Sunday, February 2, 2014

Comment Thread #4


2.2.2014-2.22.2014 Comment Thread #4
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  1. Hi!! Just wanted to say thank you so much for doing all this. I've only just started reading your FFs on Arshi but I'm already knee deep in it!Its awesome how you portray both of them in your stories. My favourite so far is Secret Passion but i'm going to start on others soon! Thanks for making it public so we can all share your love for IPKKND!Really miss that show!Can't wait for your future update!! :)

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    1. Thanks, glad you liked my stuff :) I miss IPK so much :(

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  2. I loved the update for BHO. What i loved most was Khushi honestly admitting that she wanted Arnav. I loved Arnav's "dream" a lot too. And the tub most definitely made my day. Oh Tina, how i look forward to the next update... thank you so much!!!

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    1. Tub made arshi's day too :) More soon!

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  3. I LOVED LOVED LOVED the BHO update! Super shmexy :D i read all your works...but never really wrote a comment here...sorry for that...but do update here too on time..i always read it here instead of IF...please please plase :D i love your work! makes my sunday a very fun day ;) -sadaf

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    1. It's nice to hear from you :) I'll keep that in mind, let's see..

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  4. BHO: EPIC UPDATE, FULL-ISHTOP. Love the Khushi in this one..she knows what she wants and shes gonna get it ;) i havent commented in a while but my lazy self has been reading everything you write, ardently :D YAY MAHA UPDATE FOR DH. Trust me when i say this ive read the last few chapters of DH a good 7-8 times because we havent got a Desert Heat update in forever. But its all good coz its getting mahaupdated. *grins* ill be back with more random blab latter... :D

    Srishti :)

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    1. 7-8 times? woah :) Glad u like DH's Dark Prince and Angel so much :)

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  5. BHO-12
    sigh! My comments Dont seem to get posted..well I loved the part and can't wait for desert heat!! :)

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    1. this one got through :) More soon!

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  6. hi......i love ur stories.....all of them.... ))

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  7. First time poster, in response to your comment about whether people read here or on IF. I discovered your site a few months ago, & prefer reading here as I find it easier to keep track of the story here than on IF. I love your writing, by the way, with Secret Passion my current favourite (so a little plea to please update that often!).

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    1. Nice to hear from you :) I'll keep that in mind, let's see.. And SP will be coming soon :)

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  8. The title to the current update of BHO is perfect!!!!! It' was really an aaaah update Tina dear.... I m just head over heels with BHO...its becoming more and more difficult to choose which ff is my favourite..... waiting 4 the next update of BHO... and thnx in advance 4 the maha update of DH....... All your writings are my favourite

    Nivi21-IF

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  9. BHO - 12.... Asolutely crazy and awesome. Super loved it Tina... the entire tone of the SS is so full of Flirt, Fun & Frolic....cant help but adore it :)

    As for comments .... I track your work here mostly rather than IF as I find it easier. I am not on your PM List ...and i dont bother you since i would rathr you spend time updating and PM ing so many people. And I loke your work...so my responsibility to stalk it.

    Would really appreciate it if you continue updating on the blog... but at the end of the day it should suit your convenience.

    - jakhushi

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    1. Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep that in mind.. let's see :)

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    1. Hey Tina...there was some error ...
      BHO 12
      Wow...what a romantic, flirtaceous update...
      Looks like Arnav love n attraction is making Khushi bolder day by day...
      The way Bath tub scene is brought in...is wonderful ...
      By the way... I follow ur work only on blog...please update it on blog too regularly...

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    2. Glad u liked the BHO update. more soon!

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  11. awww, seriously the only words I have for chp 12 of bho is bold. but I really liked it. do update dh,fl and sp soon.

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    1. Agreed, the passion went up a notch in BHO :)

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  12. BHO - chapter 12

    this part was ful of romance.. amazing update,
    i really enjoyed a lot.. khushi's nightmare and after that bua's part was hillarious n we hav new name 'Buttetmonster' for that toad..
    this part really goes to the title 'Ahhh' tht moment always there in the chp..like Arnav's dreams part, khushis boldness, bath tub scene everything..
    eagerly waiting for that parts continuation...

    & i m following u here though i hav IF acc but never used it coz its taking a lot time for open IF page in my cell.. so pls pls update ur blog also..

    eagerly waiting fo MAHA UPDATE..

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    1. Glad u liked the update and yes Shyam has so many names in BHO :P

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  13. Hi i am a new reader and i read all parts of baby hold on just today. Realky appreciate your writing.
    Will comment on other works when i read them.

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  14. BHO - Part 12
    The title of this chapter is truly apt :) Arnav's very sensual dream was fast truning into reality!! Love Khushi's innocence especially when she voices her thoughts out loud and how Arnav is so considerate in the manner he wants their intimacy to be. Thought we had seen the end of Butterball, now we have the Maddy Bua, the Buttermonster!! Loved the tub scene, and how calm Arnav is throughout....what stands out for me is how Khushi can be blushing furiously in one moment and become decisive and bold in the next, its great to see Khushi's character in this way and again Arnav's thoughtfulness and care comes through. The next chapter is going to heat up the bubbles for sure!! Please do not let them be interrupted by Maddy Bua :) Eagerly anticipating what is going to happen....

