Monday, January 6, 2014

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  1. FL 11. Why??? why a cliffhanger?

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    1. It was the best spot to conclude the chapter honestly. And a true cliffhanger would have been if I'd not given you all the last 4 lines, but I wasn't that mean ;)

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  2. Both the updates were a bit emotional
    why do I feel that time is finally defeated in FL?
    I miss Rebel already it was a tragedy that he died well at least ArHi are together like old times...

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    1. I agree, both were emotional updates. I'll miss writing on Rebel and ArHi scenes :( But the story is going on track..

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  3. Fateful Love - Part 11
    OMG God Shyam crashed into Arnav's car
    But it seems that Arnav may have been pushed into the
    21st century from the crash
    I really hope so

    Desert Heat - ch21
    so Arnav finally understands what Khushi has been going through
    crap Shyam killed Rebel, I could just bash his stupid face in

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    1. Everyone is hating Shyam and it's well deserved. Hope you like the continuation of FL

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  4. DH Chapter 21 - Splendid as always...but I will miss Rebel terribly! :(

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  5. DH-
    REBEL!!!!!! No!!!!!!! Sniff!sniff! he's gone!! (Bawl!) I hope you kill shyam worse than him! Grrr! Well to new beggings I guess :'(
    FL-
    What the!? I feel like inception! Car going over the bridge in slomo and poof- hi arnav! :P all better be fine here Tina! I can't it anymore.. Sigh.. Please Dont break khushi's heart :(

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    1. Rebel will be missed for sure :'(
      FL--woah I hadn't thought of that inception tie in, but it's no dream ;)

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  6. Happy New year tina
    DH-Very sad of rebel..loved him...
    FL-am eager to know wat hapnd...

    Wen I watched d frst promo of Rang rasiya it reminded me of ur DH....only difference is that the hero is a soldier

    Brokenangel@twitter

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    1. A lot of readers have noticed the same :) SI looks very pretty in the Rajasthani attire and backdrop.

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  7. Hey tina..happy new year..!! I was waitng fr ur updates fm lng tym..d o.s was simply mindblowing..and D.H.. Iam glad arnav khushi r tgthr nw..bt i'll miss rebel..and fateful love..o.m.g my heart is btng fast in dhak dhak,dt wt wl b d nxt..hope arnav wl return to khushi's tym smehw..update b.h.o sn yar.

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    1. Happy New Year to you. Glad you liked the updates, FL now up ;)

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  8. A very happy new year Tina!! I was waiting eagerly 4 ur updates...Thnx 4 ur beautiful surprise it was damn good... coming to the updates of DH & FL both were very emotional...Already missing rebel a lot.... i hope u plan to kill dat shyam mch more mercilessly..... Ugh hating him more & more.... I hope Arnav is fine in FL..... I cant tolerate any heartbreak now.... Will b waitng 4 ur updates!!! Update BHO as early as possible waiting 4 it....

    nivi21 -IF

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    1. Happy New Year! Don't worry, I have plans for Shyam :X Hope you like the continuation of FL. BHO also updated today.

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  9. happy new year. and wow. the updates were really good. felt sorry that rebel is dead but what you said is right also. al can't always escapes unscathed. wonder whose voice it is that arnav heard at the end of fl.

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    1. Happy New Years! You will find out soon about the voice, happy reading!

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  10. just read fateful love. what a twist. so intriguing and mysterious. can't wait for my answers in the next part will be waiting

