Sunday, March 9, 2014

Desert Heat + Sing Along

Desert Heat: Ch 23 Repercussions
AND new: Sing-Along
DH was getting way too long so I split it into two chapters. Next chapter coming Friday or Saturday (US Central time).
I've updated the Reviews Page with a few comments mostly from IF since all comments posted here are kept in the Archives page.
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Happy Reading!
Tina

Sariiiaaa bebia ayia tina di na ayi
Oeee te kandi se mai saturday nu ava gi ithe ho gaia sunday tina di na ayi...
Sadhi halat ho gai tight...
Sanu sp update hai chaiy
Pat tina di na ayi
--Hira
For Secret Passion (SP):
Beeghe hont(lips) khushi k peeaisa dil arnav ka
Lagy abar saa arnav ko taan khushi ka
Ooo ohhh ooo
Ja lag ja, gale khushi k
Ab or ho go na intezaarr
--Hira
hum *update*ke bin ab reh nhi sakte
*SP* ke bina kya vajood mera
*TINA *se juda gar ho jayenge toh khud sey hi ho jayenge juda...
kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho *FF writer* tum hi ho
*update bhi do*
*reply bhi karo*
meri ashique ab tum hi ho
*update bhi do* 
*reply bhi karo*
meri ashique ab tum hi ho
tera mera rishta hai kaisa
ek pal *wait *gawara nhi
tere liye har roz *stalk* karte
Tujh ko diye mere *posts* sabhi
koi lamha mera na ho *arshi* ke bina
har saans pe naam *sarun* kaaa... hm...
tere saath mere *posts jude*
kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho *FF writer* tum hi ho
*update bhi do*
*reply bhi karo*
meri ashique ab tum hi ho
*update bhi do* 
*reply bhi karo*
meri ashique ab tum hi ho
tere liye... *itni wait ki *
khud ko to yu *jagaya*
tere *coming soon* ne mujhko smbhale
saare*ffs * ko dil sey nikala
kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho *FF writer* tum hi ho
*update bhi do*
*reply bhi karo*
meri ashique ab tum hi ho
*update bhi do* 
*reply bhi karo*
meri ashique ab tum hi ho
--Tamana
we all r here to wait
For Tina to open a new gate
A gate to passion and aggression
With a butterflying sensation
Updates so knee buckling
With all the hugs,kissing n sucking
So be ready to visit the world full of sensation
Tina is going to update next week secret passion 
--Farwa
intahaa ho gai
inthzaaar ki
aai na kuch khabar
Mind Games ki
hai hame ye yakeen
bewarfaa aap naji
toh vajah kya hui
is delay ki
intaha ho gayi
--Shivi
 Jaane ku log SP update nai karte hain Embarrassed
Jaane ki log hamesha DH update karte hain *puppy face* 
Jaane ku jaane ku jaane ku
choti se mushkil hai na SP k pass,mera dil hai na
Tina tina tinaaa update dee do na tina 
--Hira
jaane kya hoga kya hoga kya pata,
dh ka update to dede zara
--Ankita
For Desert Heat (DH)
Neend churai meri kisne oh sanam DH ne DH ne.
Ho chen churaya mera kisne oh sanam DH ne DH ne ho oh ho
--Jenna
hai kasam ki kasam hai kasam seee
hume pyaar hai Bhut Sp se
ab yeh pyaar na ho ga phir hume
ooo yeee
Log khate hain pagal hu mai yeh bhi na janu
Dil lutaia hai maine ab kese ki na manu...
hai kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
hume pyaar hai Bhut Sp se...
spammm kar kar maine yeh updates li hain...
neende uraha k maine teri updates bar bar phari hain...
hai kasam ki kasam hai kasam seee
Hume pyar hai bhut SP se..
--Hira
La la la la
Aazmaa le... aaja tu saamne
Aazmaa le... aaja tu saamne
Dil parda-faash hai
Neeyat aiyyash hai Na bann shareef tu
Tina badmaash hai
Tina badmash hai
--Simran
 DH paas aye yoo muskoraye DH tumne jane kya sapne dikaye. Aab to mera dil jage na sota hain kya karo haye jaab DH ka update ata hain to kuch kuc hota hain --Jenna
luk luk luk
are baba luk
