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Comment Thread #5
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187 comments:

  1. Amazing and scary end to Possessed. Loved it!!

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  2. wow an awsome and scary story which I ever come across, usually a a scardy cat I don't read horror stories, but how can I miss tina's creations' thought to give a try and yes it made my interest more in readind scary stories its realy a lovly horror story dear thanks for sharing it.

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  3. Possessed! Wt to say..speechless. True love can destroy every evil..awsme tina!! Amazing story.loved d entire concept.it flt so real..i love ur creativity skills..if u love someone truly,no demon can separate u.fabulous..kp writng dis kind f o.s.abt S.p-loved d mahaupdate..finally! Arnav acptd d reality,ovr his past.i wish we cld c al dis n t.v as barun nd sanaya..dr romance nd chemistry wl always remain sizzling..same as u describe n ur stories..nd f.l teaser waiting to c arnav regaining his memory,nd gtng rid f dt sheetal.update b.h.o yar.longing to read it.

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  4. Oh my!!!!! This story was absolutely mindblowingly fantabulous!!!!!!
    Loved the story so much that I have no words to praise it!!! Its simply the best scaro-love-story!!!!!! U r just tooo good!
    PS - plz update fateful night and BHO fast.... I' been dying to read them since long.

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  5. Hi Tina , firstly I should tell you are amazing story writer. I liked Mind games very much. Read already once and it's tempting me to read again. But I am missing the first initial parts between arnav and khushi. You have given the summary but I am missing it. Where I can read those parts?

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  6. Sorry the above post was by me Jayanthi(jayanthinag) from IF.

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  7. Possessed was really awesome though it was scary but I like the ending!!!

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  8. possessed awesome ending to awesome story

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  9. awesome story!!!!!!! loved it.....i like the ending but could u please write an epilogue for Possessed if possible? i would love 2 read one more chap :)

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  10. Possessed-
    Awsome..
    Lovd it..
    Its diffrnt all together..
    Plz write epilogue..

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  11. possessed :
    it is such a sweet story instead u displayed it in horror format, continue soon..................waiting for fateful love.................

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  12. Possessed - Part IV and V
    I really felt sorry for Arnav at how helpless and lost who was in the face of the evil that possessed him, even though he has been fighting so hard for years. Have to commend Khushi on her bravery and strength to stand up to the demons and fight. And to acknowledge her feelings for Arnav. Was really sad and horrified that the demons had killed the Guptas, in all the years he lived with them, the demons had not harmed them but the demons were wiping out all the people that Arnav loved and the last one left was Khushi. But so happy that good triumphed over evil and light over darkness and love reigned supreme in the end:) A rather unusual story but compliments to you Tina for writing a story about Arnav and Khushi in this genre!!

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  13. Secret Passion Ch. 21
    What can I say that hasn't already been said. It was a brilliant chapter. Everything was perfect, from Arnav's rumination and decision to Khushi's determination, from Arnav's romantic plans to Aman's genuine amusement. Every section, every thought, every spoken word... it was all magical. And to top it all off, Khushi's little tease was fantastic and I personally loved the fact that Arnav manages to free himself. And the hearts!!! Oh my, they sure had me all molten!! They made my day just as they made Arnav's. Also, just as much as I wish to see Arnav and Khushi safe and want the mastermind to be exposed, it makes perfect sense that ASR's formidable image prevented the senior police officer for mention the last words of the hired man to Arnav. In short, I loved the update. Especially the fact that, Khushi slept on Arnav's side of the bed and went to confront him instead of pulling a weak stunt like leaving him. That would've undermined the depth of their relationship. She couldn't just get hurt and leave. Deep down in her subconscious, she trusted him and his love and couldn't accept the "fact" that he left her alone. It had to be a lie.

    Possessed
    I would've have never ventured into reading something in this genre with ArShi if it wasn't written by you and am I glad I could read it or what?! You've really impressed me, Tina. Only something so pure as Arnav & Khushi's love could defeat something so vile and evil. Arnav has been suffering for such a long time and only complete acceptance and love from Khushi can heal the permanent scars that the demons etched in his heart and soul. I loved how Khushi went to Arnav during the funeral and held onto him while was trying to withdraw into a shell. And the courage she showed in endeavoring to help Arnav rise against the demons deserves special mention. I feel that the guilt of having tormented him while he was actually the greatest victim of the demons must have been earth-shattering and the transformation of her intense emotion to love just increased its magnitude. And I cannot forget to comment on Arnav's plan to kill himself in order the keep the demons at bay and keep Khushi safe. It was painful yet beautiful. Tina, you have certainly outdone yourself. I knew you were brilliant but you have just shown us all that you have many more hidden talents!! Thank you very much

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  14. waiting for new update on baby on hold

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  15. Possessed - finale

    amazing update..
    finally Arnav's fight against that demons over...
    his love for khushi help him to fight back against demons & defeat them.. truly love powers is above to everything..
    & if a person that u love is with u so on one can defeat u... i m happy that khushi stood by him & supported him.. she knows that her life was at risk phirbhi she stood by him..

    & she realise her love for Arnav..feeling sad for guptas but happy that she not alone she hav arnav with har..
    he free with demons but now possessed by khushi... in a good way.. wink

    lovely & a scary story.. brilliant combo..

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  16. Omg I cried so much reading "fateful love", I have not cried so much reading a story as much as I did while reading fateful love. Plz update soon

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  17. Hey Dear doc!
    It's a general request to you...
    Can you plz not use screen shot in any update in future?
    It's difficult to open them on phone dear...
    Plz plz plz i'll be really obliged if you consider my this request...

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  18. Possessed
    Read all of it in one go.....

    Oh my god tina, u have made me speechless here....

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  19. I was continuously crying while reading it, arnav was in so much pain...
    Each & every emotion was portrayed brilliantly....

    I could feel all the emotions..
    I adore ur writing....

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  20. Hi tina.. I finally caught up with the updates of SP. OMG I so missed readin this story since after their marriage I dint get to read it. Its been too engrossing n amazing so far. Wow read all the parts frm 12 at a go.
    Pls forgive usually I do comment bt this time I read so many I'll put it in brief.
    I loved Arshi standing by each other while their families were against them.
    Khushi is strong she dint chicken out seein her family's opp n I loved the slap she gave to Karan who always gave bad vibes. Arnav did the right thing to walk out then pleadin the families to accept them.
    Also their romance n their passion is so sizzling. Their office romance is awesome.
    Arnav's still so haunted by the past tht he tried to spy khushi coz he knw she kept somethng frm him not coz she ws guilty.
    The news of khushi's pregnancy again made him go into his past. He dint lash out or blame khushi he walked out to clear his mind. Bt khushi has her own fears which thnkfully got cleared. Poor arnav is so scarred by his past tht he again doubted if heis even good for khushi coz obviously he's different n he reacts differently to situations. Bt khushi's words abt why she loves him gave him some hope n assurance n he did wht he does the best make up for his flaws by showering more love on khushi.

    Last upd ws HOT!!!!! Khushi in a sexy avatar with cabaret dancing. Arshi r really 2 of a kind.

    The sis is anjali coz payal has never been to the estate.

    Thanks Tina for understandin. N reading the blog ws gr8 so commented here instead of IF.

    Renee.bee IF

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  21. Hi tina di,
    I read ur possessed,it was such a beautiful 5 shot
    You've penned it so well in just 5 parts,arnav's innocence,guilt,coldness, and awww his love,it was so warm,seeing him so helpless was really heart wrenching,and he was planning to kill himself for her :'(
    Khushi was right on her place but still,I loved arnav more in this ss,and then the way khushi fought with those demons,loved him even after knowing that dark secrete.
    I was literally having goose bumps when they both were fighting with black spirits,khushi encouraging arnav to fight with them and come out of their(ghosts') grip,arshi's love was sooo strong,I couldn't stop myself from crying reading this ss
    PS---their love story was cute,when she realised his love and promised payal,she won't hurt him,from then it was cuter :P <3 <3 :)
    Shreya2748--IF

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  22. Suzy: Glad to hear it!

    Nadia Sulaiman: I'm not a huge fan of horror either but it was a nice change. Glad you liked Possessed:)

    Afrin: Well said, love does triumph doesn't it? BHO will be coming very soon.

    Vatsala Arora: Thanks so much :) FL now up!

    Jayanthi: Unfortunately when people copy things, there are consequences so MG has been affected but instead of taking it all done I just removed the first three parts.

    Arshi Alai: I'm a fan of happy endings :)

    Namita: Thanks!

    Seema Asthana: Thanks!

    Divya_divs: Glad you liked Possesed, no plans of an epilogue hun. I like where it left off. A murky, but hopeful end..

    Sanghamitra Roy: Glad to hear it. See my response above about epilogue.

    Greeshmaraipathora: Sweet and scary, right? FL now up!

    Aarthi: Aww thanks hun :) Yeah, the demons were very dark so the Guptas could not be spared, much like the Raizadas. But Khushi, thankfully was :)

    Alexandrite91: I love how you picked up on all those small moments between ArHi in SP :) So glad you liked it :) And possessed--perfectly put, the purity of their love defeated the evil. I'm so glad to hear it came together well. My first horror story you know.

    Anonymous: BHO sometime this week hopefully. It's halfway done.

    ffsheen1: *wink back* Yes, Khushi truly stood by him once she understood and Arnav shared his pain.

    Vanita Poonal: *passes kleenex* I can imagine hun, FL is my most emotional story I think.

    Amina Mahmood: The screenshots prevent copying hun. I'm going to try loading them from my computer instead of directly from IF so I hope they show up for you.

    Shipra Agarwal: Aww thanks, your speechlessness means a lot :)

    Renee: Hey glad you could catch up on Secret Passion. Yes, the last update was very blushworthy. And ArHI have a lot against them for sure, but they're standing firm. More soon!

    Shreya2748: Glad you liked Possessed :) Yeah, Arnav was going to sacrifice himself for Khushi's sake. But of course, their love had to triumph.

    Loved your comments everyone, great read!

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  23. OMG LOL TINA. I'll be back to blab about the epic mahaupdate but I couldn't keep myself from mentioning the baby bump that Khushi has in that banner! The attention to detail is fab :DD

    -Srishti :)

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  24. I was so happy to read this update of FL....against all odds they have come together. ...Their meeting in sheeshmahal is something I look forward to. ...

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  25. Finally some news from you, I was beginning to worry!
    Fateful Love was amazing! Khushi was trying so hard to make him remember, and it will pay off... Sheetal got what she deserved from Khushi...and now we'll get a Arshi reunion in Sheesh Mahal, like it was suppose to be!... right???
    I had tears in my eyes this time as well but there were more smiles for Khushi's efforts... now eagerly waiting for BHO and DH.. Update soon...
    ps. You're Awesome
    xoxo

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  26. FL - Chapter 16
    I was so excited to see an update Tina:) I have been checking all the time and appreciate it considering your hectic schedule....
    This was such a beautifully penned Mahaupdate. Khushi is a woman of such strength and resilience....in her condition to be so patient, wanting but more so knowing that Arnav needs to remember on his own. Also having to deal with the meddlesome brat Sheetal, but I think now she has got the message loud and clear!! Loved Khushi's little gestures like the roses to help him remember.The love between Arnav and Khushi is so powerful and pure that Arnav's heart knows even though he has only fragmented memories to go by. He is so thoughtful and caring of her situation and I loved the part were he acknowledges that he is immensly jealous of Khushi's 'facelesss' husband. I guessed that Khushi had his photo on her phone and that was what she was looking at. I was thrilled when Arnav asked her what she is not telling him and the way he kissed her and then goes after her.... I think it was perfect that Arnav had to go to Khushi's house and that Buaji who is a stranger to him recognised him and showed him the portrait and told him what Khushi had to endure and the ulitmate 'your wife and child'. Can't wait for their reunion in Sheesh Mahal where it all began, how appropriate:) I am sure once they meet there but more specifically in their bedroom, Arnav's memories will come flooding back!! Truly heart-warming and soulfully romantic....