    Tina, with regard to the updates on this blog, I read your stories only here and not on IF. So pleeeeaasse continue to update here, I am constantly checking for updates and simply love your stories.

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    1. Thanks hun for the feedback, I'll keep in mind. And I'm enjoying writing bold Khushi in BHO too, its a nice change ;)

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  15. BHO - Part 12 : Awesome chapter..so hot and sexy :D Arnav in the tub..oh so sexy..plus the way u depicted Khushi's reaction after she fell in the tub..LOL..that was too funny. & pls update here on ur blog simultaneously. I am not a regular visitor at IF but ur blog page is on my bookmarks list always. I check daily twice or thrice to see if u have updated or not. So pls don't delay ur posts here :)

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    1. thanks, ill keep that in mind, let's see :)

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  16. i just loved BHO update of mr.sexy and sushi.

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  17. Ohhh to be newly in love and indulge in all kinds of dreams...loving bho,,,its awesome!!!!!

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  18. I love reading alllll ur stories!!! Especially desert heat!!! N if u dnt mind please update it on da blog as its easier to follow and iv got it bookmarkd :)

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  19. BHO= Piece of heaven
    I'm addicted to your writing and your stories are the only things that brightens up my day. Please update on your blog because I have it bookmarked. And PLZ, PLZ,PLZ,PLZ UPDATE SOON!
    ~~Anaya

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    1. aww so sweet :) i'll keep that in mind, let's see..

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  20. Wonderful updates....especially BHO...please continue with your other stories soon

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    1. More updates coming momentarily ;)

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  21. Loved the update!!! :) Great part!

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  22. T DOC SAHEB...EK CHUTKI SINDOOR KI KEEMAT TUM KYA JANO

    ARNAV BABU OH NO NO NO DID HE JUST YELL SORRY TELL HER

    TO WIPE IT OFF

    THAT WAS UNCALLED FOR

    PEHLE KARTE HO

    PHIR DARTE HO

    PHIR KARTE HO

    PHIR MAANG BHARTE HO

    YEH KYA LAGAA RAKHA HAI DESERT PRINCE

    LOVE IS BITING THEM

    BINDING THEM

    TRYING THEM

    ENCOURAGING THEM

    PUSHING THEM

    PULLING THEM

    SCARING THEM

    STRENGTHENING THEM

    QUESTIONING THEM

    PLEASING THEM

    SATISFYING THEM

    PARCHING THEM

    FULFILLING THEM

    HURTING THEM

    SOOTHING THEM

    RING - A RING -A ROSES

    ARNAV KNOWS NOT HOW HE POSES

    A TISHOO A TISHOO

    LET THE ENGAGEMENT RING FALL DOWN

    N RISE UP IN LOVE ARNAV BABU




    YOU KNOW I LOVE YOUR WORK

    YOU MAKE USE OF ALL THE CHARACTERS IN A WAY THAT NONE

    LOOKS OUT OF PLACE


    AAJ KE LIYE KAAFI BAKI KE LIYE MAAFI

    DIL SE DEKHIYE ...SATYAMEV JAYATEY



    KKKA

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    1. oh wow amazing poetry as always hun. <3 it More in DH soonwa!

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  23. Horror
    omg that was really spooky

    Desert Heat chapter 22
    ah so Aman is jealous of anybody looking at Maya
    yet he denies having any feelings for her

    wow Arnav is so protective of her
    OMG he bascially married her

    Baby Hold On chapter 12
    omg totally hot
    my,my one hot, wet Raizada, and one spicy, blushing Gupta in a locked bathroom alone
    EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

    just hope butterball don't ruin the moment

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    1. It was spooky for sure, more soon! glad u liked blushy bho update too and DH

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  24. I got goosebumps reading possesed. Am a supernatural fan so eagerly waiting for the second part

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  25. Tina....I just caught up with BHO.....wow phenomenal. It's to realistic... And so what poor Khushi needs to save her from ButterBall!!!! Phenomenally funny, witty, and love able...gotta have more!

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  26. DH Chapter 22 was an awesome update. Now Arnav had married Khushi by his blood :)

    BOH part 12: it was hot can't wait for the next update!!!

    OS: it was scary...

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    1. Yes, an usual wedding for DH arhi ;)

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  27. DH...................he was worried that some one else has more claim over Khushi than him..........and now no one other than him has claim over Khushi!!!!!!
    wonderful!!
    BOH.........looking forward for more fortune cookies and action!

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    1. exactly. the ring is meaningless in many ways now

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  28. DH.......... mind blowing.
    loved it

    sida(IF)

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  29. Dh chap 22 - awesome updat. Arnav is so much concerned and protective for khushi.he marked her as his wife by his blood. Wowupdate soon.
    Possessed is too much scary. Arnav is a demon.and his own family try to kill him. What happened to khushi? Plz plz update soon.eagerly waitinggg.

