinks that khushi s de reason behind her called off marriage with her long time finance.. she might ve loved him very much.. she does not want khushi to succeed in her love..

    FL s going to end :( such a beautiful story of friendship n love..

    Loved ch tonight in BHO.. each n every part s awesome..

    Waitin for DH updates..

    IF username: JesiC

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  34. there are probably a lot of typos beware, replying from my phone:

    ragini wadekar: Updating very soon :)

    ffsheen1: No prob about the late comment, I can understand. Yes, no interruptions in BHO, total fluff :) And as for SP, both of Arshi's older sisters are definitely strange. I'm looking fwd to the twins too!

    Aarthi: Glad you liked both the updates hun :) BHO--was total romance and Khushi more than deserved that storybook proposal after the Cinderella-like life she's led for so long. The family will not be an obstacle as you'll see. That would have been too much like SP ;) In SP, Arnav's reaction to the twins news is coming up and you're very right, arshi have their own little paradise but outside of that, there is danger lurking everywhere. More soon!

    arshiforever123: There's a clue about Payal's motive in Epi 1 of SP hint hint. You will see more of Arnav's reaction next time, he kept it controlled because he saw how tired his pregnant wife was :) But the letting go of the case is quite shocking. His disbelief about his sister being accused aside, it was a misstep. Glad you liked BHO :)

    Jassi/anon: That interview was the best bday surprise ever. Glad you found my blog and liked it :) About DH, well unfortunately I am keeping it restricted to current readers only. It was only after several warnings that I decided to take that step. If I ever change my mind, I'd post a message about it.

    Dess Cent: Glad you liked them!

    love_for_serial: Aww glad you enjoyed BHO thus far. No plans of MG vol 3, maybe one day though. I'm just too busy and want to first finish my ongoing FFs.

    seema asthana: yes for sure! :)

    JesiC: Great guess on SP and I'm going to miss FL too. But every story has an end and I'm not a fan of unnecessary dragging. BHO on it's way!

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  35. OMG!
    A cop? Arnav's a cop?
    LOL I guess all of us were so darn busy drooling over him that we missed the hints completely :D
    So he was here on some kind of a mission?
    Oohhhh!
    Interesting..very interesting
    Now I want to see how Khushi will confront Arnav
    I read the other parts that I din comment on
    Loved each one of them
    Take your time n update :)

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  36. Yes!!! I was right! I was right! I was right!
    Arnav was hiding something! i got the hints, even mentioned in some of my comments...can't stop smiling...coz am getting good with the guessing... OMG! He's a cop!!! Woah!...that's big! interesting... wating to see Khushi confront him...
    BTW...Amazing and blushworthy update!
    ..
    thanks for the PM

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  37. I don't know what came over me! i knew he was hiding something but was not sure and he pulled a thick wool over Khushi. its a nice shock and cant wait to see what happens next. Good job! Really eager for FL and SP updates. Take care Tina.

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  38. whoa so romantic and sensual is Mr Sexy
    hmm didn't think he is a cop though
    didn't pick up on the hints to busy drooling over Mr Sexy

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  39. BHO: Awesome and romantic update. Loved the twist in the story that Arnav is a cop. Surely Khushi will be shock. Guess next chapter will be telling of the truth and hope that it doesn't affect their love for each other...

    SP teaser: amazing teaser can't wait to read it. Wonder what happen which made him to react that way to Anjali... Update soon :)

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  40. Sp..
    Intresting teaser..
    Cnt wait for the update..
    Bt little curious about it what had happend which made him react that way..


    BHO..
    Its a sizzling nd hot update.. Lovd it totaly..
    How they was planning their future, it was really beautiful..
    Bt i m little shockd, Arnav is a cop.. What happend that which made him hide in khushi's house?
    I thnk we wil knw that..
    Nd hope this shock cnt effect their love..
    Cnt wait for nxt part..

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  41. BHO
    I always thought this will bw one of those romantic comedies which will be predictable and will have no shockers which are your speciality. But no u proved me wrong. . Arnav s a cop ha....he s undercover or something? ???waiting for the truth..

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  42. i just love ur stories ...i have recently came across and i read each of ur work....
    i love fateful love and sp alot and bho is fun ride ....waitng for ud always ...

    aruarshi

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  43. BHO:
    omgomgomgomg sooo cuteeeeee >.< i absolutely adore this story...i kept giggling throughout this entire chapter ...bobby my man!!! AHAHAHHAHAHA like i died. it was so funny lollll :p and im really shcoked that he's a cop...i didnt notice any hints!!! but itll be really interesting to see how this affects everything and his real reason for staying in laxmi nagar.

    SP:
    whoa...i wonder what happened...but like anjali is slightly annoying... he loves his wife more than me...well jdoi?!?! ofcourse...its his wife...anyways....cant wait!! and i shall go back to chapter one to look for a clue on payals motives.

    and waiting eagerly to see what happens to arnav in DH...and im sorta upset FL is coming to an end :( i will truly miss it..and then you will only have 3 arshi stories remaining...will you ever start new ones or are these it?

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  44. Oh this is soo nice . Cant wait to read more.

    Arnav is a cop. Oh my god

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  45. great update well done, my favourite part was when they were talking about the jalabies- arshi are such an adorable couple- and i love the modern buaji... i can't believe arnav is a cop... can't wait for the next update especially on how khushi may reast to this truth. well done :) good luck with moving cities

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  46. BHO 17

    Er.....he's a police officer? I definitely did not pick up on any of the hints, I thought he was just rich and therefore could afford the luxury of being a writer.
    Was not expecting that at all! But who has he come to investigate?....buaji and her tax fraud? Joking! But seriously did not expect that at all - absolutely loved the twist - ooooo but how will khushi react to this secret/lie - I don't know if I'd be so forgiving. Anyway shall wait and see.

    Good luck with your move

    SB

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  47. Cop? Haaye...that makes him so much more sexier....
    Loved this sweet, romantic, feel -good update!!

    Cheers
    What_the

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  48. OMG Arnav is cop!! It seems I was very busy drooling over Mr. Sexy that I didn't notice any hints... Arnav as a cop haayyeeee!!!!!!! The update was blush worthy😊.... Waiting to know what khushi has to say now.....

    SP teaser was very interesting waiting for the updates now very eagerly!!!!

    Nivi21

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  49. Congratulations and best wishes on your move and your new job Tina....Hope that it will be a smooth transition and that you will be able to settle in easily....Will continue checking for updates as usual, and greatly appreciate that you will still be updating....Love your stories so much, it is like a breath of fresh air amidst the normal routine of life, can't imagine not being able to read them!!

    SP - Teaser
    I found it very intriguing, considering how much Arnav loves Anjali, how he dotes on her, his reaction when she was taken to the police station and even staying the night at the Raizada Mansion with Khushi. But it would appear as if this time she has certainly crossed the line. I am guessing that he either found out about something she has manipulated (she has a memory of the noose and a young Arnav) or she has said or done something against Khushi, because she does tell Dadi that Arnav has changed because of his wife and that he loves his wife more than her. It also appears as though Anjali and Dadi don't know that Khushi is pregnant as Dadi is hoping that Arnav will leave Khushi. Looking forward to reading the chapter to see what transpires....
    I re-read Ch 1 to pick up on the clues about Payal. The two things that stood out was when Buaji tells Khushi that the groom's family has found out about Payal's past and when Khushi tells Buaji but we told them (the groom's family) everything. I wonder if it implies that Payal has been unstable or perhaps she had done something....waiting to see how this aspect unfolds.

    BHO - Ch17
    Loved the continuation of this chapter from Ch 16, so much love and passion, and more importantly no disturbances!! Their love is so beautiful, that it makes them so comfortable in each others presence. This also makes Khushi as brazen and bold as Arnav but love that through his love she has been able to shed all her inhibitions. Even I felt sad that they had to leave the cabin, it was their own little cocoon for a short, precious time. Glad that they will be returning though, more blush-worthy reading!! :) It was great how they could talk about all aspects of their future life together including having children. Thankfully, they reached home without having to face any drama from Maddy Bua, the LOL bit is too cute. Arnav is a cop!! I have to admit, I did not pick up on any clues, I think I was too caught up in the love-story aspect, looks like I will have to re-read from the beginning :) But Arnav is mentioned as being rich, he even reflects on his room in his home, so wonder if his family is in Australia, if he is rich as well as being a cop? What about the writing aspect, when Khushi and him were on a date, the lady who interrupted them was a fan of his. We know he can write poetry but then again did he?? What is he doing living in Maddy Bua's house and who is he investigating? So is the real Arnav Singh Raizada all this and more or is it all part of his cover???? With regard to Khushi's reaction, I think shock is only natural. But then if I were her, I'd have so many questions....trust forms the basis for any relationship....Arnav has told her that he loves her, proposed to her and made her his in every way and went to great lengths to make Khushi's birthday special, he even said that he did not come to Delhi looking for love but then he met her - all that has to be real and true. But why hide your true identity from the woman you love and want to spend the rest of your life with, is he protecting Khushi is some way and is that why he is in a hurry to get married. Perhaps Khushi does not have part in whatever he might be investigating. I think Khushi will be hurt at first, probably angry too but I hope that her love for him allows her to give him the opportunity to explain. I truly did not see this twist, but love it all the same, really curious to see how this unfolds, please don't let it keep them apart though, hope the truth will make them stronger together than before....