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  11. T DOC SAHEBA...YEH ISHQ NAHI AASAAN IKK SAND KA DARIYA

    HAI


    AAGEY BHI TOH SUNIYE NA


    AUR ABB GHODE KE BINA JAANA HAI Cry

    AAILA ...MERA SUNDER SAPNA TOOT GAYA MAIN PREM MEIN SAB

    KUCHH HAAR GAI YEH SHAAM NALAYAK JEET GAYA

    NEVER FEAR WHEN ARNAV IS HERE Tongue


    THANKS MY LOVE FOR MENTIONING MY COMMENT Smile

    I AM HUMBLED

    NOW THE UPDATE


    THIS ONE -UNFURLED THE TRUTH FOR HER OWN SELF

    OPENED THE DOORS FOR REAL FEELINGS N PASSION

    REVEALED THE HIDDEN FACTS FOR THE LOVE HUNGRY DUO

    RAISED HOPES FOR A LIFE OF TOGETHERNESS N ONENESS

    UNCOVERED THE UNDYING EMOTIONS BURIED DOWN UNDER

    SOLVED THE JIGSAW OF A LOVE PUZZLE

    DISCLOSED THE UNISON OF MINDS HEARTS N THOUGHTS

    IMPARTED THE KNOWLEDGE OF GOAL FOR BOTH HIM N HER

    UNFOLDING OF TREACHERY OF UN-LOYAL SHAAM THE SHAM

    CONFESSIONS OF NEVER SAY NEVER TOGETHER AGAIN

    EXPOSED THE FAKE DENIALS

    UNVEILED THE DEEP TRUST N FAITH FOR THE OTHER

    BARED THE SOULS BURNING IN THE HELL OF NON-ACCEPTANCE

    THE MUTE FAITHFUL LOYAL ANIMAL SHOWED IT BELONGED TO

    THE ONE WHO KEEPS FOR KEEP SAKE

    IT WAS ABOUT RAISING A VOICE FOR A SOCIAL CAUSE ...BRAVO

    WAITING FOR B H O

    YOU KNOW WHAT YOU ALWAYS BRING A SMILE ON MY FACE

    WHEN EVER I SEE YOUR PM Hug


    ISKE SAATH HI IJAAZAT DIJIYE AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI

    PHIR MILENGE TAB TAK KE LIYE SHABBA KHAIR

    KAL PHIR MILENGEY EK AUR COMMENT KE SAATH

    '' SATARK RAHIYE ...INDIA FIGHTS BACK''



    KKKA

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    1. Woah another amazing comment :) Love it <3

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  12. this update was exciting,awesome and very interesting.

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  13. ur stories are beautifully written.

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  14. FL..................OMG plz do update soon can't seem to bear the suspense.............
    credits to ur creativity!

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    1. I totally understand and that's why I updated it before SP

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  15. DH..............it was sad that rebel had to die!
    I mean it was more a best friend to Arnav..........

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    1. Yes, Rebel meant a lot to both Arnav and Khushi

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  16. FATEFUL LOVE 11
    in the previous teaser u showed that our khushi is pregnant, but it's okey good to read shyam is dead, i think writer ram has left some clue for khushi that they missing which will help them in their unite foever, continue soon..............i

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  17. Hi im sorry..so sorry for being lazy to log into google and comment...i finally logged in and commenting.... i wish there was a way to login for this page itself..
    bk to the updates...
    DH made me cry ...poor rebel... arrghhh i hate the shyam n akash,.... they will pay for brutally hurting and killing Rebel... loved the arshi moments and im glad they stopped the child marriage ...
    Fateful love.. i just cought up with the story... i just could not gather the courage to read the chap arnav's trunk... i cried and cried buckets...but the last chap made me smile... for some reason i think arnav has landed in khushi's time... it does sound weird but i got tht feeling :D... lovely update though...

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    1. Ekta, you don't need to log in to comment. You can comment using the Name/ID option and then add in your name.
      I'm glad they stopped that marriage from happening too in DH.
      Aww, FL is an emotional love story for sure

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  18. awesome updates.

    sida[IF]

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  19. Fateful love-
    loved the update....the way the story has shaped is incredibly interesting. ...I can't imagine whats going to happen next...I
    but I am guessing that arnav will e
    wake up in present time now...how is that possible that even I don't know...but still I am hoping this...
    continue soon

    DESERT heat
    Lovely update..it was a perfect mixture of romance , love, pain , action everything. ..I was smiling when arnav and khushi became normal again and arnav believed khushi. .but I ended up crying in the end...I was hoping against hope that rebel would be fine but I guess this was needed for the story. ..still I can't help and feel arnav's pain of losing his friend. ..waiting for the next part
    continue soon

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    1. FL--great guess, chapter now up ;)
      DH--Yes, it was a roller coaster chapter with its high points and low. RIP Rebel :(

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  20. DH 21
    Loved it...so heart touching...I dint guess they would part with Rebel.... How will they be able to continue their journey...especially when Shyam n Akash are after them closing so quickly...with no horse....how r they going to survive them....
    Now the Red coats..title is soo confusing...who n what are they...?

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    1. Time for camels, I think. Since no animal can replace what Rebel meant to ArHi.
      Redcoats is a historical term hint hint

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  21. 1st ill comment abt d os-My god wat a mixture yaa..it basically flew me to d memories of MG kya din the woh..wen v use wait fr d updates so desperately..to see wat new game of sex yaa love ur plannin ti blow us..an a tadka of DH n SP was a amazing..tadka fr an os..love it
    DH-Atlast dey r back too b derr self aftr so long..drr passion ..drr love..drr egarness to touch each oder in many bold ways..aahh mindblowin..
    I felf very bad fr rebel..poor horse..he had been wid arnav all d tym..feyboth cry fr him so much..n datchild marriage part was beautifully written..khushis past was actually led in front ofher atdattym..n arnav soothing her pain..love dat part..lovely update..
    FL-Wat cn i sae abt dis chp..drr love fr each oder has no boundaries which dey hav nt crossed..d last partwhere arnav met wid an accident..my heart cm to my mouth..seein datdestruction..n atlast dat shaym chp is over frm drr life fr ever..nw m confused hw arnav survived..aftr fallin down frm d bridge..n hw ram jha becam ram mathur??M confused abt dis!!