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  27. aww finally an update and that too a very happy and enchanting one!!! It was awesome as always Tina!!! Whenever i read any of your stories i just keep hoping that never end and i keep on reading it..... FL was awesome loved it completely.... Head over heels with your writings....... waiting 4 the BHO update And all the others too!!!! I commented earlier too but i dont know where did my comment vanish anyways i love your writings so i dont feel irritated to comment twice,thrice or n times until my comment is published.... waiting for BHO,DH,SP,and most importantly FL....

    nivi21-IF

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  28. F.l mahaupdate.:-) dts nt fair tina..cliffhanger at d rite tym. My mind nd heart wnt b at peace tl nxt update. It was superb update.i was so immersed in reading dt i was wishng it wld nt end.eagerly waiting to c thr reunion.finally,arnav remembered khushi.update b.h.o sn yar.

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  29. FL ch16: omg finally arnav knows khushi is his wife... wohoooo i cant wait for the next update...
    this update was lovely... khushi must be going through so much trying to remind arnav... but she must be happy thinking atleast he is in front of her :)
    just lovely!

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    1. Go get her Arnav :) she is waiting for you!

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  30. Another amazing update!!! Worth the wait!!

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  31. Finally after months am able to post comments. Somehow it would hang!!

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  32. Another amazing update!!! Worth the wait!!

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  33. An awesome update.
    Must slaute khushis unwavering beleif in arnav. She doesn't even once doubted arnav even sheetal's doing. It was so cute doing damll small for thing for arnab to make him remember but never pushing. I am so happy that he came to knw some truth. May be seeshmahal is the final trigger to his memory. I am eagerly waiting goe next chapter

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  34. For tha updates of FL, SP & Possesed
    "Stupendo Fantabulously Fantastical"

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  35. fantastic update of fateful love.

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  36. Possessed
    WOW!! Just read Possessed! Tina you have outdone yourself again!! I know I have said it before but I want to say it again! You are one of the MOST versatile writers on IF. Brilliant thrilling and beautifully written :)

    Cheers
    Rayolight

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  37. Fateful Love

    And read this one too...loved it! The chemistry and emotion is fantastic as always. Can't wait for Arnav to enter Sheesh mahal...that wud be the triggering factor on his memory.

    Waitingggg,...
    Cheers!

    Rayolight

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  38. Fateful love chapter 16
    Totally blown away by your maha chapter - just fab!

    SB

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  39. F.L : Wow finally Arnav knows Khushi his wife. Waiting for their Milan after the truth is known.

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  40. F.L
    I wait till they are reunited!!! Finally Arnav found out the truth, now I just hope he gets his memory back and sees how strong their love is! I hope Khushi's family accepts her again after seeing that she wasn't just making Arnav up.

    Thank you for the update Tina. It was truly lovely and please update the next part soon. I really want too see Arnav, Khushi and baby all together! :D

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  41. Awesome update on FL. worth the wait

    Waiting for next update eagerly

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  42. omg omg omg
    That was so much to bear
    Amazing-est update
    I was crying at the end
    I can't express how much it affected me,so beautiful
    Loved it
    Waiting for that moment when they will confess their love again
    -shreya2748

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  43. Awesome update of FL
    Khushi tried her best to make Arnav remember their moments but unfortunately he don't get it fully
    Hopefully he would remember everything
    Arnav did a good thing to visit Khushi's house
    I'm so glad that Arnav got to know that he is her husband the child is his :D
    Can't wait to see them together at Lucknow and at Sheesh Mahal!!!

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  44. fateful love:
    wow such a sweet update,continue soon.......................don't end it now please..............

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  45. What a beautiful reunion... His subconscious feelings for her came through so beautifully. Finally he realizes the connection when buaji tells him to go his wife. Lovely update.
    ... Arshidewani

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  46. Thank you for the nice, long update on FL..it was beautifully written...felt all their emotions as I was reading...I hope that he remembers everything once he is in Sheesh Mahal..

    what_the

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  47. Fl- almost there! Let's see sheesh mahal brings back the magic

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  48. FL chp 16 - Mahaupdate
    i m so happy to see an update.
    thank u soooo much Tina for update apart from being super busy still u hav taken a time & updated uper se MAHAUPDATE for that hats ff to u.

    comnig to update i loved it very much..
    i really like khushi's way of reminding him with her every little gesture instead of directly confronting him.. how she try to remind him his fav food by bringing lunch for him, red flowers valentines day talk every thing...
    & how she shows sheetals place in Arnav's life.
    in back of his mind he recollects everythig which khushi indirectly reminding him & what buaji told him & looking at pic he is almost there but everything goes well once he reach sheesh mahal
    really looking forward for thier reunion that will be a most awaited chapter...

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  49. FL 16
    Hey Tina...
    A wonderful update.... The connection between ARSHI hearts could not be broken by time...so Sheetal stood no chance... Hope she will realise it soon... Hope sheesh mahal n the bedroom will form the bridge for memory to return n ARSHI to meet finally...hope there won't be anymore hiccups...

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  50. I never thought i'd say this but kudos to buaji. She gave Arnav some desperately needed answers. I loved everything. Him being drawn to her, his internal conflict, her confidence in their love, Her logical & cool argurment for sheetal... i could go on endlessly. All those beautiful things that you've woven into this fantastic update for FL are magical.
    The roses, the lunchbox, the picture in her phone... the kiss and the promise to return. And his promise to be there for his wife & child!
    Seriously, if you're going to keep this up, all my works going to go on the back burner. I've reread your update for FL 4 times!

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  51. Fateful Love Ch16
    Finally things are falling into place
    Thank God Arnav left the Malik's
    ah he is getting flashbacks
    can't wait for them to meet at Sheesh Mahal

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  52. SP ch. 21:
    Thank God! Arnav accepted the baby...
    I was really scared...
    Arnav is really changing for good...
    His concern for Khushi really touches my heart always...
    Finally Arnav has accepted that He should let go of the past and look into their bright future...
    Which is a really good sign...
    And his surprise for Khushi was mindblowing...
    Oh God! They are acting like teenagers who can't live without eachother for a min...
    I love their romance...
    They are truly amazing...
    And Arnav's gifts for Khushi really touched my heart...
    I loved that part...
    Especially the bib...
    It was really adorable...
    And last but not the least Khushi's surprise for her hubby was hot and sensual...
    Their love and desire is out of bound for eachother...
    And i only pray that they always remain like this forever...
    Plz give next part soon...

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  53. DH ch. 22:
    Amazing update as always...
    Arnav is getting really obssessed nowadays...
    And after hearing Khushi's fiancee name he became really frustrated...
    He is turning into that little boy day by day who fears that His most fav thing will be snatched from him...
    Khushi is his love, obssession, life, everything...
    Khushi understands him but sometime i also become irritated with her behaviour...
    I just pray that they reach north really soon...
    Already he has put sindoor and now day by day he will become really frustrated...
    I just hope they stay unite...
    Plz no seperation...
    Khushi just return the ring and end it once and for all plz...
    Update next part soon plz...

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  54. Fateful Love Ch 16
    Loved the maha update. well written and emotional. Cant wait for them to meet in Lucknow. As always job well done!

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  55. Teaser DH ch. 23:
    Aman and Maya are fighting with their emotions and desires...
    Especially Aman...
    He should accept that he feels for Maya...
    He is hurting Maya as well as himself with his this behaviour...
    I just hope He accept his feelings soon...
    Good going Maya don't give up that easily...
    Plz update this part soon dear...

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  56. BHO ch. 12:
    Arnav and Khushi are fully into eachother...
    Arnav is soo much relaxed that everything will be fine but i'm scared of buaji...
    I really can't imagine how she will react with broken engagement and Arnav and Khushi's relationship...
    I think a big strom is coming on the way...
    Plz update next part soon...
    P.S: I'm really waiting for a hot encounter in the bathroom...
    'A rub in the tub'... ;)

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  57. Possessed:
    well you have done a great job...
    It was an excellent short story with a superb end...
    You have proved that you can write any topic really well...
    You have done a superb job even in horror story...
    I loved it...
    And the happy ending was mindblowing...
    Thank God! They became one...
    I always love happy endings...

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  58. And at the last my most fav story FL...
    This story is my lifeline...
    I have read all the story upto ch. 16 again...
    I simply can't stop my self reading it again and again...
    I have already read Ch. 16 six times and i'm going to read it more and more...
    I can't express in words how much i love this story...

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  59. FL ch. 16:
    As always you took my breath away with this update...
    I really love Khushi's Buaji...
    She always support Khushi through every thick and thin...
    She is the pillar of support for Khushi...
    I really admire her always...

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  60. FL ch. 16:
    I can imagine Khushi's happiness after seeing her Arnav back...
    Her happiness is out of bounds...
    Her love is tested enough plz no more...
    I loved it when she said to her baby that 'Daddy is back'
    It was the most adorable and emotional moment...
    I loved it yar...
    Arnav has lost his memory but still his heart beat only for his Khushi...
    His heart always recognise her and long for her...
    He is again totally into his Khushi...
    Their love was and will always be undying and out of the world...
    And this 'Sheetal' she always irritate Arnav as well as me...
    She is soo cheap... Always wants to attract Arnav by showing her body...
    I hate her...
    Khushi came on the right time...
    She has adopted the perfect way to get her Arnav back...
    In only one day She has affected Arnav alot...
    And in the following week She almost succeceded an bringing her old Arnav back...
    Who smiles and is really adorable...

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  61. FL ch. 16:
    I Loved it how Khushi has closed Sheetal's mouth...
    Khiushi's confidence in her love and belief in Arnav and her heart in truly amazing...
    Arnav is attracted to her like moth to flame...
    He always wants her close to him...
    And at last He kissed her...
    He is not able to stay away from her love and charm....
    How he was afraid that Khushi will not come back and he asked for the promise that she will return back... It was a really heart touching moment...
    I truly loved it...
    It's good that Arnav shifted to hotel...
    This sheetal was getting on my nerves...
    Thank God! He went to her home and came to know the truth...
    Plz Arnav go for it...
    Go to Sheesh mahal...
    To your love...
    I just want to see them together in sunlight in sheesmahal...
    Plz no more hardships...
    Plz reunite them...

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  62. FL ch. 16:
    I found it really cute how Arnav was jealous of Khushi's husband without realising that he is the one...
    And after knowing that he is the one... He bacame sooo happy...
    I'm waiting like hell for next part...