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  50. BHO 17
    Wow... Sooo HOT PASSIONATE ROMantic...
    Awwww shocked Khushi...now what will Arnav do... I guess woo her again by seducing her...
    Can't wait for their small fight... I guess it's time they put their plan of talking out like matured adults in practice...

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  51. Hi Tina, wow BHO is going grt!!!! i never expected u ll give sucha twist, Mr.Sexy is a COP?????? OH GOD, he seems hot in al d roles u hav given him, thank you so much, keep going d grt work, said u got to shift, take ur time to settle but keep in touch.stay happy n peaceful.

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  52. BHO chp 17

    first of all this was ful of love, passion & blush worthy update.. cant get enough to read of their romance..
    & the twist was really a kind of shocking & amazing one. shocking bcoz i never thought that he is a cop, i knew that he was hiding something but not with his profession but might be with some personal reason.. & amazing coz that cop uniform will add more charm & sexyness in Mr. Sexy's personality..

    i really hope that k arnav hide this secret from khushi will not affects their relation. i know khushi wil be upset & angry but bcoz of whatever reason he was hiding this from her should be worth it. realky looking for their confrontation hope khushi do it soon...

    SP teaser was really very interesting i m very curious to know the reason behind arnav's behaviour towards anjali...

    & a big congrats for ur work n all. my best wishes are with u thay all ur work of moving n settling will be done smoothly..& i'll always be waiting for your update eagerly..

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  53. So I just spent an entire afternoon devouring Mind Games - hahaha these IPKKND ffs - what have they done to me?!

    Tina --- your writing style is so sexy! ^^ I'm sure you know that, but it needs to be said. I read the blurb for MG and thought the whole telepathy aspect would be wonky, but ended up loving that the most. It provided an unexpected yet enduring layer to their relationship.

    I'm so use to angst ridden Arnav I wasn't sure how to react to a playful ASR, but several lingerie shows, birthday aprons, closet kisses and some interesting gifts later, I can declare it's love.

    I may have this silly grin on my face and it sure feels good. :)

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  54. Tina, read your note. I could not resist reading Chapters 17 and 18 of Fateful Love again. This unique story is ending so soon. It is one of a kind and pure love. I have loved this story from the beginning.

    A and K’s reunion was so beautifully written in chapters 17 and 18. Waiting to read about their parenthood and the baby on June 4th…

    I have one question though. Arnav had started a company called Arhi a 100 years ago. Just curious to know what happened to it?

    Pinkly from IF

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  55. OMG! yes! you updated! :D
    SP was amazing...
    Aww how cute were the soon to be parents (esp.ASR) with the toddler...
    I seriously and absolutely HATE Anjali, Dadi and Payal....Poor Payal, try as she might Arnav wud never spear her a glance...
    Shaym got what he deserved... Don't know why but Loved ASR in the scene when he just gave away the entire car collection to NK n Akash, even Aman...in total "ASR STYLE"...*sigh*
    Loved Khushi's KKGSR avatar... It was a total blow straight on Lavanya's face...
    cant wait for the award ceremony....It'll so fun to see La's reaction!

    Read the note waiting eagerly for FL...

    BTW totally loved ArShi's "secret passion" *blush*

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  56. SP ch 24
    My God Anjali is so disgusting, she lied to Arnav for him to come running to her
    And Dadi she is no less, good that Arnav is sending her back to the ashram
    woowee he beat the crap Shyam
    OMG Payal is so nasty, she wants Arnav for herself
    wow so hot in the elevator
    wish Arnav just say to hell with his family, cause they just latch on to him for money

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  57. Super duper updt.
    Excited for the next updt. Want to see la,dadi,anjali & guptas face after announcing their r/s. Twins awww arnie u r the best hubby.

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  58. I didnt expect tht anjali called him bcz of tht cake. Tht dadi, want to strangle her to death. Payal,stay away frm arnie. Does nk & akash stands for anjali & shyam?

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  59. Updt sn. As usual impatient for the next updt.

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  60. Just read secluded island and it was just fabulous;). Loved it. Gonna explore your blog :)...


    Arshisimple on IF

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  61. Awesome update. So payal is want arnav... cool...
    Love d teaser pic.. wer did you gt such beautiful pic's.

    Brkn angl

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  62. oh my,, whtswrong with me?? i did guess abt payal and abt the twins too:-)))
    seriously anji tea party?@$#% why does shyam still have tht smirk on his face? is he upto smthng?
    feel sorry for payal.... who doesnt want to be noticed by ASR:-))
    wonder how the mighty ASR missed abt payals advances,,, maybe once he is little relaxed he might remember how she was tryin to touch n seduce him..

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  63. Wonderful update.

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  64. thanks for the update :) ... it's looking good, can't wait for the secret to be finally out...

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  65. it was a wonderful update loved it very much update it soon waiting eagerly

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  66. Yes u updated....arshi's chemistry s as usual sizzling. Payal s much more pathological than I expected. Arnav s what she wants???? Good god...
    But arnav s the one who proposed the marriage. What would she hav done if she was not married to akash??? Her goal became arnav only after reaching shantivan or was she orchestrating this from the beginning, from khushi visit to sheesh mahal????
    And now she knows the clinic tooo....
    And I think anjali s not going to sit back and enjoy the shoe

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  67. omgmggg i knew it!!1 payal has a thing for arnav!! thats so wrong tho! like shes soo different from the payal in my mind that its hard to accept her...but yea..shes so evil...im suprised he didnt even notice her just a little...like not even at all??...and his family is. so. messed. up. like wthh?! everyone in that family is just wrong. and can i just ask...are nani and mami and mamaja and NK included in this story? im sorry..i forgot :/
    but yea..overall amazing update!! and once again you described their emotions so well! i could seriously feel the frustration and anger that arnav was feeling once he reached rm...and i could feel the agitation and restlessness when he thought of khushi..it was so well written! and their scenes are so hot! ;)
    waitinge eagerly for your next updateeee :)))

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  68. SP
    Lovd it..
    Its awsome nd beautiful..
    I lovd the way hw arnav defending khushi in front of his sister nd grand mother.. Nd hw khushi's answers startled lavanya, that was beauti..
    Lovd it..
    Cnt wait for nxt update..

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  69. SP chp 24

    i really loved Arnav's action reaction from start to end.. from how he reacted to anjali after knowing her lie, he never expected this from her Di who used his promise for her benefit, to his decision for his Dadi to shift from RM to Ashram *thats really a good one*...from his non reaction to payal to whom who he didnt even acknowledge her presence but once he realize how she was behaving with him i m sure he'll not goung to spare her, & to his action towards shyam how he punish him for keeping bad eye for his khushi and that bed game & punch him from left to right ang that car scene was really an awsome one...
    and specially after being so angry & frustrated & sad & scared (about thinking khushis report) to his super cut reaction 'babies as in plural' ,'two babies not one' i really really loved it very much, thank you so much Tina for showing such a beautiful moment..
    & after Arnav's all action how can khushi can be behind so in the end khushi's action was superb, she handle Lavanya in totally KKGSR style..
    & not to forget to mention their sizziling,hot, passionate moment in the elevtor was really a passionate one..
    waiting for the award ceremony to see all raizadas guptas lavanyas and everyones reaction after knowing their relation..

    & waiting for ipk's 3rd anniversary special FL update eagerly..

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  70. SP 24 ---- yes yes yes!

    Please continue with this fascinating portrayal of Payal's character - I'm thrilled to death that she has the hots for ASR while she is not even on his radar. At least with La - there is acknowledgement of her desires, but for him not to even be remotely aware of Payal as a woman ..... what a fatal blow to someone already seething in jealousy.

    Thank you for sending Dadi away, can Anjali go with her?

    Although I'm quite happy with Shyam being Arnav's punching bag. The level of creep from him has grown exponentially, I'm dying to see where you take it.

    Arshi... what can I say? Sexy as always :p

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  71. What a mind blowing update u have delivered
    The way u r portraying ur all characters is very command able
    Keep it up . By awaheed

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  72. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R7nYuSy4n24 where I found out about this!!

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  73. i just finished reading all the recent updates of SL. must say the story is going wonderfully. i just hope that everyone knows the true nature of payal. thank god that dadi is going back to ashram . hope she really goes back . cant wait to read the next update.