oh my darling plz. hv a luk
dil mera dharke SP k liye
dil mera tadpe SP k liye
Attitude ASR ka walla walla
Naughtiness Khushi ki
uff uff uff
luv luv luv luv luv luv
humko SP se luv hua
--Shivi
Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Faqeera maan jaa
Re Tina maan jaa
Re Tintin maan jaa
thriller dedo
--Simran
Aja DH ka update aab to aja tujhse pa
rne ke chahate hue hain.
Aja aja ake hum ko gale se lagale tujhse parne ke chahat hue hain
--Jenna
Dard mai bhi yeh laab muskara jate hain
jab tina ki update k jalwae nazar ate hain
Blush kar kar ho jate hain hum tomato
Jab raat mai sp k dreamz ate hain
Chand updates mai he sahi dil ko chura lia hai khai..
Kash yeh updates ka,silsala chalta rahe yuh sada
--Hira
iss passion main hm secretly kho gaye
tine ki writing k dewanay ho gayay
intezaar sy hota hai mera bura haal yaar
1st post kbhi nahi milti mjhy kitna hai atiya chaar 
--Farwa
TUM PAASSS AAE 
YUN MUSKURAAE
TUM NE NAJAANE KYA SAPNE DIKHAAE.
AB TO MERA DIL 
JAAGE NA SOTA HAI.
KYA KARUN HAAEE
KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI
--Reema
Fevicol se fevicol se
Meri new romantic thriller  ko seene se 
Chipka le tintin
Chipka le tintin Fevicol se
Fevicol se
--Simran
 UPDATE KO AANA HOGA JALDI IS BAAR
WEEKEND TAK KA NAHI HOGA HUMSEIN INTEZAAR
ARNAV KAHO YAA ASR,
KUCH TU HAI USMEIN KHAAS,
BAS HO NAZAR TOH,
DIL SE DIL KE JUD JAAYENGE TAAR!!!!!!!!
--Ankita
dagabaaz re hai dagabaaz re,
tina ji bade dagabaaz re .
kal mile hai kal mile ,kal mile ee
hamka bhul haye aaj re hai.
dagabaaz re hai daganaaz re
--Sphobic
Barun k photo  ko seene Se yaar
chipka le Tina fevicol se Wink
--Reema
Mujhe toh Tina Di ki FFs ki laat lag gai lag gai
Zamana Bole laat yeh galat lag gai
ah ha ah ha 
mager iss dil ko sambhalna hai mushkil ku k mujy tou iss ki laat lag gai lag gai
--Hira
Anku: najaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya
abhi to tha yahin abhi kho gaya
Jen: Hogaya mujheko to DH se pyar sajana lakh karle to inkaar sajana.
Hain yeh pyar sajana
Ishaq ne teri ffs k ishaq ne
Ishaq ne teri ffs k ishaq ne
Kar dia kar dia bekhabar
Be chain shaam o sahar
Be chain shaam o sahar
Bus tujy yaad karti hu raat bhar...
Dunaia ko mai bhul gai teri ffs k ishaq mai...
Ishaq ne teri ffs ishaq ne
--Hira
Dil deewana na jane kaab hoga ha ah ah DH ko ek baar para aur kuch hoga. Kuch hogaya kuch hogaya meri DH baby
--Jenna
see writer ji ab
spam bhi karliya,
gana bhi ga liya,
strike bhi karliya,
dance bhi karliya,
ab to sharam bhi aagayi.
ab to update de do
--sphobic
Desert Heat Holi Chapter:
Itna maza kyun aaraha hai..
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya..
Dugna nasha kyun cha raha hai..
Ankhon se meetha tune khilaya...
--Arushi
Pehle nazaar main DH ne aisa jadoo kargaya meri ban beta hain DH.
Oh DH donod jaha meri baho main aaaja
--Jenna
SP ko dekha tou yeh jana sanam pyaar hota jai deewana sanam
Ab yaha se kha jaiy hum
Tina di ki thread pee he mar jaiy hummmEmbarrassed
--Hira
Mujhe kuch bhi nahin chaahiye tum se
Na dilaasa, na bharosa
Na wah wah, na humdardi
Na sapna, na sahulat
bas ik new thriller 
Yaara...
Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai aa...
--Simran
Main to hu pagal kar ko hulchul. Hone de hone de hone de DH ke ek update ta na na na nnaanaa na na na na naana LOL 
--Jenna
ROFL

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3 comments:

  1. Hey!! I was just wondering when u gonna post ch22 of secret passion..can't wait to read the next part of the amazing fanfic

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