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  63. FL ch. 16:
    I'm waiting like crazy for ch. 17...
    I want to see them together in sheeshmahal again...
    In their ROOM again...
    Together at night and togther in sunlight...
    Plz plz plz plz plz plz update next part soon...
    Plz can you give update of this story before any other story...
    Plz plz plz...
    I'm really going crazy of waiting...
    Plz consider it as my most earnest request...
    Plz give ch. 17 really soon...
    Plz plz plz...

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  64. FL ch. 16:
    I just wish Arnav also get his memory back also...
    Plz update soon...

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  65. Hi Tina , am enjoying FL very much. Please update and continue writing such wonderful stories.

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  66. FL:
    Woah spent my whole day reading the story from the beginning.... im left speechless please update soon before I get hooked to another Story nd forget to read the rest of Fateful Love... But at first I was scared like the story is so cool... couldve been a movie I swear HOW DO U COME UP WITH THIS??? its so cool.... but the weird thing is just yesterday I was in the mysterious corner of youtube where I was watching stuff on time travelling AND UR FF POPS UP!!! but its so cool... I can imagine every bit of it SOOOOOOOO THANKFUL TO GOD FOR WRITERS LIKE YOU... tbh I hated reading and then arshi happened and then I found out about ffs and then about the AMAZING writers like you... so now im hooked... if I get an A in English its solely because of ur Fantastic writing and vocab skills

    MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH Love Nida :P

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  67. Shristi: I love the baby bump pics too haha

    Mayuri B: Agreed, against all odds

    Zryah Ayok: Aww FL will end where it began, Lucknow ;)

    Aarthi: So glad you liked the FL update :) Yes, Khushi has grown up to be a very strong woman, confident in her love and herself. And Arnav had to go to her, I thought Buaji would be the best person to reveal to him how he was in fact "the faceless husband"

    Nivi21: Glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes comments take disappear on blogger, idk either.

    Afrin: I hope it was a good cliffhanger :) BHO now updated!

    Ekta: Agreed. Go, Arnav, Khushi and baby are waiting! :)

    Dess Cent: Nice to hear from you again :)

    Namita11: Yes, Sheesh Mahal has always played a huge role in this story and that is where it will end.

    Tanya Ranjan: Thanks so much :)

    Seema Asthana: Glad you liked it!

    Ray of Light: Thanks hun, I keep switching genres so I don't feel any need to write on another telly couple. ArHi are enough for me :)

    SB: Glad you liked it :)

    Jayanthi: I can imagine. The countdown is on..

    Maira96: You will get all 3 together very soon :)

    Anonymous: Glad you liked it

    Shreya2748: Aww FL is probably my most emotional story *passes kleenex*

    Arshi Alai: Lucknow coming up soon ;)

    Greeshmaraipathora: FL still has 3 chapters and epilogue to go. No worries.

    Arshidewani: Yes, when Buaji told him, Arnav may not have remembered the past, but it all clicked for him.

    What_the: Thanks, glad you liked it

    Rachel Regina: Yes, almost there :)

    ffsheen1: Aww glad you enjoyed the mahaupdate. Nice to know all the emotions came across :)

    Jyothi Parsi: You're totally on track!

    Alexandrite91: 4 times already wow :) Glad you enjoyed it, more soon!

    Seeta_naips: Yes, and the flashbacks will keep on coming ;)

    Amina Mahmood: Oh wow loved reading all your comments hun. Glad you liked all the small little details and especially how FL is coming along. I know it's your fav. Arnav's memories are coming back and that will intensify once he's in Sheesh Mahal. More soon :)

    Fauziyya: Thanks :)

    Anonymous: Another FL fan :) Awesome.

    Nidz Bunny: It's interesting how you stumbled on FL. It has 3 chapters and epilogue to go, will be all up by next month. FL is actually based on a dream I had. I was sleeping on a white canopy bed. Nice to hear you liked it :)

    Madiha Sophia: Awesome :)

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  68. T DOC SAHEB ...KITNA MAZAA AA RAHA HAI TEEREY NAZAR

    CHAL RAHE HAIN TOWEL BADAL RAHE HAIN Wink

    BUBBLE BATH KI HAI YEH KAHANI - EK THA RAJA EK THI RANI

    DONO NE KI APNI MAN MAANI

    RAJA NE SHAMPOO KAR DI RANI KI ZUFEIN

    ABB ASAAN HOGA ULAJHNA UNMEIN

    AAI MUSIBAT BAN KE LOCK

    DEKH LETI BUA TOH HO JAATI SHOCK

    RANI NE PHIR ZOR LAGAYA

    DOOR KNOB KO KUCHCH AISE DABAYA

    DARWAZEY KA PHIR TAALA TOOTA

    DEKH KE RANI KA PASEENA CHCHOOTA Embarrassed

    RAJA NE KI PAPER EXIT Cool

    RANI DID NOT EXPECT IT Shocked

    PHIR BHI DONO NIKAL GAYE SAAF

    DARR GAYE THE HUM BAAP RE BAAP

    BUA RANI BADI SAYANI FACE PACK MEIN NA JAAYE PEHCHAANI

    BUMBLE KO HUMBLE MESSAGE KARTI LOL LOL KEH HANSE

    DEEWANI

    SACH HAI BHAIYAA ''DARR KE AAGEY JEET HAI ''


    ISLIYE APNA ''LUCK'' PEHAN KE CHALO


    LOVED THE UPDATE



    THANKS A LOAD





    KKKA

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  69. DH- 23..
    Lovd it..
    Its awsome..
    Khushi had no doubt she wont forget that, that night was their wedding night..
    Hw arnav regrets about drinking, hw he behaved like a stubborn towards her its amazing..
    Cnt wait for nxt part..

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  70. Baby hold on-13
    Its amazing, lovd it..
    Its hillarious, when buaji interrapt their love moments.. Hw frustrated they look like khushi said' this buaji of mine drive me crazy..'
    Arshi's passioniates momemts were just so sexy, i realy lovd it..
    Will be waiting for nxt update..

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  71. BHO
    Thank you so much!! That was the best bubble bath ever ;) Jealous Arnav definitely had me smirking. Loved everything... from the Arnav's walk of glory to Buaji's LOL

    DH
    News Flash: An Arshi Update can never be too long!!!
    I will read the next update if i haven't succumbed to the pressure of waiting for it :P
    On a more serious note, i love you for ArShi's realization that she is his wife and he is her husband. Now i just want them to not assume the other is hurt and back off. Their love is so deep that they'd be willing to sacrifice their own happiness. But i'm selfish! I want to see ArShi happily together. I want Khushi to forego the ring and Arnav to be thrilled. Please let it be true. There is so much potential for miscommunication that i'm petrified. The only thing that gives me courage is that i trust you to bring ArShi together no matter how long it takes.

    Enthusiastically waiting for the nest update. A little bit of nervousness never hurt anyone right ;)

    FL TEASER
    I'm so excited i feel like i'm intoxicated! ArShi is a very powerful drug!

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  72. DH- it was amazing, cant wait for the next part, i love the fact that they both are accepting there marriage but the assuming part is ... not good, just talk it out! Arnav is feeling guilty for making her cry...awww... but what the hell, he's drinking to escape the worry, aaj toh khushi apne wifey wala avatar dekhaygi!
    BHO- was hot, I'd never be able to have a bubble bath without Arshi's thought now thanks to you, lol, but seroiusly, it was amazing but I think there is something wrong, I have a feeling still, that Arnav's hiding something, the way he went still when Khushi asked if he was a writer... but anyways
    FL TEASER- was awesome, I am soo waiting to see Arnav returning to Sheesh mahal, please update soon!
    ps: thanks for the PM

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  73. read DH and BHO.DH was amazing and bubble bath was soooooooooooooooooo sexy.

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  74. Oh my God!!! Ek Chutki Sindoor ki keemat...did Arnav babu really not know that!! A blessing from God, every woman's dream, the crowning glory of women...
    (wink wink!!!)

    of course, this is more Khoon Bhari Maang...

    Im loving drunk Arnav...he's very 'husbandy'...drinks and takes liberties with the wife...wait, did we just say husband and wife??? whoa!!

    I loved the below sentence, he really is a man of the earth, isnt he?
    <>

    Looking fwd to more!

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  75. Ok...btw I normally sign off as "what_the", the last post was updated as Firebolt!!
    just so you know...
    The sentence that I was referring to in my previous post was this, don't know why it is not appearing in the post..

    <>

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  76. Again!!!
    Ok..
    The sentence was (it really shows how much I loved this sentence, this is my third attempt at pointing it out)

    ...It only intensified his longing for the open sands. A thick cloak, stars overhead and the woman he loves, safe and protected in his arms--he wanted nothing more.

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  77. Absolutely LOVE your writing!! I have tried to comment many times earlier, but something goes wrong and I realize later that the comment didnt get posted.
    In BHO, the LOL from Buaji was awesome and gave me such a god laugh! LOL!! :) Buaji's character is so funny in this one. Love the fact that arnav khushi have expressed that they want each other forever!
    DH: Finally arnav khushi are married and Khushi's childhood engagement doesnt hold any importance anymore. Curious to know if they would decide to go back and continue with Arnav's mission now instead of taking Khushi to North. Pretty unusual wedding night for them, but Arnav was very cute, repeatedly calling Khushi his wife! :)

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  78. DH Ch23
    wow so they are staying in a room for their "Suhaag Raat"
    my,my an intoxicated Dark Prince with a very angry Angel locked
    in one room
    SPARKS that lead to FIRE

    BHO Ch13
    whoa what a bubble bath!!!!
    and Mr Raizada exited said bathroom with just a magazine for cover, FLAMES

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  79. It was a manic day yesterday, but I was so excited to see the 2 updates and made sure to read both in-between but could only comment now.

    BHO - Part 13
    An incredibly passionate and sensual update....an oh so heavenly bubble bath between Mr Sexy and Sushi!! Love the intensity of their feelings and actions, Arnav's jealousy and how Arnav can be so calm when Khushi is frantic. Khushi's character here is quite assertive and is not afraid to show Arnav how she feels. But, why oh why, did the moment have to be ruined by Buaji :( She has deifnitely replaced ButterBall!! And her frightful masks are not helping either. Very bold of Mr Sexy to make his way from the bathroom to his room, although Khushi had left him with no other choice but if he had not improvised with the magazine, I think Khushi would have literally jumped out of her skin!! But with Khushi being so distracted and edgy, I feel sorry for Buaji who has literally put her foot in it with the "LOL". Looking forward to the next update with more romantic, uninterrupted moments!!

    DH - Ch 23
    This update really affirmed their roles as husband and wife perfectly. I loved how you chose their wedding night to be spent in a lavishly decorated room, especially after all the hardship they have endured up to this point. You have described the inner turmoil that both are experiencing as a result of Arnav's actions, brilliantly. It is wonderful that within themselves they are acknowledging each other in their new positions but I really hope they are able to talk soon and admit to each other openly how they truly feel and not base their discussion on merely assuming how the other is feeling and therefore not being completely honest. But as in the past, I am sure their pure, passionate love will shine through. They behaved as a typical husband and wife with Arnav getting drunk and Khushi being furious. I just love how Arnav addresses Khushi as 'wife' and how Khushi was hoping Arnav was not so intoxicated :) Hopefully, his bath will help sober him up even more and they can share a most memorable wedding night, filled with much romance!!