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    1. You will get the continuation of possessed very soon ;)

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  30. lovely update..
    continue soon..
    can't comment in IF through mob..
    thanks for the pm..
    waiting for FL..

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    1. thanks, FL double update coming :)

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  31. Omg I'm so in loved with BHO !!!!! They r so irresistible and sexy and hot and charming yet their loved is so pure. Thanks for sharing ur thoughts and keeping arshi alive. Plz do update soon :)

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  32. Omg BHO, SP and DH up dates are fabulous! Please hurry and update more soon! Love your work!

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  33. I was with my friend when i got the alert you had updated. the next she knew,i shouted with joy and rubbed my hands with glee and she was long forgottten(i made up for it but it was worth it!). hope u would update "Possessed" soon,it was intriguing. BHO was passionate!and i am eagerly waiting for secret passion and fatel love. as always job well done!

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  34. Its such a pleasure to read ur work!! God Bless u!!
    I am fan of ur writing... u r awesome!! ;)

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  35. DH - Ch 22
    Despite the hectic last few days, I did make the time to read the DH update on Tuesday but could only comment now....Amidst all the chaos and unpleasantness of this week, Tina your updates are just what the doctor ordered! (Pun intended;) So thank you so much:)

    This chapter tugged at my heartstrings....so many trials and tribulations for Arnav and Khushi to face, after everything else that they have endured. And all for Arnav to get Khushi safely to the Northern Reaches. But the beacon of light is the bond between them which has only strengthened through all of this and Khushi's continued complete faith in Arnav. I love how possessive he is over her and his care and concern particularly at seeing her injured foot, putting aside his own fatigue and exhaustion and also trying to exercise much control over his intimate feelings for her. Comforting that Maya had the vision and now their friends are heading their way, just hope the whole group will be happily reunited. Sweet gesture on Arnav's part to choose the bridal outfit for Khushi and for her to be wearing it when he applied his blood in her parting as sindoor is very significant. It was quick thinking on Arnav's side to do that and although I realise from Khushi's perspective what it symbolises for her has much deeper meaning than perhaps for Arnav, she should be a little more grateful to him for doing that, in light of the British soldier's lewd remark and all their questions regarding her sindoor and mangalsutra. Now that Khushi's fiancee has an identity, curiously wondering how this is going to play out....

    Haven't read the horror story yet....

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    1. haha i like the doctor line ;) Agree with your analysis hun, the sindoor changes the dynamics between Arshi even more. Now the ring is meaningless in many ways

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  36. @ SP ch.20:
    mindblowing update...
    Arshi's romance was as usual hot and out of the box...
    So Khushi is pregnant...
    What will happen now?
    Arnav's reaction was predictible...
    I just wish this baby bring them more and more close...

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  37. @ DH ch. 21:
    It was really a roller coaster chapter...
    Their romance was beautiful...
    And Arnav's flirting was awsome...
    The wedding atleast helped Arnav in understanding what Khushi is going through...
    They became close...
    Oh God! They lost rebel...
    I want to kill this Shyam...
    They are now in trouble...
    I hope they reach north 1
    reaches soon and safely...

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    1. haha everyone hates Shyam and he more than deserves it -_-

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  38. @ DH ch. 22:
    Maya is soo smart...
    She realises that Arnav and Khushi are in trouble...
    It's good that the group decided to divide and help Arshi...
    Aman is acting like a fool...
    I hope he realise soon that Maya loves him really much...
    Arnav and Khushi are strong enough and they can help themselves...
    So now camel replaced Rebel...
    It's not as good as rebel but fair enough...
    And Khushi now realise that Nidhant is the name of her fiancee...
    And Arnav is completely jealous...
    Khushi loves him with all her heart...
    And because of this british soldiers scenerios Arnav filled her maang and now Khushi is his wife...
    They were and will always be inseperable...
    Plz update next part soon...
    I really wanted to know who is Khushi's fiancee...
    Plz update next update really really soon...

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  39. @ BHO ch. 11 & ch. 12:
    These chapters were really amazing and mindblowing...
    Now Arnav and Khushi have realised that they are in love...
    Khushi telling Lavanya that she is his wife was mindblowing...
    I just wish they solve their all problems soon and become together...
    Now their romance and passion is becoming out of control...
    Update next part really soon plz...

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  40. @ FL ch. 13:
    Oh God! Such a painful update...
    Arnav is now in 2025 but he lost his all memories...
    That's sad...
    Khushi is pregnant and have to face everyone alone...
    And this sheetal is another problem...
    Khushi is thinking that Arnav is dead...
    I just wanted to know her reaction when she will come to know that Arnav is not only alive but also in 2025...
    Plz update next part soon...

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  41. Plz plz plz update FL ch 14 really really really soon...