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  74. Nice story....i have been reading it on and off for a while now. Went through latest chapters of DH. All are fantastic. I love your writing and stories a lot. Cant wait for more :-)

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  75. munazza: haha i think so too. Everyone was too busy drooling on Mr. Sexy to pick up the hints. Think back to his behavior and actions during Fu King disaster date. hint hint

    Zyrah Ayok: BHO--Yes, you did pick up on the hints :) SP-- Glad you liked the toddler interaction. I wanted that cuteness to be a foil to the craziness at Shantivan immediately afterwards. Glad u liked the ahem moments <3 More soon hopefully. Life so hectic lately…

    Fauziyya: Glad you liked the twist in BHO ;)

    Seeta_naips: BHO-hints will be described in next update, no worries. SP-very true, his family is in many ways, EVIL

    Arshi Alai: BHO--his truth will change things but for the most part, this story will remain light and breezy

    Sanghamitra Roy: Yes, he is a cop and more about that will be revealed in the coming chapter :) SP--this chapter was all about ArHI standing up and shutting the losers up lol

    namita11: BHO--Exactly. And what's a story without a twist :P All my stories have them at some point. SP--More on Payal soon, but there is a back story to her as part 1 hints. Good catch about the clinic. More soon!

    AREternalLove Nice to hear you liked them :)

    arshiforever123: Glad you liked BHO's update, the clues about Mr. Sexy will be revealed next time ;) About more stories, well let me finish these 3 first, I do have other ideas in my head as usual but it just depends on where life goes and how much time I get. I'd hate to quit writing on ArHi completely :'( SP--Ikr, we've always Payal as docile and quiet but it's super fun to write her like this, and challenging too. Arnav will remember something once he's calmed down. Payal made a mistake and came too close to him. More hotness and craziness soon :P

    Continued below

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  76. Akhila22051883: Yes he is. More on Mr. Sexy and his secrets soon.

    Shamyla Khan: BHO--Thanks, could use all the luck. If you like modern Buaji, you wil love her in next chapter ;)

    SB: Khushi will react realistically, this will be blow after all her mentions of how important trust is. But the story will remain light after that.

    What_the: I think so too, total hottie <3

    Nivi21:Haha no worries, most BHO readers were just like u.

    Aarthi: Thanks hun, could use all the luck :) BHO--yay for no disturbances! Yes, they were quite in sync throughout, in the cabin, on the bike ride, etc. Yeah, a lot of readers did not pick up on the hints but I blame it on Mr. Sexy :P Think to the Fu King date and his behavior there…I will explain more next chapter. Good point about Lav, she will be returning. Khushi's reaction will be shock at first and then those "trust issues" will come out again. BHO will remain for the most part light and breezy though. more soon. tc!

    Jyothi Parsi: Woo her again… good plan ;)

    Meka L: I think this job makes him hotter too <3 Thanks, all the best to u too.

    ffsheen1: Thanks for the wishes, could use them :) And agreed, Mr. Sexy in uniform is even hotter. Khushi will be angry, but this will be a test to their relationship which till now, has not faced anything too difficult. toad doesn't count :P SP--aww glad you liked ArHI in this one. It was their time to shine this chapter and they did :)

    splinteredskies: Aww it's always nice to see someone comment on Mind Games. Playful, sexy Arnav is fun to write for sure <3 Glad you liked the FF. SP--Payal is a lot of fun to write, and it's going to get more twisted lol. I wish Anjali could go off to with Dadi, but she won't leave Shantivan so easily. She considers it hers. More soon in SP!

    Suzy: Posting FL

    Pinkly: Hi hun, glad you're liking FL so much. It is very different for sure. The ArHI company will be mentioned in ch 19 as you'll soon discover. tc!

    Joe Arshi-- Glad you liked the twins announcement and yes, Dadi is one horrible woman. NK and Shyam have been working for Akash's new company, that is why all three arrived in same car with business docs.

    arshisimple: Glad you liked it, I actually just edited Secluded Island :) Happy reading!

    Broken Angl: Pinterest :)

    Anamika: Great guesses though there is more to it all ;) And true, once Arnav relaxes, he might recall how close Payal was to him

    arpi age: Glad you liked it :)

    awaheed: Thanks, glad it's all coming together bc many of these SP characters are wacky. More soon :)

    Catti Lo: Oh, Sanaya's message. That video made my year really.

    Shubha Iyer: Dadi is really going, no worries on that. More soon about Payal and the rest. Happy reading.

    Anon: Glad you liked everything. I need to get back to DH but it's been too hectic lately. Hopefully soon.

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  77. amazin update tina. loved da poem

    and Sanaya will read your work :O OMGGZ Ur da best

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  78. hie tina!!
    i just love ur writing i guess im getting addicted to it :D
    early waiting for BHO update
    plz write soon

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  79. hi tina! hope ur doing good! finally finally an update from u... i know how busy u r but cant wait much longer for updates i m very desperate.... of course the wait was worth... it was really a mahaupdate.... loved every bit of it... feeling sad that FL is going to end soon..... waiting for more updates....
    nivi21

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  80. FL chapter 19
    Arnav and Khushi's love is so strong it knows no boundaries
    they will do anything to keep each other and make the other happy

    awe Mr Raizada fainted when seeing all the blood before his baby's birth, but he made sure he was present
    my husband was there by my side for our 2 kids birth and the 2nd one was a C-section

    I agree with Arnav, I still don't like Garima, she is just mean
    Buaji is so lovable and caring

    will definitely miss this story
    this is my most favourite of your stories

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  81. FL CH. 19
    wow........................wowwwwwww...........
    i have no words. Nothing...i...omygod im in tears...okay figuratively
    but wow! you write amazingly and i love you for the magic you weave beautifully...its so surreal the way you write and just this story overall...i dont really know what else to say i mean usually i ramble endlessly...but this...this has just left me...waaaooowww...im speechless...truly
    tina..i loved it! this chapter was just so perfect and it was truly just magical. Im gonna miss this story so much...i love it soo much, you know when i was first new to ur profile and looking through your stories...i read the synopsis or prologue for FL...and when i read it was about time travel ..i was like naah ...im not into all that science fictiony stuff...but now...now this story is close to my heart..i come on your blog everyday just to see if its been updated..im gonna miss it truly ..but as you know...all good things come to an end...*sighs

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  82. Fateful love chapter 19

    Wonderful descrition of parenthood. True to the title.

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  83. FL
    Lovd it..
    Its realy amazing...
    She is writting a novel..
    That was so nice..
    Waiting for epilogue..

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  84. Fl
    I can't believe its going to end
    I loved the way you portrayed garim a in this chapter a normal woman who thinks she can only love her own. Still it must have taken alot to realize it and vocalise it. I can't forgive her for that but cannot hate her

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  85. OMG!
    Your work reached Sarun?
    Thats so cool!!!!
    Congratulations :D

    FL
    Arnav n Khushi's pain their struggle, their achievement
    You portrayed everything so beautifully!
    I dont knw what to make of Garima but I love Arnav n Khushi just the way they are
    Ghosty?
    Haha! Poor Akash would have a heart attack
    Jalebi Club?
    For a moment I thought they only make jalebis there. I was like "you are incorrigible Khushi" :D
    But I so happy!!!
    I love happy endings
    Waiting for the epilogue
    Cheers!

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  86. Congrats that your works were sent to Sarun

    FL: awesome update after all the struggles glad to see Arshi living their married life happily and moreover with their child Janvi :)

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  87. a very interesting,exciting chapter showing everyone's true colours.

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  88. Can I give u a suggestion on your next story..like a challenge or something?
    I've always wanted to see Arnav as a dark possessive lover or husband whatever
    U know the ones that say "Mine...only mine"
    Wheeeeeee! Uuff
    I cant imagine how u'll weave his character
    Just give it a thought
    Whenever u have time
    I'm sure just like all ur stories this too would be a treat for us :D

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  89. congrats for ur work that reached team Sarun..

    i just read secret passion update...and fateful love

    secret passion...gosh i am hating this dadi and even anjali too...gosh soo much manipulative...
    and now that payal who is lusting over arnav...so its her secret passion for arnav i guess...she had turned pyscho....i loved how arnav punched shyaam...well done..
    and now two babies...aww...soo sweet...

    fateful love...
    this is my most loved story ...i am sad its ending but happy to be part of it....
    i was soo touched seeing arnav concern for khusi and baby ..he fainted because he cant see her in pain....soo much in love...
    janvi was soo cute name...and akash too came back ..hehe ghosty...
    finally arshi had family and khusi was graduate now...and arnav was soo proud of her...
    garima finally trying to make ammends but arnav wont let khusi be harmed and khusi doesnt want to hold grudges for long....

    what i loved most was buaji and payal and babuji care for khusi....and most of all arshi little family

    the book and poem rwally touched me alot...thie rlove has been soo strong and it was blessed by almighty ...their fateful love...in end i was crying ..thank u soo much for giving this story...waiting for last epilogue

    Aru Arshi

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  90. dear Tina,

    first of all a big congrats for your this new achievement that your work reached to Sanaya, thanks to team sarun.. i m really very happy for you..
    & i hope soon Barun also read all your work & i m sure once they read your stories they are going to be very proud to have a talented fan like you...

    coming to an update

    FL chp 19

    that was really a brilliant and very beautiful update though i got little scared through their journey from Sheesh Mahal to the hospital, it was very painfull one but they support each other greatly, he was there by her till the end & i m so touched by his thought that he was by her side even if he was in 1920..