    FL - Teaser
    I am actually sad that this story is coming to an end, I loved every moment of it. It is a an intense, soul-stirring, beautiful piece of work from you Tina, can't wait for their reunion in the majestic Sheesh Mahal, where it all began, fitting that it ends there. I hope Buaji will be part of their little family, she has been a most warm-hearted, endearing character here.

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  80. BH 13
    Hot update. Loved buaji's message

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  81. BHO chp 13
    i realy want to lock buaji somewhere so she cant disturb Arshi ever again.. but anyways bubble bath was super hot beside buaji inturrupt them.. i was just thinking what would hav happen if buaji didnt ruined that moment.. even khushi is getting pissed off by buajis inturruption..
    mr sexy is bold that he came out from the bathroom by just holding magzine..
    buajis msg part was really LOL!!!
    waiting for next part..

    DH chp 23
    bath tub was also there hmm..
    i really liked this chp very much.. khushi furious avatar was awsome & drunk arnav was so cute. whenever he addressed khushi as 'wife' i realy loved it..
    whatever they thinking about eachothers reaction about their marriage i hope talk it out soon before their thinking take rout towards misunderstanding..
    waiting for thhis part continuation..

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  82. Update soon!!!! ps. You are the best Dr. Tina

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  83. KKKA: Wow, loved your lyrical style as always. I wish I could make everyone read your comments, they're amazing and so hilarious.

    Sanghamitra Roy: Agreed, he better regret drinking. More soon!

    Alexandrite91: Hey loved your comments :) Yes, Arhi's love is very deep and the ring is nothing but a hindrance at this point. It will come up for discussion as you'll see ;) Hope you like the continuation

    Zyrah Ayok: Yup, they really need to talk it out. Haha Mr. Sexy is taking over magazines, bubble baths, and the list continues.

    Seema Asthana: Blush! Thanks :)

    Firebolt/what_the: Haha yes he is acting completely like a husband at this point :) And about sindoor, unlike Khushi he has a different opinion as you'll see. Oh glad you liked that line especially, third time was the charm :)

    Shilpi: Hey this comment did get through :) Glad you like Buaji aka Maddy Bua. I've tried to make her more fun and cool haha. And more to come in DH shortly..

    Seeta_naips: Yes, a room for their wedding night. I thought it would be a contrast from all the nights on the sands. Glad you liked BHO too :)

    Aarthi: Hey hun, loved your comments (as usual!). I'm glad you found some time for them :) BHO--yup Buaji and her well-known interruptions strike again. Glad you liked DH and rightly said, they're both battling their own doubts at this time and the drinking has not helped :P I'm sad to see FL end too, but there will be lots of Arshi moments before that point, no worries :) And yes, it ends where it began.

    Namita: Awesome :)

    ffsheen1: haha Arhi are probably having the same thought about buaji and her interruptions. Yup, bath scenes all around it seems like. Weird how BHO and DH coincided on that.

    Suzy: Aww thanks :)

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  84. awesome update for fateful love + loved the other one too

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  85. hayee, mai mare java. tina those updates were really good. thank god that in fl that arnav remembered everything. I hope in dh khushi makes the right choice. loved the updates.

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  86. such a sweet update, do come with a sequel, as i luv ur writitng am allowing u to end this soon................n come with more.............., continue soon...............................going to wait for the update..............

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  87. Amazing updates!!!!!!

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  88. Fateful love..
    Lovd the update..
    Its realy beautiful..
    Cnt express hw i m feeling right..
    U have brought tears in my eyes..
    U describd each and every feeling, every emotion of their pure true love..
    How arnv remember everything, hw they reunited again, its amazing..
    I realy honord to be a reader in ur blog..
    I cnt give enough thanks for that..
    Love u..

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  89. DH..
    Lovd the update...
    Awsome..
    Nw its time for desicion..
    Realy excited for nxt update..
    Cnt wait..
    Plz update soon..

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  90. Amazing update!!! Finally Arnav remember his past and the both r together with their baby:)

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  91. Super Amazing and Awesome update of FL! yes! I was right!.. Sheesh Mahal it is, can't tell you how excited I was About the update :D... Finally Arnav remember's and he's with Khushi...I am So sad that its coming to an end :'( but happy that you said we'll have loads of ArShi Moments before the end, I am so Going to miss this... :(
    DH was so good as well, Aman finally accepting the truth that he loves Maya, Taj's so cute, by the end of the journet even Imran may accept he still loves Zara because of Tajs' nagging s... As for Mr.& Mrs. Raizada clad that they managed to talk it out, but now comes the serious part, making choices and decisions, what will Khushi do, I know the rings just a burden for her and hopefully she'll discard it... right coz she's definitely accepting the marriage and never letting go of Arnav!
    SP TEASER- can't wait for it, PLEASE update soon....
    ..
    ps: thanks for the PM

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  92. FL: more than I expected. He remembered everything. And they are finally together. Can he save the sheeshmahal now from turning it into a mall???? I can't wait for sheetal's reaction... fateful love s undoubtedly my favourite story in writing.
    I wonder what will be garima's reaction if he sees arnav without knowing anything???? I was imagining a 100 scenarios....it was fun

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  93. Both updts was mindblowing.
    I hav a request to u. Di,can u write a story abt arnav being a father.hw he wil treat his child,his care etc. Or else u can include all these in secret passion. Hope tht u wil consider it.

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  94. FL I love h happy endings and to see that at last has I must all odds they found each other..their love triumphs.....I feel too happy ....lovely chapter...
    DH wonderful u p date....can't wait to see what kushi decides and how they make their journey now...Will a man Maya find them before they run into more dangers

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  95. Desert Heat ch24
    they are just so explosive together
    now Khushi has to make her choice

    Fateful Love ch17
    Finally he has remembered after reaching Sheesh Mahal
    Now they can be together

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  96. FL chp 17
    very very beautiful update..
    finally Arnav remember everything i m so happy..
    his journey towards regaining memory was amazing. since the time he reachd lucknow then sheesh mahal & finally their room where he spent every moment with Khushi was so beautiful & specialy the moment he saw little arnav n khushi playing & running all around the place.
    im so happy that they are together but i cant help it being sad that its going to end soon.. it is realy close to my heart i m going to miss Arshi's this tale very badly..

    DH chp 24
    their little moment in tub was realy passionate..
    finaly they talk it out & happy that they talk in ful concious state instead of arnav's drunked state, bcoz with that both aware & remember what they talked..he let khushi know that he consider her as his wife n everthing from the time they made lovee not after puting sindoor in her partition now is time for khushis to decide to whom she choose, to whome who put engagement ring in her finger in childhood & dont know him at all OR to whome she consider him everything, who put sindoor in her partition & more importantly whom she love...
    hopefully & deep down in my heart i know she 'll choose Arnav but *finger cross* but let see...

    SP teaser : was awsome khushi is getting bold day by da.... realy waiting for that

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  97. Dh- I hate decision making! Please Dont make me miserable! :(
    FL- yay!! Arnav back in action! Finally!
    SP- looks like a hot steamy chapter.. Can't wait!!!

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  98. When I checked for the update on Monday, I was delighted to find not just the DH update but FL too, what a treat!! thank you so much Tina:) Even though I read both on Monday, unfortunately could only comment now....

    FL - Ch 17
    I loved the way you wrote this chapter, as a reader one felt almost a part of it, being able to sense and relate to the anguish, sadness and pain of separation that both Khushi and Arnav were feeling. I think that the location was very significant where the both of them finally found the answers to their looming questions. Very appropriate the way Khushi's eye catches the pic in the newspaper almost at the same time that Arnav is landing in Lucknow and her yearning for him to be there with her. Very poignant, the manner in which Arnav literally walks through his memories, being beckoned by the younger him and Khushi , until he reaches their bedroom where it all began and then his memories come flooding back. I loved the setting of the rose garden for their reunion, it has played such an important role throughout the story, especially with its connection to his mum. I was very curious about the title of the chapter 'Sunlight' and was very special the way Arnav tells Khushi that he always wondered what she would look like in the sunlight. The reunion was simply amazing and breath-taking. I felt very sorry for Arnav when he tells Khushi that he missed everything especially now that they both realise how close they were to each other when Arnav arrived in her time. Very beautiful moment when Arnav kneels an kisses Khushi's belly and the baby kicks not once but twice :) They had to endure the greatest test from the Divine, but their love guided them to each other and now there can only be happiness for them....Wonder what the evil Garima would say now....Also curious as to the Maliks reaction as to Arnav getting his memory back, his job situation with them and whether Arnav will be able to save Sheesh Mahal from being demolished to make way for the mall. Now there is a Raizada to restore Sheesh Mahal to its original grandeur and raise the next generation of Raizadas....Very excited about the upcoming chapters and the Arshi moments before the story ends:)

    DH - Ch 23
    A very memorable suhaag raat but definitely not the kind Khushi was hoping for! Amazing how even in a drunken stupor Arnav stills desires Khushi so much, very sensual bath tub scene. Even though Arnav and Khushi have not confronted the issue at hand, they have slipped so comfortably into the roles of husband and wife. Very endearing how Khushi calls Arnav 'love' and 'sweetheart'....Also a blushing moment when Khushi tells Arnav about him 'shushing' her :) I was really glad that they spoke honestly and openly and that they both know how the other feels and now for the very important choice Khushi has to make which is actually a crystal clear one. The significance of the sindoor far outweighs the engagement ring especially as we saw from Khushi's memory of her mum. I wonder if Aman was using a play on words to convey his true feelings to Maya....Taj is really cute with his constant badgering of Imran....hope that he will finally acknowledge his love for Zara and that they will reunite. Curious about the chapters to follow, Khushi's choice and where Nidhant Singh makes an appearance....

    SP - Teaser
    This is definitely going to be sizzling hot. I think Arnav is going to have his hands full with a Khushi and her raging hormones. But they passion has always been explosive that we can't expect anything less :)

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  99. Hello Tina.I am Nisha from Maldives. I'm a huge fan of Barun and Sanaya. And after IPKKND i just fell in love wit them Specially Barun :P. Your stories and beautiful. Eversince i found about this blog, i keep checking for updates twice a day. whenever i read your stories my mood improves. theres so much feeling and life n romance in your stories.. I have always been very much into reading romance novels.. but after reading your stories with my favourite characters, its just awesome. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful stories with all of us. I really appreciate the effort.
    And Pls Pls update Baby, Hold on soon. I love the arnav in that story :) so plsssss update soon

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  100. Hey tina..wooh!! Such a long updates..i was busy with my intrnals didnt got d tym to read.but nw read al d updates..wt to say abt b.h.o-bubble bath lovely..so romantic.loved it..cnt blv dt mr.sexy actualy came out f d bathroom wtht clothes*blush* amazing dear.nd desrted heat wt to say..it was more than expected d passion d love der bond is marvelous..i was just waiting fr khushi to remove dt nidhants ring..bt kya yar? Again at d perfect tym cliffhanger..uff!! F.l o.m.g iam waiting fr d climax..cnt blv it wl end so soon.such a unique story..u really r amazing writer baby..keep un writing..ur stories has kept arshi alive in our thoughts..update soon

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  101. Shit my comment got published as anonymous.. Its me afrin

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  102. Loved FL chapter 17 - brilliant!!!!!!!