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    1. Glad you liked the Crossover OS :)
      DH--I write this one quite passionately, glad u liked that
      FL--Ram Jha became Ram Mathur because the timeline was changed by ArHi. Since Anjali did not marry Shyam but Aman, he did not grow up with the Jha last name. Changes in the past produce instantaneous changes in the future. Hope that helps!

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  22. hey :) just now read desert heat and fateful love updates :) and i need not so more about them since u already know that they are THE BEST and u r THE BEST :) am a bigggggggggggggggggg fan of urs :) ur update makes me very excited :) as far as i know, u r one of the best writers :) looking forward 2 read ur updates on BOH and SP :)

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    1. Aww so sweet of you :) More coming soon!

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  23. happy new year
    , though I am regular reader, greatly admire your works sorry to say this, I never commented,as I am not that good in commenting,from now on I will do
    DH 21, simply fabulous
    the best part was they back to themselves, mehndi scene, he will never let her forget they are one A&K as their fates are one

    Rebel, amazing one, sacrificed his life, felt bad
    beautifully written as always

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    1. Happy New Years! Gad you liked the mehndi scene in DH, it was an intimate moment for ArHi. And your commenting is more than good, awesome really :)

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  24. Loved fateful love - surprising turn of events - what's happened to Arnav?

    When will you be updating Baby, Hold On?

    SB

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  25. Fateful Love Part 11: Nice update at least Anjali is not married to Shyam.Hopefully nothing happens to Arnav wonder how will Khushi react!!!

    Desert Heat: Loved the update. Once again Arshi are together!!! Poor Rebel he is no more will really miss him in the story :(

    Secret Passion: Awesome teaser!!! Waiting for the update to see how Arnav reacts to the news of Khushi's pregnancy. I guess he will be shocked at first but will be happy :)

    Waiting for Baby, Hold on update!!!

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    1. FL the answers coming soon!
      DH Aww I'll miss Rebel too.
      SP Great guess!

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  26. A happy and magnificent 2014 to you Tina!! Hope you will be blessed and inspired to write many, more beautiful stories :)

    One Shot : SP x DH x MG
    I loved it! It was so brilliantly written and you blended each concept from each story beautifully....

    Teaser : SP
    Although Arnav has evolved greatly from what he was, having a baby is a huge step....Initially,he will be obviously surprised because throughout the story we knew that Khushi was using a contraceptive, seeing a doctor at the beginning of their relationship, was one of the requirements. But if the visual you have chosen is anything to go by, then he will be happy, because the baby would be a symbol of their deep, passionate love and perhaps a way to right the wrongs of his own childhood.

    DH - Ch 21
    A very intense chapter....I was thrilled that Arnav finally believes Khushi and that the tension between them has been cleared. Even though the bond between them was always there, it is so much stronger now that they can face anything together. I was terribly sad at the loss of Rebel....he was the hero for saving Khushi....such an inhuman act of callousness by evil Shyam and his men. I hope you have a severe punishment meted out to him in the forthcoming chapters. Arnav has lost a true companion which will make their journey all the more difficult, in addition to all their supplies being stolen. The title of the next chapter, is it implying that Arnav and Khushi are now going to encounter British soliders?

    FL - Part 11
    Very emotional update....a lot of fear and uncertainty. But so much of pure love!! Even though Arnav and Khushi managed to alter certain events in time, Ram Mathur's (previously Jha) assistant Anita still recognized Khushi and said he would have been happy that Khushi came. I was a little confused by that because when Khushi had met him he was still Mr Ram Jha and he knew Khushi would come because of what Arnav had told Anjali at the time of his death.... Thank you for answering my question about Khushi falling pregnant. Here Shyam still had an involvement in Arnav's accident, but glad Shyam is no more. I feel that Arnav has been saved and brought into Khushi's time. Was that divine intervention, was that the voice of God, how did Arnav recognise it when he never heard the voice before....So many questions, eagerly awaiting the next update for the answers....Please let Arnav and Khushi be united forever :)

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    1. Thanks so much, Happy New Years to you too!
      SP--great point about the contract. It will come up ;)
      DH--Shyam more than deserves a severe punishment, agreed. Yes, the title indicates British involvement in the coming chapter
      FL--Well, the meeting in the past still happened since the past carries weight but certain things were different. Mr. Ram did still know about Khushi because Arnav had told his sister about her before his death. Hope that makes sense :) Happy reading and no worries, I'm not a fan of tragedies.