    & after all their pain, struggles and waits are payed off by the arrival of the biggest happieness of their life in a form which completes their family, their love symbol, their angel 'janvi'..
    & i want to answer that nurse's question that someting is different about this couple to yes it has to be different n special bcoz they are Arnav & Khushi - The Magical couple..
    & i love the decision they take about garima..

    one part of mine is very sad its going to an end but one part happy its going to an end with happy n special ending...
    waiting for the very special story's epilouge eagerly...

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  91. FL:
    IT WILL ALWAYS BE MY FAV STORY TO READ, THANKS TO U TINA FOR THIS CREATION, CONTINUE WITH MORE...............................

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  92. FL. ..
    can't believe its over. Its my favourite story after shameless of course

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  93. Tina! I just finished reading the entire FF and I must say, although at the beginning I was a bit skeptical, ummm... time travel??.. although I have seen numerous films and read numerous novels about it... it's well impossible, nah? Anyway, after reading tjis FF in its entirety, I have only one thing to say.
    FANTASTIC!!!!!
    You, girlfriend, are amazing!
    I was completely enthralled by the beauty that was the true love that transcended even time.
    The story was so beautiful because the love that was Kushi's and Arnav's was a sincere, real love with no pretentions and no ego.
    I absolutely loved this story and especially, the single minded focus of Arnav for his Kushi (pun intended!) I loved Kushi's character and her strength in her love that gave her the confidence to stand alone in the face of adversities. And I absolutely and completely LOVED the emotions that flowed between them everytime they met. And the way they were with each other. And their deep felt sadness at separation. And....

    THANK-YOU Tina! for this absolutely fantastic tale of love that conquered even time!

    vittoriA:)


    (Everytime I read an FF on ArShi, it is always spoiled for me because I remember the cad that ASR turned into when Sheetal arrived... and it just ruins everything for me... and although I stopped watching IPK when Shyam was ousted, I read up on the WU's, and gagged everytime...!!!)


    I-F kbtr

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  94. FL-OK..bawl!!!! Sniff sniff! Its over! I hate when stories finish! But it was brilliant! Congrats on finish another genius story :)

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  95. I read most of your stories, they always offer something deep. You force us to believe in time travel in fateful love, a love always connected with mind games, trust and fate while all is goind wrong with loads of thriller in shameless. Undeniable passion with secret passion. Sweet and hove and thrilling story with baby, hold. There is love and beyond it in your stories.
    I love reading your work as I easily find myself lost in the universe u create. Hats of to you. Keep writing and sharing mind blowing stories.

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  96. just love or allff they are amazing

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  97. Hi Tina...
    First thing is First ...
    a very big "SORRY"..
    i have never ever commented before now, though i am a regular reader of your works.."A silent reader"..Perhaps because i don't know what to say beyond "fabulous updates ,i liked it very much, etc"(Or just because i am not good in English language as good as you people are).But just before 5 minutes (when i started to write this ) i thought its high time i share my view about the updates and give a message to you,after-all i am reading your work for so many months now..
    i have to do at least this.. END OF STORY..
    Comments:
    I have read all your works except Shameless .I started with mind games and now i have read all your works up-to date, as i said before it was all fabulous and i like them very much.My personal favorites are 1.mind games 2.Desert heat and now
    baby hold On has also joined the list..
    ...i am eagerly waiting for mind games 3..
    ...i don't know why but i fell in love with DH version of Arnav more (May be because he is a Prince;);)).thanks of writing this version of him..and we will get an update of it by next week .so no issues..
    ...the update for Baby hold on was very nice .the story moved to next phase ..
    Poor khushi she really did not deserve that and definitely not from Arnav .But i felt sorry for him too poorer And poorest arnav ,yet i don't want khushi to forgive him so easily .i like to read how our Mr.sexy is owing his sushi:););)
    I literally LOLed at the last line.What the...

    i will try and comment regularly from now on..

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  98. it was awesome.....no more words to describe more....
    nivi21

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  99. BHO: awesome update. Well Khushi has the right to be angry. I guess the next update is going to be fun... The little chat was funny😀

    SP teaser: I hate Payal in this story. Hope she will not get what she wants. Can wait to read the part where Arnav and Khushi will be officially introduced as a married couple.

    DH teaser: awesome teaser. Can't wait to read it after such a long time. Pls update soon!!!

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  100. BHO chapter 18
    whoa Mr Sexy has run into a stumbling block
    Mrs Sexy is hurt and he will have to do a lot more than just say sorry
    She is so filmy, he may have to do a very "filmy apology" in order to pacify Mrs Sexy

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  101. SP teaser .... AHHH! I love LOVE where you're going with this one.

    When I started reading SP, I fell for the insane chemistry between Arnav and Khushi - your twist on the contract was delicious and I'm sure HBO would've been proud. 1/3 of the way in, SP morphed into a love story - one that is surprisingly strong, built on both physical and emotional love. But once declarations were made I was sure we would reach a plateau and the story ease to a satisfying end.

    Instead, for the last few chapters the momentum as escalated and I have come to realize we are still heading towards that climax, and hot damn what a climax it's shaping up to be!

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  102. BHO chapter 18

    Ok so I was kinda right when I said he was there to investigate buaji 😉 poor khushi - hope they make up soon but hope Arnav realises how much he has hurt her. Will keep guessing and will wait and see if my next prediction comes true! Maybe rope in salman khan...how could she refuse?!

    Brilliant update and look forward to reading the next part

    SB

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  103. lovely updates of BHOand teaser of SP

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  104. BHO- ufff! So much drama!! Arnav better have a mind blowing idea.. And please I don't Want khushi to be drama queen... How about slap and get over it? ;) no no.. I think kiss and make up :D ooooh.. Can't wait!

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  105. BHO
    awesome update

    sida(IF)

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  106. Hiii!! i commented on this before but idk..it didnt post or maybe it got deleted...and please do excuse the shortness of the followwing comment as i am severly sick and was just able to even get out of bed today.. so anywyassss......
    FL EPILOUGE:.this was such a beautiful story. Loved it so much and im actually really upset that its overrr :'( gonna miss it so much. you did a great job writing, perfect mix of emotions of character of magic. really love your writing tina...hope one day i too can write as well as you

    BHO 18:
    whooaa...that was ....that was hmm...see in this situation i relate more to Arnav than Khushi...i understand shes upset and feeling betrayed but..for Gods sakes ..hes an undercover cop! He isnt suppoosed to tell anyone! and yea i get it ok..even if he did tell her she wouldnt tell anyone he was a cop or anything but still in my mind it makes sense that he didnt tell her...like to me its justified...but ofcourse what khushi is feeling is also justified...but i feel that the throwing of the ring...was a little too much..khushi should take some time and think it through..that he was under such circumstances where he couldnt tell her..
    anywyas my next comment will be much longer i promise, just ive been super sick this entire week

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  107. oh yess forgot about the teaserrs:

    DHTEASER:
    omggg im dyinggg.....ive been waiting so eagerly for that story and was so glad that we got something on it today...it looks superr intersting ..cannot wait.

    SP TESAER:
    this..was sorta disturbing...that girl is totally cray and just down right messed up...hope someone realizes soon...before she does any damage

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  108. BHO- Am with khushi. She has every reason to be angry. Loved hw he gt advice frm Internet...llet's c hw he gonna do it..

    DH-its been a long tym heard abt dem...miss d couple

    SP- payal...grrr...gutter mind b****...

    Brkn angl

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  109. Frgt to ask.. I hadn't read shameless. Wer can I read it.m

    Brkn angl

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  110. hi tina..im back..oh i missed u so much.first f all i m sry dt i cldnt cmnt fm so lng dts bcz my cell gt broken nd didnt hd net n laptop nd to top f it i hd my xams..so my dad strictly banned me fr usng mob r laptop.i misd ur strys.just tdy i gt my cell bck.nd d frst thng i did s to rd ur stries..i misd dem so much.i cnt xpln abt all d stries..bt one thng wnt change dt u r an amazing writer fabulous updates..f.l epilogue nd last part was awesome.no wrds to describe..f.l is one f d strys whch i wl alwys remembr.nd abt b.ho latest update.o.m.g arnav is a cop..poor khushi..nw i m waitng to c hw wl mr.sexy woo his mrs.sexy.nd abt s.p teaser.i just wnt to say i hate payal.update sn.dis is afrin..dnt knw y im unable to post my cmnt

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  111. shit..my cmnt gt published three tyms.anyway i just frgt to ask u i hvnt rd shameless.i hv hrd so much abt it.i really wnt to rd it.pls tl me wr i cn find it

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  112. Great BhO chapter....loved how arnav logged on to IF to get advice!!