    SB

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  103. Hi Tina,
    I am waiting for 1st anniversary special chapter for Secret Passion. I have checked IF and this blog many times today to see whether you have updated. Will you update SP today?
    Pinkly – IF Id

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  104. FL Ch. 17:
    This chapter is really really close to my heart...
    I can't express my feelings yar...
    It was like everything is happening infront of my eyes...
    You have expressed everything in the most beautiful and fantastic way...
    I have again fallen in love with FL after reading this update...

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  105. FL Ch. 17:
    The starting of the chapter was amazing with Khushi remembring the old Grandeur of SheeshMahal and her Arnav...
    Coming to her and calling her...
    It was an awsum scene...
    And again Khushi's disappointment that it was just a dream...
    And then Khushi finding the newspaper and coming to know the whole truth...
    And Arnav coming to Lucknow and start remembring from the bridge and then coming to SheeshMahal and remembring their childhood...
    Then going to their room and remembring everything from their first meeting to last...
    You have written everything in the most beautiful, awsum and excellent way...
    I can't describe my feelings dear...
    And then his search for Khushi and finally found her in the sunlight...
    Which he always wanted...
    And then their reunion was out of the world yar...
    They are the most cute and adorable couple...
    Their feelings, their love, their emotions everything was beautiful...
    Finally they are together for forever now...
    Arnav and Khushi's all dreams will come true now...
    I'm sad that FL is ending yar...
    It is my most fav story...
    I hope you write one more story like this which will take us to another dreamland...

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  106. @ BHO Ch. 12:
    The Bubble bath was really refreshing and passionate...
    Arnav is becoming sooo naughty nowadays...
    Their romance is getting out of limits now...
    But Buaji as always destroyed everything...
    And Arnav coming with Magzine cover only was literally hilarious and blushworthy...
    I hope they disclose their relationship soon...
    I don't want butter monster to come and destry everything...
    Plz update soon...

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  107. @ DH ch. 24:
    It was a mindblowing update...
    First Arnav getting drunk then being stubborn and wants to take a bath...
    He is really a child sometimes...
    Then his request to her to make him bath was sooo cute and adorable...
    Their romance in the bathtub was sooo passionate and sensual...
    But it ended in an awful way...
    Nevermind...
    And what to say about our Maya and Aman...
    Aman is sooo tough to crack yar...
    Poor Maya is really disheartened now...
    I just wish they sort their differences soon...
    And now coming to Taj and Imran...
    I always loved Taj...
    He is sooo hilarious and amazing...
    He is also the soul of DH along with Arshi...
    His jokes...
    His ways to convince others all are fantastic...
    His mission matchmaking is back now...
    He really wants to convince imran about zara...
    And now coming back to Arshi...
    What to say yar...
    They understand eachother sooo well and also read other silence but still they are soo far from eachother...
    I like it that Khushi has not yelled on him or argued with him about his drinking...
    She was behaving like a truly understanding wife...
    That's good...
    And at last it's good that Arnav told her to finally take a decision...
    This Nidhant and his ring is also getting on my nerves now...
    Plz Khushi make a choice and end this doubt once and for all...
    They are made for eachother...
    And they should be husband and wife...
    No damned Ring can seperate them...

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  108. @ SP teaser ch. 22:
    It was truly a SP style teaser...
    The passion, desire and romance is in the air...
    These two are really unquenchable...
    I sometime wonder how can someone love upto this extend...
    Their desire and desire for eachother will never get lessend even an inch...
    They are made for eachother...
    And Khushi has became really naughty now...
    She is making Arnav stunned nowadays with her bahaviour...
    Plz update the ch. soon dear...
    It's really going to be fun...

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  109. Sorry for late comments dear...
    I'm buzy with my medical exams nowadays...
    They are hectic...
    Plz forgive him...
    I always read the updates as quick as they are updated but i get late in commenting...
    Personal life is taking a toll on me...
    Next time i'll try to comment soon...
    Plz give next update soon...
    Plz plz plz...

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  110. Finally some update!
    BHO was awesome, the buttery nightmare was ....
    dammit Maddy bua, she always spoils eveything, poor Arnav all he's plans have ruined, but good to know he'll be following Khushi to Lucknow, he so wanted to say 'I Love You', but hopefully in the next update...
    congratz for SP anniversary, I really love that story, but then I love all your work, waiting for the mahaupdate...
    Please please please update it as soon as you could...

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  111. BHO
    awesome update

    sida(IF)

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  112. i just read BHO. exceptionally beautiful.

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  113. BHO - Part 14

    Thank you Tina for the update, despite your hectic schedule, you are the best!!

    This has to be the saddest chapter in this hilarious story thus far....You were brilliant in writing Arnav's dream, my heart was in my mouth, I thought we had seen the end of Butterball, thankfully it was just a nightmare. I like the aspect of Arnav wrestling with his feelings in trying to express himself verbally to Khushi, but with the love they share, they don't even have to say the "3 little words', even Arnav shares the same sentiment. Love how both Arnav and Khushi are so intuitive about what each other is feeling. Really sweet how Khushi feels for her best friend. The interruptions by Maddy Bua is just too much!! Poor Mr Sexy and Sushi can't share their stolen moments in peace:) I wanted to bawl my eyes out when Buaji gave Khushi the ticket to Lucknow, even though it was really a sweet gesture on Buaji's side, but poor Arnav had planned for Khushi's birthday to be 'the' day....hopefully he will be able to have his way at the farmhouse in Lucknow....the mention of farmhouse always conjures up romantic, passionate, sensual encounters!! Looking forward to a birthday party to remember!!

    Congratulations on the anniversary of SP, love the story....another testament to your eloquent and brilliant writing skills:)

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  114. BHO 14

    Loved this really long chapter - hope they confess soon and I secretley hope Butterball returns - really looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
    Please update soooon!

    SB

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  115. BHO 14

    Loved the chapter as always...and the sizzzzzzzling chemistry! I love this Romeo Arnav so much...he makes me swoon! Cant wait to see what he has planned for Khushi's birthday and the action at the farmhouse!

    Looking forward to the next part eagerly! :*

    Cheers!
    Rayolight

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  116. hi Tina!! finally i am happy to get an update from u... Its been so long.... BHO 14 was awesome as always... what a sizzling chemistry they share.... I am head over heels with Mr. Sexy Raizada.... Cant wait for the farmhouse part now.... Waiting eagerlyfor the next part.... Sorry cudnt comment on your last update...

    nivi21-IF

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  117. BHO chp 14

    thank you for the update Tina, i was so happy after seeing ur update..

    realy that buttery dream was very horrible, at first i thought it was reak but thank god!! it was nightmare.. a buttery one..
    their moment was awsome. they both understand eachother very well, how he understand her when she sad with her frnds problem & console her..

    Mr Sexy is planning special to tell that 3 words on her b'day but buaji ne Arnav k plan pe paani pher diya by giving khushi lucknows ticket..
    but i m sure he'll make out somethung to be there with khushi & plan more bigger, special & romantic to tell her his feeling &with the FARMHOUSE it has to very sensual &passionate..waiting for that part eagerly..

    & a big congratulation for SP first Anniversary & i wish SP celebrate mor anniversry.. waiting for SP 's update soon..

    & thanks once again for the update..

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  118. Sorry I have been away and had not read the chapters... just caught up with DH Ch 23-24... n wow tht was just amazing... so they both consider them as husband n wife..n now the choice is hers to make... so after coming so far is she not going to meet Nidhant or will she still go ahead n meet him to return his ring... but one thing i dont understand is y is arnav aganist it,,,doesnt he know she just wants to return the ring?? y the fight.. or did i miss something?
    Oh had fun reading an intoxicated Mr. Raizada :D and a fuming Mrs. Raizada :D

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  119. It's the first time i'm commenting here and I want to applaud you for both your dedication to this blog and for your stories. I'm also a fanfic writer for another fandom and I totally understand the difficulties in running a blog, writing several stories at the same time all while leading a busy life.

    Your works are a great source of inspiration for other writers. Keep up the awesome work :)

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  120. My favourite story so far is DH. I also love BHO. You totally killed it with that lol text. And also the latest part of BHO nearly gave me a heart attack at the beginning. Awesome work :)

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  121. Hi Tina,
    New reader of your stories.
    Finished Secret Passion C 21.
    Passionate story...so well written. Hope you continue soon.
    Moving onto another story.
    Kerrie

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  122. Heyy Tina I've been a silent reader for many of your FFs and have loved them to the core especially DH, SP and BHO!!
    - Urvi

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  123. Thank you for the update of BHO. Love all the stories... Pls update soon..

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  124. Just finished Fateful Love.
    What a beautiful story.
    Will return for updates.
    Have a good day !!

    Kerrie

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  125. Just read d chapter buttery nightmare..amazing as usual..for a moment i tht it is nt a nightmare bt later aftr rdng d whole i gt to knw dt arnav was dreaming..lovely.update sn dear.

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  126. @Madiha Sophia: awesome :)

    @anonymous: agreed, it's decision time in DH

    @greeshmaraipathora: no plans for sequel. I think FL will have the perfect conclusion where all the loose ends are tied up so there's no need for it :)

    @Suzy: thanks :)

    @Sanghamitra Roy: Aww so glad you liked FL so much. Means a lot when readers have such a reaction to what I write :)

    @Vanita Poonai: Yes, finally he remembers :)

    @Zyrah Ayok: I'm going to miss FL too :'( Yes, it's time for Khushi to choose in DH: sindoor or the ring, though the decision isn't as hard now as before ;)

    @namita11: Now that Arnav has his memory back, he will never let Sheesh Mahal become a mall. About Garima--you'll find out soon.

    @Joe Arshi: Yes, it will be worked into SP so no need of a new story. Plus, I don't have the time.

    @Mayuri B: I love happy endings too :)

    @seeta_naips: Yes things are wrapping up in FL and confrontation coming in DH

    @ffsheen1: I'm going to miss FL too, glad you liked how the memories were revealed to him. DH--you're on track ;)

    @Rachel Regina: no plans to make anyone miserable :) but there will be some angst

    @Aarthi: So glad you liked the FL chapter, it has been quite a journey from start to end and it was so uplifting to write the reunion scene. More to come soon! DH--you're on track there with your questions. Khushi has a decision to make but unlike the night at the gypsy camp, things have changed now--for her at least. Since the sindoor means something to her. Hope you like the coming chapters.

    @Anonymous (Nisha): Aww that means a lot hun. I love the show and them too. Glad you like my FFs so much. BHO update very shortly ;)

    @Afrin: So glad you liked the update :D I love writing on arshi and DH is my personal fav u know ;)

    @SB: Thanks :)

    @Pinkly: I unfortunately got tied up and couldn't update. Posting SP's mahaupdate shortly.