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  42. OMG...maang mein sindoor moment..!!! their passion and restlessness is so palpable...amazing!!

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  43. fatefull love is one of the best ff i hv read. I can feel every emotion in it amazing concept.. want to read Shameless. when will it be published . I am also reading ur other stories. u r a superb writer.please keep writing

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  44. DH - chapter 22

    they are inseperable, truely they are made for each other & now he has put his blood in form of sindoor, so he has more right on her than anyone.. . & how smartly he put the blood in her patition that no body realize.. i loved the way he protects her from everyone.. his way of choosing dress for her, taking care of her whenever she's injured..
    missed Rebel very much & i like that you take camel than any other horse coz like arnav i also cant give rebels place to anyone..
    waiting for their trails to singh get end soon..

    i havent read Possessed til now actually i m waiting for next part also, so i can tead both parts together.. if i cant keep control n read than i'll comment definetly....

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    1. Agreed, Rebel can't be replaced and Arnav's love for Khushi is very visible in this chapter. More updates soon!

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  45. BHO
    TINA gosh! I am now addicted to this story too... I was just stalking.. erhem.. no, you know actually I was checking about out SP (like always.. lol..), but BHO draw my interest and I could't stop reading.. this is the funniest FF I've ever read, so amazing and mindblowing yr! Can't believe that you are really writing this one during your lunch brakes.. I mean, do you know what I am doing during my brakes? Eating and talking with my collegues and friends.. and you my dear? Wow.. Just amazing.. thank you so much for your time, I love this FF. Take care, big hug Chanya (IF Chanyaforever)

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    1. Oops I mean lunch break and not brakes.. lol
      My german iphone sometimes correct words with the auto-correction! Sorry for that..

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    2. lolz i hate auto correct sometimes, no worries. Yeah, I write BHO during small breaks. It's a nice, stress free break :) More soon!

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  46. Part 22 d.h was superb.d bond bw arshi is beynd al d fights,arguments. I love d trust,care,possesiveness,love,passion arnav has fr khushi.waiting to knw who is khushi's fiance nd hw wl arnav rct aftr mtng him.

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  47. Part 12.b.h.o. Finally! D mst awaited tub nd hub update is here..asusual each update f urs is super se upar.it was so swt to read..blush worthy update.sushi nd mr.sexy tgthr in a tub.:-) hope sn,bth cnfess thr luv to each othr.nd eagerly waiting to rd d nxt update.nd d o.s! Gosh! U scared me.i was rdng it in midnite nd cldn't slp peacefuly.lolz.who tht arnav wl b a ghost.update f.l nd s.p sn.

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    1. haha i know possessed was spooky for sure. And BHO is a fun romance all the way ;)

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  48. BHO...just caught up with last 3 chapters..I had thought I was losing interest in ARHI but your writing brought back all the fire...love ARHI and your work!

    Mrignayani

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  49. DH 22- love the twists and the constant edge of the seat moments!

    Mrignayani

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  50. DH 22
    Loved the update Tina...
    Lots of suspense... So many hurdles n risks at every corner...ARSHI fighting them together... Loved the KHOON SE BHARA MAANG...so now they are married....
    I can't wait to see when ARSHI would be able to find the Singhs n Khushi return the Ring...

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  51. Fateful Love Chapters 14 & 15
    finally they meet
    Sheetal is such a B*T*H
    Buaji is so sweet to believe in Khushi
    thankfully Arnav feels the pull and Khushi will make him remember

    Possessed chapters 2&3
    Arnav is so alone, all he wants is to be normal
    those demons have caused so much havoc in his life
    he loves Khushi
    finally she understands what is going on with him

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  52. Oh my God, Tina I am not sure whether to smile or cry.....
    OK, they suffered for months *tears*
    they finally met, *smiles*
    Iam so happy for Khushi, and I know she will make Arnav remember
    No offence, but Sheetal is a B***H...!
    BTW nice banner, it was so cute, Khushi with her baby bump!
    please update soon...

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  53. The desert heat update was brilliant!! I just hope that Khushi realises that an engagement done between children while they were completely unaware of the consequences is definitely not as important, meaningful or binding as the act of Arnav, filling her maang with his own blood. She believes and respects vows, so she must respect this too. An act symbolizing matrimony is of greater consequence than one of engagement. How I wish Khushi would fee this way and just let ArShi's love triumph without further delay. I fear more heatache.
    That being said, I can't help focus more on Fateful love as it is closest to my heart. Double update!!! Thank you for the brief but blissful stay in heaven you granted me. I know Khushi will fight. She will fight against all odds to recover his memories. She may stumble but I'm sure that Khushi can never fail while Arnav's love protects her.
    Possessed is a complete shock! I never expected you to be able to weave something so sinister up with a beauty that is mismatched with horror but crept into it anyway. I am genuinely impressed with your skill. Looking forward to more blissful experiences :)

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  54. Sorry, sorry and a big sorry Tina. i haven't been able to comment in your previous recent updates. have been busy as my university classes has just started. awesome updates of fateful love. waiting for your next updates dr

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  55. Fateful love update was awesome
    They finally met. Khushi's trust In arnav and love s commendable. Lets hope Khushi's trust will avoid many misunderstanding

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  56. FL - Chapters 14 & 15
    Thank u so very much for the double-update Tina . It was truly incredible!!