    What_the

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  113. FL epilogue:
    Mindblowing ending of a mindblowing story...
    It's a classic story and it's truly a masterpiece...
    I will pray that you again see an awsome dream like this and we get one more unususal, awsome, mindblowing and fantastic story...
    I will always love this story...
    This story is the most closest to my heart and will always be...
    I will always love it...
    I have truly fallen in love with this story after each update and it has truly touched my heart...
    See you soon with other stories...
    Especially SP and DH...
    Waiting for them like hell...
    Amina87 from IF...

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  114. Your stories are awesome!! Your writing skills have been a great inspiration to me. I totally understand how hard it is to manage your time between real life and writing stories. Wish you all the best :)

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  115. Suzy: thanks, I'm excited for Sanaya to have some of my FFs too!

    Dhruti Patel: Aww glad u liked them!

    nivi21: I try to rush with updates, but it takes a lot of time to plan them out and then write and post them. but I'm doing my best with everything that is going on :) more soon!

    seeta_naips: aww so glad u like FL so much :) BHO--very good point, filminess might be what's necessary.

    arshiforever123: a lot of ppl had that reaction after reading the prologue of FL. some thought it was a ghost story and didn't continue, but i tried to explain that it's something else entirely. Glad u gave it a shot and ended up liking it :) BHO--True, he was under strict rules not to tell anyone. But what hurt her too is his confession that he came close to her initially to get info on Shyam. That is something that would hurt anyone i imagine. And throw a lot into question. More soon!

    akhila220151993: thanks :)

    Sanghamitra Roy: Glad u liked it hun!

    namita11: Glad you liked Garima's characterization. I tried to make her real, u know. Adoption is not for everyone and in this case, she never chose it. I have mixed feelings for her too personally. I'm sad to see this one end too.

    Munazza: ikr it's super exciting it reached sanaya <3 I love happy endings too. thanks for the suggestion too, but that shade of ASR is in SP a lot, esp early on. It might come back hint hint

    Arshi Alai: Thanks hun. It's amazing feeling knowing Sanaya has my stuff :) And yes, SP's Payal is very, very twisted.

    seema asthana: glad u liked it!

    AREternalLove: yes the SP side characters are a weird bunch for sure. FL--yes, he couldn't see her in pain and bleeding and that led to the fainting. aww I'm so glad FL struck a chord with u :)

    ffsheen1: I wish Barun reads it too :) And THAT is the perfect answer to the nurse's questions. they are for sure magical.

    Greshu: That means a lot!

    Vittoria: well hello :) Nice to see u here. Glad u liked the time travel romance. Yes, it is different for sure, but that selfless love is the foundation for it all. I know what u mean about sheetal, introducing her was the worst choice then. I pretend it never happened lol and just enjoy the cute arshi scenes we got in btw like karva chauth

    rachel regina: aww it is always bittersweet for me too when a FF ends. BHO--well, it's going to take more than a slap or sorry. He not only lied, he admitted he came close to her at first to get info on butterball. It's going to be an uphill climb but the journey to regaining her trust will be fun i think :)

    anonymous: Wow, ur words mean so much to me. Yes, I do try to put some message in each story, otherwise it would be pointless IMO. Thank you.

    lalithasridevi: thanks!

    swarna s: It's nice to hear from u :) Ur English is fantastic btw, dont worry. I like earthy, raw Dark Prince of DH very much too <3 BHO, he will have to work hard to win her back ;)

    splintered skies: So glad ur liking the twists in SP ;) They will keep on coming. There is LOT that hasn't been revealed and that will make this story interesting I think :) More soon!

    SB: Yes, you were on track for sure. Oh, roping in Salman Khan. Great idea. I will fwd that too Mr. Sexy ;)

    Sida: thanks!

    Broken Angel: lolz Payal is a piece of work in SP for sure. More soon about Mr. Sexy's plans in BHO. Shameless is not available currently. I took it down for publishing but now I'm under a new contract at work and not able to do that. So it's kind of stuck right now but hopefully one day it will rereleased.

    Afrin: Nice to see u back :) Thanks for the compliments hun. And dont worry about repeated comments, I delete the duplicates when i log on. About Shameless, please read the comment directly above.

    What_The: Glad u liked the chatroom. It was inspired by IF lol

    Amina: Aww I know how much you've loved FL right from the start. I'm hoping to publish it soon, let's see :)

    Anonymous: Thanks so much!

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  116. DH was spectacular bT

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  117. DH chapter 26 was well worth the wait! As you said, such a long update, and lots of progression with the plot. I was particularly pleased to see Maya & Aman *ahem* sorting out their issues.

    I appreciate how busy life must be for you right now, and am grateful for the update. If I could make a tiny request - SP update soon please?

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  118. DH just awesome

    sida ( IF)

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  119. Hi Tina, I actually came across your blog quite by accident but am hooked onto your writing. You have a natural flair for writing. I hope you write more pieces and also publish your own books in future. I am a die hard fan of Nora Roberts and Danielle Steel and next I guess you, since I read and re read your pieces. Maybe you should consider an alternate career -writing?? :) anyway good luck and thanks for the wonderful work. Shyamala

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  120. Thanks u so much for the maha update on DH
    Totally loved it
    Glad that Arnav was alright and at last Khushi took the decision to be Arnav, her husband!
    Good to see Aman, Raj, Sia and Maya to be back with Arshi but of cos interrupting Arshi's moments hahaha
    Finally Arnav's and Raj's plan had worked where Aman and Maya confessed their love. They are one cute couple I must say!
    Well sad for Zara and hope she will get her love back...
    Arshi lovemaking in the barn was hot and awesome but unfortunately someone came there again...
    So considerate of Arnav to give Khushi a proper wedding to make her his wife officially
    Can't wait for Imran and Taj to join them!
    Hopefully the wedding will take place without any tension
    Pls do continue soon
    Thanks for the pm :)

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  121. Thanks for the DH maha update..had missed reading it for so long now!

    Mrignayani

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  122. Eagerly awaiting for the wedding. So happy for Aman and Maya. Now just waiting for Taj and Zara reunion

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  123. hi Tina

    i m really sorry for not commenting on last part of BHO, i have read it but never got a chance to comnt coz a big tragedy happens in the family & also bcoz the Ramazan month is going on, so still not be able to comnt for this month...

    but i promise will be back after Eid.. InshaAllaha..

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  124. Fateful Love....
    Incredible story... Could not stop reading once I started. You are a gifted writter with wonderful imagination. An unusual subject flawlessly put together. Thank you for this lovely story. Will read your other stories now...

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  125. Mind games

    Another beautifully written story. Very unusual and imaginative.

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  126. y cant i read desert heat after 26

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  127. SP part 25
    wow when Raizada wants something he wants it
    he broke the bathroom door to have his wife

    in your face Lavanya, Raizada's and Gupta's
    just goes to show how much Arnav loves Khushi

    Anjali and Payal are just so delusional they really need help

    glad that Arnav is re-thinking on the stalker thanks to Uncle

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  128. Finally you updated....
    SP- was so amazing...
    He broke the bathroom door!.. like seriously!!.. that was a aww moment, when he thought he hurt the 3 of them...
    loved the way they both were dressed up for the event, while they were in the limo i did think of the sindoor and voila... ASR did it, humari soch kitni milti jhulti hai ;) ...
    Uncles entry was a pleasant surprise, clad he made Arnav think on the stalker again... OMG i was ROFL when I read Payal, Lavanya and Anjali reaction to see Arnav revealing their relationship and Khushi been the most important person in his life...Absolutely not liking Dadi and Anjali...I absolutely HATE Payal, the 3 of them are so delusional... Guess now the Gupta family will see their mistake and know how happy Khushi is with Arnav.... the Hint for the chapter was.. hmm.. whats cooking now.. A night- club indigo...Arnav looking angry... and that sexy dress???
    BHO- teaser was sad, but I am counting on you and Mr Sexy to set things right!
    p.s: do continue to PM me, even if you don't do, I'll continue to stalk this blog anyway!!... ;)

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  129. Wow what an update !!!
    This arshi doesn't have an ounce of self control unlike arshi in DH.
    He broken the door !!!!!
    So desperate hmmmm
    finally one of the most awaited update came brilliantly.
    Payal.....hehehe pity on her.
    She can't be like khushi..
    Ohh arnav loves three of them a lot.
    Loved loved it very very very much.
    Finally they revealed it infront of the whole world...
    Hmmm,but i don't understand the last part;tht truck part.
    Cant waiting for the next update.
    Di,don't stop writing ever.
    Your stories are such a relief after ipkknd.
    Plz updt soon.