    @Amina: So glad you liked FL, I know you're a huge fan of that story :) Glad I did the return of Arnav's memory justice. BHO--More twists and turns coming up but agree with you on butterball. DH--haha, everyone loves Taj and his matchmaking. Arshi made a lot of progress this chapter, more soon! And I can understand about life being hectic, I'm in medicine too :)

    @Zyrah Ayok: Building up to that "ILU" moment. Almost there :)

    @sida: thanks :)

    @seema asthana: thanks :)

    @Aarthi: Aww glad you liked the chapter, yes it was quite a shock to both arshi when that ticket was given. Poor lovebirds.. but they'll find a way ;) Your words on SP mean a lot, thanks! :)

    @SB: haha ur the first who wants butterball back i believe :)

    @Rayoflight: Mr. Sexy is quite irresistible, I don't blame you :)

    @nivi12: Glad you're liking BHO so much. Farmhouse coming up ;)

    @ffsheen1: Thank you! Can't believe it's been a year of SP already. And yes, Mr. Sexy has several plans up his leather jacket sleeves ;)

    @ekta: You haven't missed anything, but as Arnav has mentioned, he's very jealous of the ring and also scared to lose Khushi--even though there's no reason for it. But he is human and seeing the ring on her finger for weeks now takes a toll

    @anonymous: Hi there. Yes, it's definitely not easy to balance writing with work and life in general.

    @anonymous: LOL glad you liked BHO so far. more to come ;)

    @Kerrie: Glad to hear you liked SP :) It is passion-infused for sure.

    @Urvi: Nice to hear from you hun :)

    @Anonymous: Thanks, updates on their way ;)

    @Kerrie: Glad you enjoyed reading FL, there are 2 chapters and epilogue to go.

    @afrin: the buttery nightmare was only a dream thank goodness :) That is not the way arhi plan to reveal their relationship to Maddy Bua :)

    Loved reading all the comments everyone, really encouraging
    --Tina

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  127. Oh god its payal.....I too suspected her only because u make it a point to shock us. So everyone s n my villian list

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  128. BHO 15

    Ohhhhh nooooo she forgot her phone! I think we all thought he would turn up to the party in a sari or as a waiter, no way did I think her serenade her with a song! Bit of course, he is ASR after all - he's soooo smooth and never backs down! Brilliant brilliant chapter - I've already got ideas of where this story will go -
    Tho I do want butterball back - will there be rocky times ahead, who knows? Just loved everything about this update - I think we all want our very own ASR...

    Fab fab fab update!!! Looking forward to the next chaper!

    SB

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  129. Lovd the update..
    It was amazing..
    Finaly arnav has come nd sang for her..
    Lovd the moment..

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  130. Baby Hold On>> Part 15: Birthday Surprise
    Fantastic updt. Arnav is so so swt. Khushi realised tht she is in love with him,great. Dont knw wht happens when they reaches delhi. But 4 nw enjoy ur bday with ur love. OMG THE PRECAP. U r surely gonna kill me. Cant wait *impatient*
    Secret Passion>> Episode 22: Aftershocks
    again im repeating tis question "di u wil nt separate arhi na?" Everyone is against their beautiful & wndrfl relationship. Y is tht karan's mom still sticking to guptas. Shameless woman >:o . They romance ,speechless *blushing blushing still blushing* awww morning sickness & his caring nature . Wht a hubby :* . Tht traffic woman came there for hurting other >:o *hate u stop signal wali dadi* . Arnav, i loved the way u roar at tht gud 4 ntg dadi of urs. Khushi,dont cry dr. Ur arnav is there na (tina di too) . They wil make everything right. Payal, ur the villian :o y r u doing tis? R u after khushi's arnav or money? U wil get punished 4 tis. Tina di & asr wil make sure of it. Cngrats for finishing 1 yr old bd SP. Cntn sn.

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  131. Baby Hold On>> Part 15: Birthday Surprise
    OMG THE PRECAP. U r surely gonna kill me. Cant wait *impatient*
    Secret Passion>> Episode 22: Aftershocks
    again im repeating tis question "di u wil nt separate arhi na?" Everyone is against their beautiful & wndrfl relationship. Y is tht karan's mom still sticking to guptas. Shameless woman >:o . They romance ,speechless *blushing blushing still blushing* awww morning sickness & his caring nature . Wht a hubby :* . Tht traffic woman came there for hurting other >:o *hate u stop signal wali dadi* . Arnav, i loved the way u roar at tht gud 4 ntg dadi of urs. Khushi,dont cry dr. Ur arnav is there na (tina di too) . They wil make everything right. Payal, ur the villian :o y r u doing tis? R u after khushi's arnav or money? U wil get punished 4 tis. Tina di & asr wil make sure of it. Cngrats for finishing 1 yr old bd SP. Cntn sn.

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  132. Secret Passion>> Episode 22: Aftershocks
    again im repeating tis question "di u wil nt separate arhi na?" Everyone is against their beautiful & wndrfl relationship. Y is tht karan's mom still sticking to guptas. Shameless woman >:o . They romance ,speechless *blushing blushing still blushing* awww morning sickness & his caring nature . Wht a hubby :* . Tht traffic woman came there for hurting other >:o *hate u stop signal wali dadi* . Arnav, i loved the way u roar at tht gud 4 ntg dadi of urs. Khushi,dont cry dr. Ur arnav is there na (tina di too) . They wil make everything right. Payal, ur the villian :o y r u doing tis? R u after khushi's arnav or money? U wil get punished 4 tis. Tina di & asr wil make sure of it. Cngrats for finishing 1 yr old bd SP. Cntn sn.

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  133. Secret Passion>> Episode 22: Aftershocks
    (cntn) Their romance ,speechless *blushing blushing still blushing* awww morning sickness & his caring nature . Wht a hubby :* . Tht traffic woman came there for hurting other >:o *hate u stop signal wali dadi* . Arnav, i loved the way u roar at tht gud 4 ntg dadi of urs. Khushi,dont cry dr. Ur arnav is there na (tina di too) . They wil make everything right. Payal, ur the villian :o y r u doing tis? R u after khushi's arnav or money? U wil get punished 4 tis. Tina di & asr wil make sure of it. Cngrats for finishing 1 yr old bd SP. Cntn sn.

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  134. Secret Passion>> Episode 22: Aftershocks
    (cntn) Tht traffic woman came there for hurting other >:o *hate u stop signal wali dadi* . Arnav, i loved the way u roar at tht gud 4 ntg dadi of urs. Khushi,dont cry dr. Ur arnav is there na (tina di too) . They wil make everything right. Payal, ur the villian :o y r u doing tis? R u after khushi's arnav or money? U wil get punished 4 tis. Tina di & asr wil make sure of it. Cngrats for finishing 1 yr old bd SP. Cntn sn.

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  135. Secret Passion>> Episode 22: Aftershocks
    (cntn) They wil make everything right. Payal, ur the villian :o y r u doing tis? R u after khushi's arnav or money? U wil get punished 4 tis. Tina di & asr wil make sure of it. Cngrats for finishing 1 yr old bd SP. Cntn sn.

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  136. Sry di,cant post my cmt in a post.so posted it in 5 posts. *pardon me 4 spamming like tis*
    IF id : joe4joe

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  137. Secret Passion
    I am doing a happy dance coz I had guessed right that the sister was none other than Payal. The reason has yet to hit me though:))
    But seriously am I smart or what?... hehe

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  138. omg payal is trying to kill khushi. but why?. loved how arnav crashed khushi's party. both the mahaupdates and the os was really good. please update fl and dh soon also.

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  139. Thanks for the mahaupdates of BHO and SP
    BHO was awesome😃 Arnav fulfilled his promise to wish Khushi directly!!!
    SP: so Payal is the culprit didn't believe it... Poor Anjali have to go thru this. Hopefully Payal will be caught soon! Wonder why she is doing this???
    Thanks for the pm😉

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  140. Hi
    Please do not delay your updates on this site - I've never used the IF website (looks too confusing!), please continue updating on this site!

    SB

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  141. BHO- wa s Superb and Amazing, I knew ASR wouldn't dress like a girl but was expecting him as the waiter, but surprise! surprise! he comes singing and that too in Spanish... ASR! can anyone get as perfect as that? *sigh* was worried when Khushi forgot her phone but alas ASR and his stubbor.... ahem ahem determination, he came and wished her personally...the next chapter looks promising...

    SP- was Super Hot
    I guess the first instinct is always right! IT IS Payal!
    Grrrhhh.... what does she want? why is she doing this? Is it something to do with Khushi not being her actual sister? her broken marriage or marriage with Akash? money? or...maybe...Arnav?
    its sooo confusing!
    Poor Anjali Di, but Payal, your days are numbered ASR and Tina are going to unveil you and finish your game!
    Now I'll be eagerly waiting for DH and FL updates...
    Please update soon....

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  142. SP..wow..dat was a hot n surprising update. Payal...never thought of it..its scary...
    BHO..wow..again..d surprise is yet to come...
    God bless you
    Brkn angl

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  143. OMG!! I just read BHO.... at work! and can't stop grinning like an idiot... have already earned a few curious glances...but cant help it...
    I absolutely loved the update!! You wrote about their emotions when they were separated at the railway station, so beautifully - it may seem to the world that it is silly to get so upset about a few days of judai, but the heart knows how it will pine for the one it loves. Felt it all the way in my heart!!

    The surprise was awesome as well!! loved how he came, he sang and he danced his way deeper in to her heart...I love this Arnav - sexy and sweet - irresistible combination!!

    Ohhhhh and the teaser pic for the next chapter of BHO....hottttt!! Arnav and Khushi are totally going to get badmaash aren't they? Can't wait!

    I was so eager to come and post a comment here - I dint realise that I have not yet read the SP update - and now Payal's name has jumped out at me on this page several times... :( So I guess the suspense is lost...
    Of course, I still hv to read the update though! Will be back with a new comment!

    Love,
    what_the

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  144. BHO 15
    Whoa Raizada is so romantic, singing for Khushi on her birthday

    SP 22
    so hot and passionate
    my God I absolutely hate the Gupta and Raizada families
    they are so spiteful and bitchy

    damn Payal is so nasty and underhanded
    hmm I wonder if she is in love with Arnav and hates Khushi
    for that?

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  145. SP 22
    Hey Tina... Loved it soooooo muchhhhh
    Passionate blushing part...aside...
    I really dint Expect it was Payal Shatirg DiMag behind attemptive murder on Khushi...
    But the big Question....WHY...? Is it for PROPERTY...? Is it for REVENGE on Khushi for spoiling her first MARRIAGE...? Is it to rule Shantivan...as Anjali was sick... N after Manorama.. She would be the LADY BOSS..?
    Why did she TRAP Anjali ...to save herself...or is there some other big reason behind it...?

    Now... Pls tell us when Arnav n Khushi will come to know about Payal being behind it...? She sooo successfully mislead POLICE...? Is KARAN n his Mom along with Payal too..?

    P.S: it's sooo sad Anjali is still having to suffer More.... But what ever u plan.... PLEASE DONT SEPERATE ARSHI with MISUNDERSTANDINGS even for SHORT pERIOD... They already went thru sooo much... JUST CANT SEE HIS DADI N HER PARENTS WINNING....

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  146. BHO: That was SO SWEET! I'm totally in love with the characters!! Thanks for the awesome update. I hope they have a wonderfully scandalous night ;)

    SP: SO HOT! LOVED IT!!!!

    Thank you so much for writing! I really do appreciate it!

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  147. Thanks for the two Mahaupdate..