    I was so grateful to find Buaji to be so kind, compassionate and considerate and not judgemental in any way....she is exactly what Khushi needed during this difficult time, with her unwavering support and love like when she told Khushi you were always my favourite and that won't change:) Very endearing scene when Khushi did not allow the porter to carry Arnav's portrait. Very sweet of Buaji to encourage Khushi to set up the nursery.

    My heart goes out to Khushi for having to work extremely hard during the later stages of her pregnancy, with her studying and catering job. The love between Arnav and Khushi is so pure and true, that despite his memory loss and her believing he is dead, their love is spurring them on. Terribly cold and heartless of Garima to forbid Babuji and Payal from communicating with Khushi, but I guess we can't expect anything less from the wicked Garima. Poor Khushi has been totally isolated....but all is not lost I believe....so glad that she sent the email for postion as caretaker of Sheesh Mahal and signed as "Khushi Raizada"....only unhappy that those emails have landed in Sheetal's hands, but not for long thankfully.

    Sheetal is a slutty, snobbish, spoilt brat, how low can a pesron go to get someone's attention particularly when they have no interest in you. Trying to seduce Arnav, thank God he has no interest in her! Even though, the memories don't last and he can't see Khushi's face or remember her name, he knows that she is the woman he loves. Although in one memory, he sees her mischievous eyes....

    I like Mr Malik Senior, and admire Arnav's expression of gratitude towards him for all his help. Very interesting plot of how Sheesh Mahal is available for purchase by the Maliks. Hope Arnav reads Khushi's emails and has a recollection through her name.

    Their meeting was more than heart-warming, more like electrifying....truly amazing how they can still sense each other's presence and the way he reacted to Khushi, when he held her, when he touched her bulging belly and when he tenderly carried her to his room, he is drawn to her, his heart knows, just wish he was in the room when she said his name. The audacity of Sheetal to call Arnav her husband....I was relieved and so thrilled when Khushi saw Arnav's gold ring, so she knows that it really is Arnav Singh Raizada!! :) I am sure that Khushi can help Arnav remember, she is certainly determined and she has the most powerful aid on her side-their love. He has to remember so that they can return to Sheesh Mahal to raise their family, where they truly belong:) From the visual for the upcoming chapter, it looks like Khushi will show Arnav the portrait....can't wait for whats to come!!

    Possessed - Parts 1-3
    I have to admit that I am not a fan of horror. But only because you wrote it Tina, did I venture to read the first part. Needless to say you peeked my curiosity and so I have read parts 2 and 3. I was so impressed by your approach and writing skills in this genre, but obviously expected nothing less after your beautiful love stories. I feel sorry for Arnav and the loss of power on his part and having no control over what happens. Khushi's experiences were horrifying but in a strange, twisted way Arnav and Khushi share a connection through this. I really enjoyed the part when Arnav helps Khushi when she twists her ankle. In those moments, so much was shared between them....he confided in her and bared his soul. And he loves her:) and wants to protect her....If anybody can help Arnav, its Khushi for sure. Maybe if her hatred turned to love, that could overpower the evil residing within him. I am curiously awaiting the last part....good will triumph over evil and light over darkness.

    SP - Teaser
    I am anxious with anticipation, my heart is pounding just like Khushi's, as to what will come after Arnav's 'but'....

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    1. aww im so glad u liked Possessed, actually I'm not a fan of horror either but needed a break writing-wise :)
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  57. Possessed
    I feel for arnav. I can't imagine how much guilt he will be feeling after all these years. That he can't do something about it. Maybe khushi s his hope .I m waiting for the ladt part

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  58. I JUST read ur double updates of possessed and fateful love.very interesting and exciting.

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  59. just read double update on fateful love!!!!!!!!! awesome update....looking forward to read what happens next.....plssssss update soon.....

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  60. This was not a teaser, but a new form of torture more effective than waterboarding.

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  61. Thrilled to get your PM and double thrilled to read the updates on FL!! The story is nicely coming together and finally Khushi is meeting Arnav in her own time. Loved the part when Arnav touches Khushi's tummy and has the recollection of his words... That was so beautiful & deep. Trust you to bring such moments to the story.
    Haven't read Possessed yet as I'm a little wary of horror but I'm sure I'll succumb to your writing soon :-)
    Looking forward to reading BHO update... Cutest story ever ...can't stop smiling while reading it and gets my hubby all curious!!!!! And of course waiiiiting for DH update!
    -Arshidewani

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    1. im not a horror fan either, but i needed a break writing wise :) Glad ur liking FL <3 It's nice to know readers out there pick up on all those small moments

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  62. Double update on FL!!! Awesome :) hate the Sheetal for telling Khushi that Arnav is her husband. But at least both of met at last. Hopefully khushi will be successful in making Arnav remember...