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  130. secret passion chapter 25
    loved the update....i just love the way arnav and khushi are so much in love and the way arnav can't see anything or anyone past khushi....they both are perfect together....
    payal is truly a witch....god knows what kind of woman she is...i can only imagine arnav;s wrath if anything happens to khushi or the babies due to her madness.....
    waiting for some action in limo....i hope we'll be getting that...hehehe

    desert heat-the storm...
    here i have only one thing to say and that is......poor arnav and khushi....hahahahaa...so many interruptions in their suhagraat....it was like god was playing pranks with them throughout and i can imagine the "what the" expression on arnav's face....hehehe
    don't torture the poor guy like this.....make it happen soon...lol
    continue soon

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  131. Amazing..
    Lovd the way hw lavanya run frm there..
    Nd anjali nd dadi cn see hw much arnav love her..
    Nd payel is a witch..
    I want her to live like a lifeless woman..

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  133. SP: The Maha update was totally fantabulous!!! Love the way the award ceremony was held and Arnav's speech where he announced Khushi as his wife was just awesome :) it was total shock for everyone especially for Lavanya and of cos Payal:) Good to see uncle at the ceremony too and also somehow made Arnav think about Khushi's protection again hopefully he would rethink about it.Payal is just one evil sister. Khushi sacrificed her life for her in order to get her marry and all she do is hate Khushi... No matter what Payal do I don't think she will be able to get rid of Khushi from Arnav's life! Because Arshi love is much more stronger! And the Dadi and Anjali are also in my hate list along with Payal. I hope Khushi' s parents will now understand that Arnav and Khushi are madly and deeply in love couple. And what with the thick book which was written "HE IS MINE", didn't Arnav or Khushi open and see it. Is it send by Payal? Loved all Arshi parts and how Arnav took care of Khushi :)

    BHO: awesome teaser :) Khushi is so affected by Arnav's lie as she trusted him. I guess Arnav have to do a lot to woo her back ;) Update the chapter soon, can't wait to read it!!!

    Thanks for the pm Tina :D

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  134. SP 25 --- As much as I loved his very public confession of love (it is as grand as I’d hoped for with the sindoor as the cherry on top), this chapter, for me, served as an insightful look at the differences amongst the women in Arnav's life. I love how you roped them all into one update that highlights how different his life would be sans Khushi.

    Lavanya and Nicole James – superficial women who only cares about what his wealth and power could do for them.

    There’s Anjali, who’s so delusional in her rose tinted world, she can’t understand that her adult brother require female companionship beyond that of family and the casual sex variety. That moment when he’s accepting the award, it doesn’t even OCCUR to her that he isn’t talking about her. I hope we’ll reach the point that Anajli is at least has an awareness of the world beyond that of an infant.

    As for Dadi… grrrrr.. please just keep her a safe distant away.

    Then there’s Payal, who continues to fascinate. Such lusty thoughts, such bitter resentment – her jealous turmoil is just fantastic to witness. My favorite aspect was the way the sisters viewed Arnav’s scar. Such a miniscule detail, yet speaks so much. For Payal it’s a mar on his perfection. She sees and desires ASR, the trappings that make him a successful business man and a sought after lover. Khushi sees it as a mark of his humanity, she fought against ASR, but is willing to give up everything for Arnav. The lover, the man, the human behind the image. In that regard alone, how can he give her anything less than an acknowledged marriage and an open declaration of his heart?

    The ending!!! You have me on my toes in anticipation once more. Can’t wait! (My instincts screams Payal! Or maybe you’ve been fooling us all and Shyam too has designs on our Mr. Raizada? :p)

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  135. waited for very long for the update of sp
    loved every bit of it
    truly amazing

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  136. your updates are always worth the wait. Secret Passion is truly an intense and mind blowing story. This update was too intense and Heart touching. Keep it up TINA :)

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  137. Secret Passion Chapter 25
    Great update. I was like OMG! he broke down the door???!!!!but then again, that's ASR for you!a man who knows what he wants and makes sure he gets it and damn the consequences. Loved how he made the awards night special for them both. The way he introduced her to the world was so sweet and heartfelt.
    Lavanya can now officially take a hike. Cant wait to see what happens when Arshi go back to work! Of course i expect that people will speculate about the lunch hour.
    I really wish Anjali stops being so stupid and Payal?only God knows what she has planned next. Something tells me it wont be pretty.
    Great job once again Tina and i cant wait for BHO update and of course another SP update.
    Am reading Mind Games again and am seriously hoping that you would reconsider and put up the first 3 chapters of mind games back up. So that people like me would have the opportunity to see how they met for the first time and how the connection was made. Please!Please! i for one would be very grateful!
    Take care of yourself and hope to hear from you soon.

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  138. read the update of SP. it was really wonderful. finally officially arnav declared khushi as his wife. and popet ho gaya dadi anjali and payal ka. payal tried very much to instigate her family. but when arnav declared khushi as his wife in front of everyone she could do nothing about it.and that telephone book that they thought was actually something different. hope its payal's job. or is there a new psychopath in town. as it is arnav and his khushi is too many enemies. please dont addd some new one to that list. and i can only request you to update soon. know that it is too much to ask what with so many stories you are writing and your job. but one can always dream right

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  139. Awesome update. Loved hw he dedicated his award to his wife.. truly in asr style...
    The last lines remind like watching a movie. Payal needs help..she s watching his childhood videos...n d precap..is it khushi...by d look of arnav I dnt think so...

    Am missing fateful love...

    Brkn angel

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  140. SP
    My god..half of the shantivan should be n mental asylum. Payal s a psychopath and anjsli s delusional..
    Is club indigo same one lavanya invited arnav to???

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  141. Desert Heat Chapter 21

    had been a while since i visited the blog and read desert heat. he last chapter i read was at the gypsy camp where khushi refused arnav due to her engagement and now chapter 21. though i am trying to get the hang of the story that i missed rebel death compelled me to comment.
    i loved him and his death made me sad.:(

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  142. Baby Hold On

    it had been going on so smoothly i never thought there will be a twist in it. I was loving the easy going nature of the story as i was like a breath of fresh air but bang a twist came when i was least expecting it. especially that lavanya part.
    amazing it has got me more involved and more curious about the story. cant wait to read more.

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  143. DH chapter 26
    just caught up with chapter
    wow Arnav and Khushi can't catch a minute to be alone, someone always interrupting their intimate moments

    can't wait for the next part

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  144. SP 25
    Loved it...
    God ... How selfish can a family be...? Anjali n Subhadra r good examples of that...
    Can't hate Payal enough.... Yuckkkk... Is sh the one who sent that stupid book... But looks like it reached the place meant for ....THE GARBAGE TRUCK...
    I'm happy ATLEAST Garima n Buaji r. Not like them...
    Bless Aman...
    Now... When will PAYALS intentions towards Arnav be out...Atlaest to Arnav...? How will he handle it...?
    But sooooo much opposition to ARSHI love n happiness.... How r they going to fight it...n stay happy together...? I'm worried....

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  145. FL 20

    Oh no he left! I know it must've been really important and that he will come back, but I'm just as devastated as khushi! Did not see that coming at all!!! Fab update as always!

    SP teaser

    Look forward to reading this chapter! Both sisters in the same dress....er awkward....LOL

    SB

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  146. SP teaser
    damn it Payal is planning something nasty
    she really is delusional if she thinks Arnav will look at her because she is wearing the same dress as Khushi

    BHO Part 19
    damn after all the apologies he had to leave
    now Khushi will think he was playing her

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  147. loved Baby holdON!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!

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  148. BHO: awesome update... After giving cold shoulder to Arnav and when things were going well after the park incident, Khushi decided to give him one more chance to Arnav but now he is gone! Wonder what happen that he left without telling Khushi...

    SP teaser: nice teaser can't wait to read the full update. So Payal bought the same dress as Khushi... Is she planning something? Hope Arnav will not mistake Payal as Khushi in the same dress... Update soon!

    Thanks for the pm:)

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  149. BHO update: ahh i loved it!!! I can't believe he took off like that though! Just when Khushi was ready to give it another chance! :'(
    awesome update though! Can't wait until the next one!

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  150. AHHHH TINA!!

    Your stories are simply perfection - as well as my undoing! I mean they are literally the definition of a fan fiction or how they should be anyway!

    BHO is definitely my favourite, any chapter never ceases to surprise me, and is always a delight to read!

    Chapter 20 was a shocker and irony played a big role, I really can't wait till the next chapter :)

    Pleeeaseee update soon!