    BHO chp 15
    its really sweet & beautiful update.. station seen was very emotional, its very difficult to stay away from a person whom u love even though it is for a short period.. so we can understand..
    but in a positive way, this period help Khushi to realise that she love Mr. Sexy.
    & Mr. Sexy also complited his promise/stubborness to be there with Khushi on her b'day.
    i realy like his entry & the way he asked khushi 'Surprise' ,the way he sing a song for her realy loved it.. eagerly waiting for there private celebration with only two of them, what he hav plan for her & how he going to confess his love...

    SP chp 22
    at one side its realy a very hot, passionate ful of romance blushing moment with their bold, sensual execise, hot shower .
    & than other side shockingly surprise update with the reveltion that Payal was The sister who wants to kill khushi, till the time i was thinking that it was Anjali coz the women who was guiding that killer about arnav's room in the palace in NY coz arnav has said to khushi that this palace is known by his parent, sister & himself so i dont find any connection of payal there & the biggest is the reason why she is doing all that, desperatly looking forward for reason to be revealed..
    & one more thing i forget to mention that i realy chershed the moment where he help in her morninig sickness & their playful fight where she playfuly hit him, yanked his hair.which also shows how much their married life is..

    & once again congratulation for SP first Anniversary..

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  148. read mind games completely..
    it was mind blowing *claps*

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  149. Wow, two maha-updates!! Absolutely fabulous!! Many thanks Tina:) I really enjoyed reading the four reviews on SP, they write beautifully too! Please do not delay your updates here, I only read your stories from this website and do not go on IF.

    SP - Episode 22
    Scorching hot chapter!! Khushi in her role as seductive temptress, and a very creative approach to yoga:) It is truly amazing how their chemistry and passion is unparalleled, it is complimented exquisitely by their deep, passionate soulful love. Just loved how caring Arnav is as a husband with regard to Khushi's morning sickness and how he even ventured to prepare breaksfast:) Tugged at the heart-strings though when he mentioned that this is their first child and they are alone. Karan's evil mother should be banished along with him!! It is apparent that they are all waiting for this marriage to crumble and fall apart and then they will be able to gloat at Khushi's misfortune and treat her even worse. The audacity of Dadi to show up at their home and tell Khushi the things she said, so glad that Arnav stopped it in time. But with all the things said by Karan's mother, Garima, Buaji and Dadi, cannot help but feel unsettled, almost as if you are preparing us for something. Please don't separate Arnav and Khushi, no matter what they encounter. So the unsuspecting Payal is setting-up the emotionally unbalanced Anjali, quite a revelation, although both I and many other readers thought it might be, but you were brilliant in the clues you gave, which made it point to both Dadi and more Anjali. Unless, I missed something, cannot fathom why she would hate Khushi to the point of wanting to hurt her, perhaps the first broken marriage, or just pure jealousy of Khushi....can't wait to find out what you have in store in the forthcoming chapters. Very sure that Arnav will investigate deeper and glad that neither the Guptas nor the Raizadas know that Khushi is pregnant, hope that Payal is exposed before she strikes again, but please don't let this drive Arnav and Khushi apart....

    BHO- Part 15
    An awesome update:) Wonderful mix of sadness, tears, happiness and laughter....The scene at the train station was touching and emotional, being parted for the first time and trying to be strong on both their parts (sniff, sniff....) Really sweet how Arnav gives little instructions to Khushi and tells her to call him everyday, he'll be waiting....and then Khushi leaves her phone behind, silly, silly girl! (more sniffles). Arnav's determination to be with Khushi on her birthday is incredible. Loved how you incorporated 'Baby, hold on' more than once when Arnav and Khushi were on the motorcycle:) Sheena is a very sweet and intuitive friend. Did not know how Arnav would gate-crash the party, had thought perhaps he would charm the pants of the 'General' :) But Mr Sexy was so ingenious in his plan....singing in Spanish was utterly romantic, dressed the part too and the lyrics were so appropriate in their current situation. Something good always comes out of something bad and in this case it was Khushi's realisation that she is in love with Arnav and loves him deeply....Waiting with bated breath for the next update, looks like it is going to be a romantic rendezvous. Arnav is going to tell Khushi he loves her, please please do not let there be any interruptions!!

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  150. Hey Tina,
    I have never commented before, but i must say your stories are marvelous. They keep one hooked on. This is for all the stories, each and everyone I love and look forward to reading. Thanks and awesome work...all the best

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  151. Hi Tina,
    Caught up with all the Short stories, SP, BHO, FL and MG.
    Enjoyed them all.
    Starting on DH now.
    Love your writing !!
    Have a good day ")

    Kerrie

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  152. payal is behind the attacks on khushi was unexpected in SP. The suprise visit of arnav' visit in BHO was awesome.

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  153. Hi Tina.....may I know when are you posting volume III of mind games??

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  154. Fateful Love: About Chapter 18

    Tina, I feel like it has been ages since you updated this FF. Please update soon.

    Pinkly (IF Id)

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  155. namita11: good call!

    SB: So true, we all want Mr. Sexy ;) Glad you liked his grand entrance. And I'm updating both here and IF simultaneously for now. No worries.

    Sanghamitra Roy: Glad you liked it!

    Joe Arshi: No prob, spamming is okay here lolz. Glad you liked BHO and esp the precap ;) SP--no separation hun. It's them versus the world. I think you all will like this story ahead. More soon on Payal!

    Menaka: Great guess. Any thoughts about her motive??

    Shweta warrior: If you go back and consider SP so far, I'm sure you'll find hints of why Payal is so twisted. DH update coming up!

    Arshi Alai: Glad you liked the updates and agreed, Payal should be caught soon. She's dangerous.

    Zyrah Ayok: Mr. Sexy is Mr. Perfect isn't he? I'm excited about next chapter ;) Interesting theories on Payal, more to come soon!

    Broken Angel: Payal is scary for sure. Glad you liked it!

    what_the: Curious glances lolz I can see that happening. And yes, next time in BHO is quite ahem ahem. Aww I hate when I get spoiled too. Hope you liked the update though!

    seeta_naips: Interesting guess on SP, more soon! And glad you liked the romance in BHO.

    Jyothi Parsi: Love your theories on SP. all will be revealed in time ;) But she did trap Anjali to save herself because she knew she has a spotless record compared to Anjali. No separation planned for Arshi, that would be a huge step backwards and they've come to far for that. But they will be tested.

    Angullgrl91: Glad you liked both the updates. BHO will be quite scandalous ;)

    ffsheen1: True, the separation made Khushi realize how much Mr. Sexy means to her. SP--about Arnav's room that will be clarified very soon and then it should make sense. And glad you enjoyed the moments between Arhi, they've truly come far from episode 1.

    Umme Ayman: Glad you liked Mind Games :) I sometimes feel like taking it down to edit but I get lazy.

    Aarthi: No worries hun, I'm updating both here on the blog and IF simultaneously. If that changes, I'd let you all know. SP--it was a roller coaster of a chapter and evil Dadi and company made appearances, but while Arhi will be tested, they will not separate. They've come too far for that. Payal's motives will come out in time but she does have a motive--several actually. BHO--Glad you liked the "Baby Hold on" mentions. And yes, next chapter there will be no Maddy Bua, Butterball, or General to interrupt ;)

    Anonymous: Glad to hear you like them all :)

    Kerrie: Oh wow, glad you liked everything :)

    Seema asthana: Yes, it's been Payal all along. Glad you liked Mr. Sexy's entrance ;)

    Anonymous: No plans of MG Vol 3 at the moment, too busy unfortunately. Hopefully one day it happens because I do have a story in my head.

    Pinkly: I know hun, FL is on the top of my to-do list. Hopefully soon I can post two chapters at once so then only the epilogue will be left.

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  156. Yay! you did it again...DH update was awesome, a lot happened in that one chapter... Now every things clear between ArShi and the ring out of the way too... hope Arnav's not badly injured...
    Akash! what he doing out of his palace, God that guys just...grrhh... he's got all the paths covered to North Reaches but ArShi won't be going to North Reaches, would they? with the ring finally out of the way...
    Aman -Maya : haha, when would they grow up, now when Aman's finally accepting the fact, Maya's acting all stubborn...
    Hopefully they all meet up in the village, since Zara's there too...

    SP TEASER- shows Shayms got his lustful eyes on Khushi? I feel like killing him...
    Will be waiting for the FL update...

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  157. DH
    Lovd the update..
    Finaly khushi realize that past doesnt matter.. Nd nw she is running for her love.. Amazing it is..
    Cnt wait for nxt part..

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  158. DH- the internal struggle portrayed is amazing.. Please Dont do anything to ASR! Finally do I mean and Zara meet?!! Maya and A man are hilarious! Do we have anyone for Taj??! Dont leave the poor guy alone! :P

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  159. DH
    superb update... finally khushi confessed but alas y does she had to carry tht ring... stupid female.. no wonder arnav is mad at her...
    why cant nafisa aunty meet them early :-((
    feel sorry for Zara,,,
    hope arnav is safe,,,, and wonder how he will react learning tht khushi threw away the ring..

    SP
    was shocked first ,, had to go back n check if i am reading the correct story:-))
    its so funny imagining all the four on the same bed:-)) guess it wud be arnav n shyam in the middle and the women at the end.....

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  160. DH
    mind blowing

    sida(IF)

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  161. update of DH after such a long time,but it was worth the wait.the chapter was awesome.finally khushi is out of her confusion by throwing away the ring.

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  162. DH: Awesome update. Hope nothing serious happen to Arnav

    SP: Nice teaser... Already Anjali had occupied Arshi privacy and now this Shyam!Don't tell me the 2 couples are going to sleep together in 1 bed...

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  163. DH chp 25

    amazing update..
    Arnav is right that life is short to enjoy,he wants live his every moment with khushi happily & make every moment beautiful but khushi is also right at her place that she dont want that ring burden on their relation..
    but i m realy thankful for Nafisa aunty to make her realise which somewhere arnav fail to, with zaras and nafisa aunty support and arnav's injury finally khushi throw that ring off her finger , i hope arnav is fine..
    i m realy looking forward to see all together at village specially Imran & Zara & offcourse our Arshi..

    SP teaser was interesting want see how this situation going to handle by Arshi..

    & thanks for the update..

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  164. DH chapter 25... Was very interesting to read..finally she has accepted that nothing matters more than his love...and loved that she chooses to seduce him, sleep on top of him... Hopefully she is not too late.. I have always admired your stories and your writing style. I recently attempted some writing myself, on the Rangrasiya pair Paro and Rudra, on IF. And it makes me realise that it is hard work...so my admiration and respect for your talents as a writer increase manifold, as i understand the effort it must take to churn out such perfectly executed chapters week after week, that too when u r writing multiple stories, belonging to different genres, all at once. Hats off!!!!! what_the

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  165. It was wonderful to see an update from you Tina, I kept checking regularly and was getting quite concerned, but thank for fantastic update.