    The horror OS was so scary demons inside Arnav. Wonder how will it be solved...

    Awesome updates
    Thanks for the pm;)

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  63. FL - chap 14 & 15

    when i saw double post i was doing happy dance..
    thank u so much for the double treat..
    i love buaji very much how she stood by khushi's side in her tough time, i m glad that atleast buaji supported her understood her very well which help khushi a lot...
    sheetal is very stupid, she's banging her head to the wall, arnav is like a wall, she can try & do what ever she wanna do but her charm never ever gonna work arnav. this wall is only can paint by khushi only..
    & finally they met i m so happy ... realy looking forward fo next part their meeting their talk how she gonna remind him... pls pls update soon its a request pls...

    Possessed - chap 1-3

    first iwas decide that i'll read this once its completed but when i saw that its still have one more part so i cant keep control & read it & i was so thrilled after reading this, its completely different experience for me. this is my first horred story i have read & i m glad that its by you..
    i feel very sad for arnav, he feels so helpless & guilty for all these years. he even dont know what he become & do after that demons comes within him but he surely know that they make him do very bad. no body know what he is only khushi knows that he is an evil so only khushi can help him. i m glad that he share his problem with khushi.. waiting for finale part..

    SP teaser...
    i m littile scared what he going to say.. even after saying that their child not gonna feel neglected or not loved.. what he gonna say..

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  64. Loved the FL updates....so they finally meet!!!!
    Im so glad she realises that he's here, in her time, for a reason...it wouldve been horrible if she'd given up because of Sheetal's lies...
    And Sheesh Mahal is coming to Arnav's hands again...awesome!
    Cant wait to read what happens next...how she will make him recall everything...

    cheers,
    what_the

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  65. Possessed - freaking me out!
    FL-
    Sigh.. Door I sahi jaaye na! I am NOT liking sheetal! Grrr!

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  66. Possessed- it was hell freaking story. U just proved u r nt pioneer in romance but also horror.

    FL- Loved fighting spirit of khushi. She is nt ready to give up after sheetals words...
    Keep writing
    Brkn angl

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  67. i just finished reading your stories fl and sp. both are very good. the double update of fl was awesome. hope arnav gets his memory back and sheetal doesnt play any dirty tricks

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  68. Hi Tina,
    I feel so stupid right now as i was waiting like a fool since last week for the updates of Fateful love n i missed two.
    i simply love buaji who accepted khushi as she is without any questions about who is the father n all,khushi seems so safe n happy with her...
    now coming to arnav he is trying bits n piecees to remmeber his pasts,without knowing anythg he just is so faithful to his love n i salute him
    n to have a woman like sheetal in the vicinity too..i sincerely hope woman like her doesn't exist...
    that face to face ,only a little deceotion tiny one so wanted arnav to have a little to feel somethg extra for khuhsi,anyway it will happen tht i am sure of,love it(march2011 IF)

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      Arnav did feel something for her. He was pulled to her and wouldn't leave her side. But the guy is totally confused at this point. Very soon it'll hit him :)

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  69. Hello Tina! I found your blog a month ago and believe me I've read all your stories now and can't decide which one is my favorite;)) I am sure you must have heard this many times but you are an awesome and versatile writer which reflects in your writing. And the ease with which you've written all the genre ... be it a thriller, romance and horror just proves what I am trying to say.

    Secret Passion : It's PAYAL who is the mastermind behind the tried sabotage. I'm very sure and it could be possible that she is influenced by Shyam in this.

    Desert Heat : It's like I am watching an Indian cowboy movie. The scenes, characters, emotions seem so real. They thrill me to no end.

    Fateful love : I was a bit unsure in the beginning ... had thought something on the Ramsay brothers line ... hehe :)) but then poof ... it is one of my favorite stories now and I can't wait for the next update.

    Possessed : I Love it! Even though Arnav is a murderer and very dangerous ... my heart goes out to him . Love the fiesty Khushi here. But I wonder why hasn't Arnav hurt anyone in Khushi's family? Wasn't Anjali hurt by Arnav?

    I ain't very good at expressing myself ... I hope you can understand the depth of my exhileration and excitement at reading your stories. After all you are a writer and writers are good at observing n writing feelings? hehe

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  70. Hi Tina, I love your writing, I just finished Mind Games and am waiting for the update on Fateful Love. Love how you keep Arnav and Khushi alive for us through your FF. KUTGW

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  71. Baby Hold on!!!, I just read the whole thing, and it is fabulous, I didn't realize i was missing out on another awesome one of yours. I love your writing.
    Thank you for not giving up on Arnav and Khushi still.

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  72. Tine..fateful love 14, 15...I was blown with the story, not to mention the pictures...Khushi has belly...this is to show how much u love this job of writing..keep it girl!
    Mrignayani

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  73. Possessed!