    Risha xxx

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  151. Arnav singh raizada...you should have some damn good reason for leaving her after making "our" heart melt

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  152. Really TINA your stories are mind blowing. The perfect words you choose to describe the feelings and situations is beautiful. I get your updates as my fantasy world where i forget about my life and its problems.
    Your all stories justify the concept of fan fiction.
    please update soon i know you are quite busy with your schedule but all i can say is i'm waiting :)

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  153. Tina...U R An Amazing Writer...
    And Ur Stories Are MIND BLOWING, ALLURING , GRIPPING , RAVISHING, MAGNIFICENT, CAPTIVATING nd etc etc....
    OMG....I Cant Explain It In One Word....

    BHO: Nice Update....Loved it...
    Waiting For Next Part "3 MONTHS LATER"...

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  154. Hi Tina,

    i m back , i have read all the parts which i missed last month, all the parts were really an amazing whether its Sp, DH or BHO all are hot , sensuas & emotional at times..

    & a Bbbbiiiggg congrats for your new achievment of reaching one million hits..
    i really hope & wish that your hard work reach way beyond than millions bcoz you truly deserve that...

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  155. Hi Tina first of all congrats on achieving 1 million hits..... I couldn't comment these days.. I read all your updates in a single go.... I was very elated to see your updates.... And now coming to your recent updates that is SP and BHO they were really really awesome..... In SP I was very scared that there would b a misunderstanding btwn ASR and KASR but I was relieved to know there is no mu btwn them.... I hope once arnav is in his real self he would start working on finding the intentions of that b****..... waiting for more SP updates......

    Coming over to BHO poor maddy bua and very poor butter ball.... He will face his life's dreadful nightmare seeing maddy bua ...... poor jha. .... ha ha ha can't wait to read more....... waiting for more..... and a small request Tina don't ever stop writing... I am really a big fan of yours......

    Nivi21

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  156. hey tina...sorry for not commenting for sometime...was really busy wid work...
    but now i m back for it... ;) congrats for ur millions hit...i wish it multiplies to infinity soon.. :)
    loved the double dose u gave for SP and BHO together

    I loved SP update... the moment that of meeting with families and khusi family now assured about arnav being with her ...was gud thing...the scene of their belonging to different worlds was touching...but as u showed arnav will always bridge the gap and grab khusi with him no matter whatever tries to do apart them...that question of khusi being adopted asked by arnav though made me uneasy as he put of queston of if payal was with her..eww..i cant even digest payal name taken with him...well family have showed equality for both sis ... hope remains so..but khusi have arnav so let all go to hell...

    the limo act was quite hot..hehe..but it also brought first time khusi insecurity out...what if he get tired of her...but arnav was soo sure about them now...it was always love between them and never sex...his soul is bounded with her forever.and i loved how he claimed that lucknow thing to be marriage technically making them married for a year.....even their talk at night..his confession and thanking her for saving him was very emotional...indeed khusi saved him...

    changing room thing was funny yet passionate..that payal is really disgusting i say....her secret passion for arnav has taken such a evil glint....she is making every effort to separate them and kill khusi ...she is nothing but sexually frustated and blinded in sibling jealousy woman....feak...the indigo stunt really scared me for a moment...thank god khusi came out at right time..she could have fainted too...and arnav was made drunk ...his fear of khusi with someone finally dashed and his faith won...they both are safe...glad khusi told him everything...and he surprsingly was able to make link of that woman voice with payal...though he didnt get the reason..i hope he rememebers the cop words about the culprit being sister...he seriously needs to find it out...

    that payal dunno whom was with her when she portrayed that ...and now by giving that indigo clip in media will surely trap her...as she did it in hurry just to defame her sister but she dont know who is she messing with...arnav will surely track her down ...waiting for next...

    regarding BHO it was very cute update...i knew it that shyaam will do something like this....idiot he is...and so his men....glad that buaji had now got to know everything about arnav and khusi and supported her..and her worry for khusi was genuine too...the opening of sweet shop was very good to keep herself busy and earn money to know about arnav..she knew he wont hurt her so it means otherwise only...
    ..and those idiot shyaam men kidnap buaji because she didnt have braid..haha..they forgot he told not the old but young lady had to be taken...haha..wonder what wil happen when shyaam see buaji instead of khusi ..poor butterball...feeling bad for khusi ...but now arnav has suddenly come...so it means he was india and knew this will happen? may be he kept afar so that shyaam acts something and he will grab an opportunity ..as he might be knowing too that shyaam knows his truth ...amazing....surely khusi going to scream more on him now...haha

    waiting for ur more lovely updates

    Aru Arshi

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  157. BHO..
    Lovd the update..
    Its really interesting..
    They kidnappd buaji.. Nw that was hillarious..
    Nd arnav in charge of case.. Want to knw where was he..? Cnt wait for nxt update..
    Thnks for pm..

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  158. Hey Tina
    Thanks for updating despite the busy schedule...
    SP was amazing.. as the name says I loved the secretly passionate Limo and Trial room *cough cough*. incidents... you didn't disappoint me with Arnav's response to Payal's stunt, I'd known he'd know too early that she's not Khushi, well I am super glad that Arnav now has doubt seeded about Payal... FINALLY!!!

    BHO was amazing too
    Although i remember you saying this is a light hearted breezy romcom but now we have an effing Sexy Cop ;) , smugglers and... kidnappers with kidnapping the wrong person :D honestly! i'd like to see butterballs face when he finds out they've got Buaji, but really Buaji, poor Khushi!...
    Loved Khushi's spirit to try and get to her Mr Sexy, she's kept exceptional faith.. so Khushi like... But I am super elated to have a certain Mr Sexy back... AFTER THREE FREAKING MONTHS! *woah*
    Hope to read more of yours soon....
    Ps: thanks for the PM

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  159. SP 26 & FL 20

    LOVED BOTH CHAPTERS!

    SB

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  160. Secret Passion: Episode 26: Club Indigo
    sensual & brilliant.
    Finally Guptas accepted them. So glad about it. They will be garima & buaji to guide them relating to pregnancy.
    Anjali,she sees big dreams :P
    our arshi wil not name their baby as anjali.
    Payal....glad tht her plans got failed.
    Arnav....dont let your doubt silly.
    Wonderful updt...
    Continue soon
    eagerly waiting...
    Do u have any rain romance in it? Sorry i dont remember anything like tht.
    If not, will u write a small rain romance part ?
    Baby, Hold On: Part 20: Three Months Later
    finally they met again....happy for tht.
    Arnav surely have some strong reason for all these.
    Buaji got trapped....so sad...
    Shyam have a towelwala pic of khushi...nooo....
    Hope tht arnav destroy his phone.
    Awesome updt.

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  161. awesome update of sp again. to what lengths will payal go to ruin khushi's happiness. hope arnav investigates his little doubt about payal. thank god payal was not able to ctreate any misunderstanding between khushi and arnav. hope payal's true colors are relieved to all soon. and also happy for khushi as the gupta's have accepted her back in life. hope payal's new drama does not create any rift between khuhsi and her family. payal really has a sick mind. and one more doubt. when will anjali come out of her dream world. hope that happens soon too.and i hope there is never a misunderstanding between arnav and khushi.

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  162. I literally lolled out loud when Buaji got kidnapped!! I could see the scenario play out before my eyes!! XD

    AHHHHH MR SEXY IS BACKK!!! Definitely the highlight of this chapter. It gave me the feels lol. Rain = romance.

    Seriously, I love BHO soooo much. It's actually impossible to put into words to convey my love!!

    I cannot wait to see what's in store of us in the next chapter :D I'm sure it's gonna be brilliant !

    Love Risha xxx

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  163. Congrats on ur hits on d blog...so happy fr u..god bless


    Wen I watched d trailer of 50 shades of Grey it reminded me abt ur SP.. rich arrogant entrepreneur but I didn't like d lead actors. Update was hot n superb..hope arnav take d lead frm here. His suspicion on payal..I think she myt slip a clue.

    BHO - Was laughing wen imagining d face of shyam wen he see buaji as his hostage. Waiting for the next part.

    Brkn angl

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  164. awesome updates

    sida(IF)

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  165. SP chapter 26
    whoa very hot and sensual
    ah so Payal has lost again (hahaha)
    why can't she get it through her thick head, Arnav is Khushi's not hers
    hope Arnav follow up on his intuition

    BHO chapter 20
    so Shyam is in Greece
    they kidnapped Buaji instead and ASR is on the case
    thankfully Khushi did not give up on him

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  166. amazing loved SP chapter very much wonderful

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  167. SP: Awesome update! Hot and romantic moment which Arshi spent on the limo❤️❤️❤️Finally the Guptas have accepted that Arnav loves Khushi. I'm happy that Payal's plan flopped again:D Can't she just give up and accept that no matter what she does she can never separate Arshi! Actually when I was reading the part where Payal pushed Khushi into that cubical, I really thought she would succeed in her plan because she also made Arnav drinking that alcohol! But I was so relieved when Khushi was saved by someone and hugged Arnav. I love the fact that Arnav did not lose the truth he had in Khushi... Even after facing the defeat, Payal wants to expose Arshi's dance out to the the media... I just hope that the suspicious which Arnav had, he would not neglect it! I just hope that Payal to be exposed soon actually I want to see Payal fuming more whenever she sees how happy and romantic couple Arshi is!!! Would there be a more of Payal getting jealous seeing the lovely couple together? Hahaha

    BHO: Felt bad for Khushi to be in this state... Without saying anything Arnav just left. The part when the guys kidnaped buaji instead of Khushi was damn funny :D So now finally Arnav is back. I guess next update is going to be confrontation between Arshi!