    DH - Ch 25
    I was so happy that Khushi admitted and accepted her feelings for Arnav and made it clear to him that she is choosing him but even though I understand where Khushi is coming from, I can't help but agree with Arnav with regard to that ghastly emerald ring....It is like a dark cloud that hangs over their head. The ring has no significance now, she is Arnav's wife and she is willing to put their lives at risk to merely return the ring and offer an explanation to the Singh family. It was a relief when Arnav and Khushi finally met Nafisa Aunty who was through her wisdom finally make Khushi see the light of day....As I read about the children telling Zara and Khushi about Arnav's accident with the horse, I thought about Arnav's words earlier of life being too short. I just hope that Khushi's realization is not too late, and that Arnav is not seriously injured....wondering if it is not a plan by Arnav to see Khushi's reaction but then the children would not have looked so worried. But where were the other men when this happened and why is Khushi the only one reacting thus far in the rain too....but one good thing came off it, she threw the ring away, finally!! Not forgetting the evil Akash, he is having his troops despatched to all the areas including the Norther Reaches, very concerned about Raj , Sia, Aman and Maya who are heading that way and Taj and Imran. Really cute banter between Maya and Aman, just wish he would express his love for her soon instead of being cryptic. Hoping to that Imran can open his heart and all Zara in....Seems so ominous now, just hoping that the group of friends will be safe on their respective journeys and won't encounter Shyam and Akash's troops and will be able to meet soon, safely and that Arnav is not severly injured. Looking forward to the next chapter with anticipation....

    SP - Teaser
    So Anjali was not held at the police station. It would appear that Arnav and Khushi are staying at the Raizada Mansion because Anjali has come to their room or either they have taken her to their new home but with the appearance of Shyam it seems more likely that they are at RM....The idea of the 4 of them sleeping in one bed leaves me aghast !! You can't be serious?? In the earlier chapters Arnav did not want Shyam to lay his eyes on Khushi and now he can't seem to take them off, I would run and hide!! Can't wait for the update....

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  166. fabulous update. love Arnav's possessive stance towards his wife. eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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  167. Plz update FL chap 18...
    I have been waiting for it like hell since a really really long time...
    Plz update it...
    Plz plz plz...

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  168. Firstly, I just wanted to ask you, Tina to please pardon the grammatical errors in my last comments on DH, I really don't know what was going on with me:$

    FL - Ch 18
    A really beautiful chapter....Arnav and Khushi are finally together in the place they rightfully belong:) Arnav is so caring and loving, carrying Khushi everwhere with such ease. Their love is stronger, deeper and more powerful and they have won the battle against their faceless enemy, Time. Finally they are able to talk and put the pieces of the puzzle together. Truly admirable, how even though Arnav and Khushi in their hearts consider each other as husband and wife, Arnav still wants to do right by Khushi by asking her to marry him and perform the rituals making her his wife. A very kind gesture by Arnav for calling the Guptas to invite them for the wedding and sending them plane tickets, knowing that Khushi would want them there even without her saying so. Garima's reaction and response was no surprise, but so happy that she was not able to influence Payal and Babuji and that they attended and apologised to Khushi too. Hats of to Arnav for telling Garima off, just loved it, she deserved every bit of it!! Was also really glad that Buaji was first to arrive, she has been a pillar of strength for Khushi without being judgemental and only showering love. As for Sheetal Malik, she got what she deserved too!! But really liked the fact that Mr Malik was so supportive. Incredible how Mr Ram knew that Arnav and Khushi would one day be married....loved the gift from him, truly endearing and meaningful and the gift of Sheesh Mahal from Mr Malik and now the baby is arriving, perfect timing on their wedding day:) Eagerly awaiting the last chapter and epilogue but sad to see this story end....Really loved every bit of it, a story written par excellence.

    Compliments on your poetic skills Tina, looking forward to reading more....you are exceptionally talented!!

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  169. FL 18
    Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! Who doesn't love a happily ever after moment?!

    SB

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  170. FL
    Lovd the update..
    Its amazing..
    Finaly khushi's family knew her love was true..
    Nd finaly they r married..

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  171. hmm so i commented a long and beautiful comment on comment thread 4 not realizing it was archived (i know...im stupid)..lol :p its very emotional and heartfelt...just expressing how much i love you and your writing..please do give that a read before you read this comment becuse this one will have a little critisism but i just want you to know that i freaking love you...afjkdhsfajilsdf yea..
    ok so
    FL 18
    hmm.
    hmmmmm........
    mmmmmmmm.....
    i dont really know what to say cuz ive been really caught up with this story so far and its just...like its just mesmerizing how itts been going along..i mean you portrayed every emotion every feeling so powerfully...its just...like im at a loss of words to describe the magic you have woven in that story. like adjfhalsdkfjh i love it. and i was so excited for chapter 18 because ommggg...arnav finally remembers!!! i was soo excited...and basically checked your site daily even though i knew nothing was posted yet.and then today...its posted and i was like a child given a lollipop after being denied it for the longest time. and so i read it...very eagerly just waiting for that BAM to hit me as your writing usually does( for every update of your every story your writing..just like sorta hits me...in a way..like its so intense...and just emotional) and so i kept reading waiting for something super cool to happen...but i read...and read...and finally i finished the chapter. and i must say...please dont take this the wrong way but..i was very dissapointed. I mean, the emotions were not portrayed half as beautifully as you usually do..and everything felt so rushed, so jumpy. like you moved from one scene to the next to the next. no beautiful weaving...you know what im saying? because i just kept waiting for that same heart stopping feeling i get from your stories but this update...it was such a turn down for me :(....
    please dont take me badly...cuz i really dont mean to make you feel down and i hoped ive expressed how much i love you but i just didnt really like this update and i just wasnt you to know that.
    anyways, other than that...much love and im expecting a BINDASS epilogue for FL now ;p (btw i love all your stories just as equally and fervently but this comment was exclusively just for FL)
    Oh and i hope you read the previous comment of mine before reading this one

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  172. heyy arshi's baby is coming , who will be it arush or arushi, let's see............i want to say dear writer is this is one of ur finest work, continue soon.............................

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  173. I don't know what to say. Love stories like these, they make you smile. Really smile. Those that make your eyes tear, while the smile shines through them.

    They're together. They got through dawn, time, and everything else thrown their way. I wish I could summon the words to tell you just how beautiful this truly is. I wish.

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  174. I have no words... All i can offer is stunned applause... And sincere admiration for the beautiful way in which the fateful love of Arnav and Khushi has culminated...the barriers of time notwithstanding..

    This is a truly unique OS in terms of genre and you have pulled it off exceedingly well..

    This chapter was just perfect and i loved the way they were reunited in the same bedroom which holds such special memories for them...their fear and apprehension at dawn, the battle to suppress the familiar fear of separation...and the unadulterated joy of finally overcoming this final barrier...and basking in the knowledge that they truly were together, forever now..just brilliantly executed..

    I am little sad though...that it is coming to an end... I have enjoyed this story so much!! I remember asking you several chapters ago if we would have a happy ending and you promised that we would..
    You have delivered this promise with perfection...

    I am thrilled and honoured that i had the chance to read this wonderful story...thank god for the day i stumbled upon your blog and got hooked!!

    Love always,
    What_the

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  175. FL chp 18

    update was realy an awsome dear..
    i got little scared wih Arshi at dawns time with the thought arnav would disapear like before but i m happy that didnt happen.. coz they are together &this time forever...
    & finaly they hav completed their marriage rituals & finaly baby's on the way .. eagerly waiting for tge baby's arrival & their journey towards parenthood.

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  176. Thank u so much for balancin our constant naggin for updates ma'm. I was much worried seeing starplus videos(old) of khushi's pain on d day n after ASR' deal marriag, no one stood by her side r atleas believd her, pls do consider writing oneshot wer arnav explains her innocence n that she sacrificd al her dreams for d sake of payal' marrige, al of both families shd make it upto her, regret for wt they did to her, in original version they din reveal r record it deeply about khushi's sacrifice, pls do justify it wit your power packed impressiv strong words.

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  177. recently i started reading ur ffs, alll of them wer soo fabulous ki, i completed reading aalmost everything till date within 3 days.... woooh u r super... continue writing... eagerly waiting for more

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  178. Fateful Love was amazing, when no one trusted her, she still fought for her love, enjoyed the concept and depiction of the characters, also like Desert Heat and the other stories, hope you continue to update the others

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  179. Zyrah Ayok: The north reaches will come up eventually (hint hint). Yes, Maya and Aman have some issues to work through but Arshi's path is clear now that the ring has been thrown in the sands somewhere :)

    Sanghamitra Roy: Glad you liked DH's last update!

    Rachel Regina: I love how so many readers are concerned about Taj being alone. So sweet :)

    Anamika: The ring is gone now *happy dance*. SP teaser--I didn't think anyone had written about all 4 in a bed before so had to include it :P

    Sida: :)

    Seema asthenia: Yeah, Khushi's hesitation is gone now. Coast is clear for uninterrupted romance ;)

    Arshi Alai: You'll find out about what happened to Arnav in DH soon so I won't spoil it :) SP teaser--lolz… well they sort of do

    ffsheen1: Agreed completely. Nafisa aunty gave her that blessing that only an elder could and for someone traditional like Khushi, she needed that reassurance. More soon! And in FL--yes, baby on the way :)

    What_the: Aww so sweet of you :) Writing is time and energy consuming, but when you love it, it's not a chore at all. Happy to hear FL struck such a chord with you. That means a lot. All the best on your FFs.

    Aarthi: Aww I try to update regularly, but as you know, life happens. DH--Loved reading your comments as always. Yes, Akash is on the prowl but Aman, Imran, Taj, and the others have a huge advantage: they know the desert well and Akash has been cooped up in his palace from the start. As for the ring, now that Khushi has an elder's blessing, there's no guilt attached to it. It's in the sand somewhere--where I personally feel it should have gone from the start. But Khushi is very traditional and it is the 1800s, so I felt it HAD to go this way. The journey ahead in DH is a lot more relaxing compared to all the angst since the full moon night--hope you like it :)
    SP: lolz I would run too.
    FL: Oh no worries about typos, happens to me too. Glad you liked the chapter :) I'm a huge fan of FL's Buaji so she had to be the first guest :)

    Quietstorm9: Glad you liked the chapter. More soon!

    Amina Mahmood: Ch 18 of FL has been up for awhile now as I'm sure you know :)

    SB: IKR. I love happily ever afters. If its tragic, I can't go back and reread the story honestly.

    Sanghamitra: Yes, Khushi and Arnav got their perfect, well deserved ending :)

    Arshiforever123: Hi there :) Read both your comments. Hmm about this past FL chapter, well it was a mahaupdate and since the story is ending, I wanted to pack in as much of the arshi moments as I could. Unlike Mind Games, where the story was centered around a wedding, in FL the wedding was not as important. They're already one in every way. So I didn't drag it (but on the flip side, that may have been the reason for the jumpiness). Hope you like the final chapter and epilogue :)

    Greshu: thanks so much :)

    Truth: Aww that's very sweet of you. I'll be super happy if FL makes readers smile out there :)

    Meka L: Hi there :) Agreed, I wanted the truth about Khushi's sacrifice to be known too in the show. Instead of a oneshot, I am planning on including that in Secret Passion eventually :)

    Chuchu Thomas: Woah 3 days. Glad to hear you liked it all :)

    Adventure_gurl: Will be continuing very soon. Glad you liked FL and DH :)

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  180. Tina, I am a new reader and have read all written word on this site :) it is absolutely awesome! I want to read first 3 chapters of Mind games and missing 13 chapters of DH. Is there a link I can visit or can it be mailed to my ID? Thanks!

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    1. Unfortunately i've taken those down after repeated warnings. If I ever change my mind, I'll post about it :)

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    2. Cool..thanks!

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