    WowTina! That was something alright! You are one of the most versatile writers I have ever read the works of....brilliant! You ideas are new and really interesting. This one is also fab! I for one am not a fan of horror stories or movies at all....but still thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait for the finale...

    Loved it!
    Cheers,
    Rayolight

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  74. OMG!!!! Tina Possessed was real spooky... I read dat late nite and got goosebumps.... waiting 4 the 4th part though.... And now for BHO wat an update a verry very hot wet raizada wid blushy blushy gupta wow dats just amazing loving it completely...... Ok now thnx 4 the double updates of FL... Dat was amazing.... so finally arshi came face to face waiting for their reunion.... And finally finally thnx 4 the teasing teaser of SP....... Waiting 4 all the updates eagerly......

    nivi21-IF

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  75. Hi TIna, thanks for your wonderful stories, am eagerly waiting for your updates to SP and FL. absolutely loved your work .Have read other writers on other blogs, though their stories are good your command on the language makes it even more pleasurable to read your stories. KUTGW waiting for an update.

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  76. Holy Crap ! Khushi is pregnant ! Secret Passion is amazing ! I love you writing. It's so beautifully crafted. I want to Desert Heat is my favorite but Secret passion rivals that idea. I honestly can't wait for the next updates. I keep rereading some chapters while waiting for you post on a story.

    ❤️Sonu

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  77. Hello! Loving all the stories you've written, especially Desert Heat! :) It's easier for me to comment on your blog than on IF so here's a sincere thanks for keeping the IPKKND love alive! <3

    pujajk

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  78. Hi I've been a silent reader for most of the time. Just want to drop by and say that your blog is definitely one of the best out there. Your stories help to keep this fandom alive Keep up the great work :)

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  79. @f.l update 14 nd 15.:-) fabulous as always..firstly,the way buaji is treating khushi,is so swt f her.atleast she s nt lyk garima..nd d struggle khushi has dne thru 9 mnths is remarkable..nd finaly our arshi met bt dt damn sheetal y does she has to poke her nose in bw..hopefuly khushi wnt blv her nd help arnav regaining his memory..

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  80. @possessed.:- wt to say,simply superb yar.i dönno fm wr do u get dis ideas,take a bow.:-)who wld hv tht dt dr wl b love bw a demon nd human..even though arnav turns demon,bt he hv flngs fr khushi whch wnt let him to harm her.amazing concept loved it.doctor ji ap bemisal ho,kamal ho,dhamal ho.:-)nd s.p teaser..waiting fr arnav's rctn.update sn.

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  81. FL ch. 14 & !5:
    simply mindblowing...
    finally they found each other...
    Khushi should do everything possible to make Arnav remember her...
    plz plz plz update next part really really soon...

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  82. Possessed:
    really interesting and scary story...
    plz plz plz give the finale really soon...

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  83. never commented, this is my first time loved your stories. missed your update this weekend. I always check for new updates on sat and sun

    awesome work!!!

    TBSB

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  84. huh finally an update..... the wait was worth it though.... Tina wat an mind blowing update.... Ahhhh finally arshi are going to be parents yeah yipeeee!!!! the update was scorching hot i must say..... cant wait to know who is plotting against khushi.... and wats dadi is doing at arshi's doorstep...... waiting for more..... loved every bit of todays update.... thnx a lot... waiting for other updates toooo... And there is a personal request 2 update BHO soon very soon plzzz....

    nivi21-IF

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  85. Wow, amazing update of SP, Chap.21
    I knew Arnav would come around, he'd be the best dad ever to their child!
    Can't wait for Khushi to rejoin office!
    OMG! what's Dadi at the door for? hey Devi Maiyya, Raksha karna
    Now I'd be really waiting for chap.22, and also please post BHO soon too and it seems we'll get FL soon, so eagerly waiting for that!
    Amazing work Tina, keep going, sometimes I wonder what would happen if you hadn't being writing, omg, but thank God you do write and I wish you'd continue forever!
    BTW, you said you write BHO during your lunch breaks, and my friend and I spend our lunch breaks talking about. You stories have been a hot topic of discussion and along with me, my friend is also a huge fan and admirer or your work!
    update soon, please, please, please...

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      and yeah, stop sign dadi is back :P

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  86. SP chapter 21

    wow Mr Raizada can't wait to be alone with his wife
    what a Valentine's Day surprise, romance in the office

    If this happens before she rejoins office then we can expect a lot of office time spent on explosive encounters

    can't wait

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  87. SP - Episode 21 Confrontation