    Continue soon!!!
    Thanks for the pm;)
    IF: Alai123

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  168. Sp loved the update. Glad that khushi remained unharmed. But payal is planning for news. It will be a upset for arnav and khushi. But loved their unique bond and chemistry they share. Besides the hot and passionate love in the limousine. Blushing
    BHO so our mr.sexy is back. Thank you Tina for not hiding him for long. Shyam planned for kidnapping but his men kidnapped buaji. Lolz. In that case mr.sexy and shushi will get to spend more time alone. You know what I mean. Ehm ehm
    Now waiting for desert heat update

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  169. hi Tina,
    first of all thanks for the update despite being super busy..
    BHO chap 20

    i feel very sad to see Khushi in that condition but she didnt lose hope & trust in Mr Sexy & think that thare must be some reason for him to disapeare like that.. but i m soooo happy that he is back & he is going to handle bua's kiddnaping case.. coz there are lots of alone time with no buaji around *wink* they can clear the air between them.. & i m feeling like there is sequence coming where Arshi doing romance in some foreign country coz i think they need to fly in search of buaji..
    & i m eagerly waiting to see Butterball's reaction where he found buaji instead of Khushi, that must be a worth wacthing scene i m sure.. when Shyam was instructing his mens to bring khushi but he never showed her photo just explaining there staying two women etc etc.. i thought that what if his mens do some mistake & bring buaji instead of Khushi & believe me i cant stop laughing myself.. really waiting for next...

    SP chp 26

    Ahh.. Arshi's limo romance was just... awsome... i m glad that now Gupta family understand Arnav's love & care for Khushi..
    at one point i got scared that Payal might get success to creat misunderstanding between Arshi but that Khushi's one call for Arnav, i release my breath which i was holding from the moment Arnav starts following her.. after payal this plan got failed i feel relax but now she is planning another one to creat problem in their happy life after publishing their private moment but she has forget that she is fighting against Arshi love & specially the great ASR who even in his drunk state his mind take him to the voice from today to directly to Payal.. right now he just shrugged that thought but i m sure soon he will find about the person behind all this then i m sure Payals condition will be more worse than the dead person..

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  170. Tina!!!!! I'm commenting for the first ever time..... I'm usually a silent reader but I just had to tell u what an amazing job ur doing! Keep it up!!!
    On another note, u had once mentioned that u would post the arhi version of shameless to a private blog. Please help me out? I'm absolutely dying to read it!!!!!

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  171. **SILENT READER ALERT!** Gosh oh mighty.... yep you dont know me but seriously ive always been there! (Trying not to sound like a weirdo, LOL) I literally thank the lords that your blog exists! XD You have to be the best writer ive come across in a long time, literally i love ALL of you're works! As a old blogger myself i used to come blog, and of course have set time to read your new updates, blocking out the world around me and indulging back into the stories and words you have wrote! they take me to new places always, you never fail to surprise me with your clever way of writing and ideas.........aahhh!....Basically you are my Favorite blogger EVER! IM HOOKED! all thanks to you im ever so grateful because without your stories, reading would be lifeless....and the BEST part about the blog is....its all IPKKND related! (Half my world revolves around Arshi and that damn awesome show. Period.) Anyways. I come from all the way in England, (Yep your stories are epic here!) and im a huge fan! To narrow all this down just wanna say a huge CONGRATULATIONS for the success of the Writing and keep it up, PLEASE!!! :D *We need your stories*!....haha okay i think im done hope you found this either cute or insanwe, anyhow im glad you read it if you have! ;) THANKYOU TINA!....Love and Hugz. Harps <3

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  172. Hey Tina....

    First of all I m really sorry for disappearing for so long, I m really really sorry....
    & I wouldn't give any excuses because whatever d reason be I should have been here commenting & praising u for the fabulous work u r doing...

    I m a die heart fan of urs, u know that right..
    Ok, now enough of my blabbering...

    Wow what awesome updates of both bho & sp..
    I just loved them, & being a greedy person I plz need a bho update next & preety soon

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  173. Hi Tina, will you update today? Sundays have become boring without your updates...

    IF Id: pinkly

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  174. Its sure has been way too long since I managed to comment. I do sincerely apologize for this delay. I've just had some incredibly stressful weeks. But I managed to be up-to-date with all your update. I'll post a detailed comment once things get manageable but I do want to say thank you using your talent, best described as brilliant, to create such exquisite works of art and granting us the privilege of enjoying them.
    I do feel very sad about the issues that caused you so much pain that you had to take the earlier chapters of DH off. Someday, I hope to read this masterpiece of yours.

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  175. I read almost all your FF stories , very well written ... Bonne continuation :)
    I can't wait for BHO updates . i hope it'll be soon .

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  176. SP 26 --- This was an interesting one for me. Arnav's initial gut reaction to Payal's duplicity suggests he still harbors self doubt regarding Khushi's love. For a man so self-assured, when it comes to emotions, he remains the hurt child. Khushi has become such an anchor for him - physically, mentally and emotionally - I think it might literally cripple him if he loses her.

    Their love story has been scorching and epic, I do wish however that by the end we get some emotional growth for Arnav. He needs to embrace himself, not just the man Khushi loves, but the one still residing in his head. That is the only way they can find true happiness together. :)

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  177. Advance bday wishes tina frm al of us. SP: Arnav' each word during award speech-an epic, when he planned to show the crimson in her parting was grt timing, u gave your touch there by showing Arnav' change of perspectiv on the tradition n his love for her feelings. simply wow.. Am just waiting for the dawn when Khushi' sacrifice for Payal' wedding will be exposed, pls make it very deep, the poor girl deserve som true love frm her family then. am very disappointed with starplus version:( i no u will make it impressive so expecting eagerly..you take your time as re-reading is giving us pleasure of swooning in Arshi memories everyday.take care, stay happy:)

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  178. SP 26 : Anjali's possessiveness & Payal's fantasy are really scary... lol . i hope it will be a happy end for ArHi ... going to NY again :) !! Arnav's love & trust for Khushi is wonderful.... nice stories , can't wait for BHO updates ...

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  179. SP ch.26:
    It was a hot and mindblowing update...

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  180. BHO ch. 20:
    It was a sad update as far as Khushi is concerned...
    She is truly and madly in love with Arnav...
    And now Buaji knows it too...
    Shyam is really a cunning and evil man...
    His men take buaji away.... Hahahah!!!
    What will be his reaction after seeing that?
    And atlast Raizada came back...
    And now he is seriously answerable to Khushi...
    I'm somehow relaxed that Arnav came back when Khushi is in sooo many problems...
    Plz update next part soon...

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  181. Plz plz plz update ch. 27 of SP and ch. 21 of BHO really really soon yar...
    This wait is taking a toll on me now yar...

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  182. And advanace happy Birthday...
    I wish all the happiness for you...
    I pray for a healthy and beautiful life for you which is full of happiness and all the joys of the world...

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  183. Happy Birthday Dear!!!
    Wish you all the joys and happiness...

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  184. HAPPY BIRTHDAY TINA!!!

    I hope you have a fabulous birthday!!

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  185. Hi Tina,
    Caught up with SP and BHO. Was behind in reading your stories.
    Reading the DH chapters..Hopefully someday I will be able to read the earlier chapters.
    I see comments with birthday greetings!!
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Lots of good wishes always!!!

    Kerrie

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  186. Hi Tina..
    Many Many Happy Returns of the Day..
    May all ur dreams come true...
    Can't wait for SP n BHO....

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  187. Vanakkam(Tamil) Tina,
    BHO update is wow,very eager for next chapter as it ll hav lot more fun and fights. we are so used to love and togetherness of Arnav and Khushi in SP, MG bt when khushi complaints abt Arnav' lies and heart break its really different, sure Arnav has valid reasons behind his disappearance n by the way that wud convince Khushi n win back her love.
    Are u planning for Mind Games vol 3 or extension of last part? It wud b grt if u add some more to their unique love. Cos it makes such a pleasure in our day if v read your work. thanks to u.

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  188. i just finished reading secret passion..
    omg its like walking in a dream turning into reality...
    its beautifully written and its just superb *claps*
    i dont know when you'll update but would eagerly wait for it :)

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  189. NIce up dates. i just love it.will wait for next updates

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