    I loved the update!! Absolutely brilliant, perfect blend of tender, heart-warming moments and passionate, spicy ones. I was glad that Arnav was able to absorb and come to terms with Khushi being pregnant and although he is afraid, with Khushi by his side, he is now excited and wanting to be a good Dad and he wants more than one child too!! It is sad though how his childhood memories torment him. But he is ready to face this fear in the same way they had to deal with all the other obstacles in their lives :) Was truly worried about what was coming after Arnavs's 'but', but the way you wrote that was excellent, him being in his authoritative ASR mode and it all being a joke. Two very endearing moments, made me want to cry when Arnav talks to 'Baby Raizada' and kisses Khushi's stomach and the first 'Valentine' gift for the baby signed 'from Dad and Mom'. Even though Arnav did not realise it was Valentine's Day until Aman told him, loved the romantic rendevouz in the conference room....and then Khushi's surprise, wow!! A very bold and daring Khushi as a seductive temptress. Really loved Valentine's Day SP style, it was a refreshing approach. But even more, just so happy that things are falling into place for Arnav and Khushi, they have much to celebrate including "Entrepreneur of the Year'. Was a bit concerned that the police officer did not mention to Arnav 'the sister' bit of the hit-man's confession, because Khushi's life is still very much in danger. Hoping now that Dadi is not coming to upset the apple-cart, considering she does not like Khushi....

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  88. I am very upset after reading the SP updates...

    Because it makes me yearn for my husband and I am not going to see him for the next few weeks :(

    Loved the sizzling, hot, newly-married-wala passion...hope that it continues for a long time...even when the marriage is not-so-new...knowing ASR it probably will :P

    There were such beautiful moments, with his gifts to her and his tenderness with the baby...

    And lots of progress...the pregnancy, his reaction, the hired man being caught, the clue about the sister...Anjali or Payal...who is it???

    So is SP coming to an end as well? I would hate for it to end....

    PS: 20-Jan then Valentine's day the next day? Or did I miss something :D

    Love,
    what_the

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  89. What a wonderful valentine's day special update! Tina ye sirf tum hi kar sakti ho. DH!! SP!! BHO!! FL!!! Possessed!!!! itni variety, itni creativity?! i am amazed. bas ek hi shikwa hai that i could not read shameless.

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  90. sp
    glad that things are back on track b/w arhi.
    awesome update

    sida(IF)

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  91. secret passion update was completely passionate and sexy.

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  92. love all your stories!! really amazing

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  93. SP-chp 21

    after reading teaser, whenever i think about what he's going to say after 'but' i hold my breath but now i can take sigh of relief...

    along with he scared all of us with his joke...
    for that like khushi i also want to 'Arnav stop ur jokes'... jokes apart..

    but in real he is very scared bcozof his past but by khushi his side he can try every thing & i m sure like husband he'll be good father also.. i loved arnav's gifts specially for Baby Raizada...

    when i read ' A Valentine in SP style' i cant wait to read the chp.. i was ver sure that it has to be very sensual, passionate, full of romance & love with khushi's bold surprise & arnav's romantic cum passionate lunch date in AR. it cant be a better velantine than this... thank u so much..

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  94. SP-
    I'm glad that nothing seems to break them.. Hope it remains the same.. Dunno abt them.. I won't b able to take the heartbreak!
    FL-
    I think the song tum hi ho-aashiqi 2, is the best suited!! Tere liye hi jiya.. Khudko Jo yoon dediya.. Very appropriate..

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  95. Ur all stories are rocking..
    Realy enjoyd while reading..
    Thnk u so much for such wondrful stories..

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  96. finally Arnav is free of the demons

    his and Khushi's love is so pure it overcame the monsters

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  97. hey....i was following this bog for a very long time....and i love all your stories....my favourite is fateful love...i always get very emotional..i even suggested some of my friends to follow your blog.....and they are loving it.....we also have a discussion on fl and bho yeah not to forget sp,mg.....every story which you write..we love them....i am so sad that fl is going to be completed..it is my most favourite ff.....wish that would last long.....not but not the least...thank u sooo much for ur ff...

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  98. i'm a new reader of your stories i started with Secluded Island it was amazing then i read your secret passion i really love it
    thank u so much for every stories you wrote and going to write i just prefer your writing style
    please continuous secret passion soon
    and what about the first parts of mind games??

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  99. hey so i just wanted to say...thankyou...like thank you so much for what you do because I love it...and it has become such an integral part of my life to read your stories that I dont think i can go without them now. Your writing is just...idk how to describe it...its just so perfect. You are so extremely talented mashAllah...i hope you never stop this talent of yours because it has made a big impact on peoples lives. i have read all your work...every single thing that you have posted on here...i am caught up with it...i have read all the ff's, the ss, the os's. everything. And am eagerly waiting for new updates. I would say my favourite but honestly I cant say because i love them all so much. They are all amazing in their own way..so unique and completely different that its hard to draw comparisons. But i do have one itsy bitsy complaint..tho i do know its not really your fault as you are a doctor and must have a hectic life...but i just wished you updated more often...i mean reading an update after a month really confuses me..i have to go back and read the previous update cuz i forget ...so yeah...but its alright...do it at your own convenience. oh and one question...is shameless available yet on ebooks? If not...when is it gonna be? I really wanna read it...the arshi version :p. so yea anyways...thank you so much. and please do not stop what your doing. its absolutely beautiful.

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