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  27. BHO 9
    Loving this story.arnav and khushi hit it from the word first go…amazing raw chemistry btwn a feisty khushi and Mr.hottie….SMJ has a perfect role here..a slimy toad..i love it..he is really contributing in keeping up the comedy elements :P
    Too many favrt moments from the chapters till now,I’ll jus go with the last update..it truly rocked…Arnav following Khushi to the “Fu-king”....how sweet.Khushis encounter with the stranger “Jachie Chan” lol.her reactn to shyam aka butterball was gr8..everyone got to knw what he was upto.. SMJ got what he deserved frm Arnav,personally though im keeping my fingers crossed hoping for some more :P
    and the last stunt …trust khushi to go slightly overboard..best part was the waitress asking them to revisit for another dose of entrtnmnt..rofl

    cant wait for the next update

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    1. Glad you liked the update, and yes BHO is full of some wacky characters--Sushi, Mr. Sexy, Butterball/Toad, Maddy Bua, etc. which makes it fun to write :)

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  28. DH - chapter 21..

    i feel very sad for Rebel, going to miss him very badly, he played a important role in this journey of Arshi..pls pls make shyam go through hel for killing Rebel.. & i feel sad for Arnav too for Rebel loss but i m happy that khushi is there for him & their relation coming back to normal.


    FL - chapter 11

    after reading the title Jan 21' 1926, i was scared to tead the chpthat what if their plannot succeed & arnav will die in this part but after reading i m happy that he is alive & shyam is dead... & hoping that arnav wil come in khushi time & they wil stay toghether forever...

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    1. DH--I'm sad for Rebel too but like you said, ArHi have finally resolved some issues
      FL--Classic good versus evil so of course Shyam had to meet his end and our hero survive

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  29. just came across ur stories... awesome... hats off to u ... u r phenomenon dear...

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  30. Fateful Love - ch 10 cont'd
    Ah so I was partly correct, he wasn't pushed but given a choice to go to Khushi or back to his time
    So my suspicion that Khushi is pregnant is true
    damn but I am sensing he can't remember her
    Oh God poor Khushi thinks he is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!
    this will just break her

    Baby Hold On
    Ah such sweet passion
    wow what a disguise!!!!
    can't wait for the date

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    1. poor khushi indeed :( lots of challenges

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  31. @bho part 10-:
    awesome update tina.:-) i realy love d story,i must say rab ne nahi "tina ne banadi sushi aur mr.sexy ki jodi"*wink* love u tina..kp n writing..i hv request tina,i love mind games,i guess i hv rd d stry mre dn 5 tyms,if u pls cn cntinue dt stry,it wld b amazing.pls try.lkng fwd fr F.l nd nxt update f b.h.o.:-)

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    1. aww i love MG too, i have 3rd vol planned, not sure when i'll start it though. already have 4 going currently

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  32. @f.l part 12.:-
    o.m.g!! I read d update nw,dt was so emotional,iam in tears..nw hw wl arnav recognise khushi.i guess,he dsnt remembr anythng abt her,nd khushi hw wl she live nw,thnkng dt arnav is dead.uff! Iam gtng crazy here,so many ques.tina!! Pagal kardia apne..nw eagerly waiting fr nxt update.

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    1. great guess, yes his memory will be affected. more soon!

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  33. @Fl :-(
    Awesome Update tina so many emotions Poor khushi darling thinks Arnav is dead But arnav seems to be forgot everything i have a doubt is Arnav face changes and OMG Khushi is Pregnant how she was going to survive now after knowing the truth.
    @BHO :
    I Love this story yar one of my Fav .such a sweet passion between Arshi
    Eagerly waiting for DATE

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    1. His face hasn't been changed at all. That's why I posted the pic. Arnav is exactly the same, except his memory has been affected. hope that helps!

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  34. thank you so much for updating flo. thank god arnav and khushi are not in the same time. but has arnav lost his memory. hope he didn't and he meets khushi soon. and bho was too good. arnva realized that he has fallen for khushi and khushi disguise is really nice.

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    1. yes his memory has been affected unfortunately. more soon!

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  35. ah what an wonderful update Tina!!! loved it to the core.... I always have a smile reading BHO its such an nice entertaining one i just love it.... And thank god Arnav is safe & sound & hopefuuly Arshi meet very soon in the present tym too.... Loved both the updates... Waiting 4 the other updates though.....

    nivi21-IF

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    1. I love writing BHO, its so stress-relieving :)

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  36. FL - Ch 12
    A very exciting and insightful chapter....I am going to go with Divine Intervention like I had mentioned in my previous comment. Did not realise then that Arnav would be given a choice though. My heart goes out to Khushi for thinking Arnav is dead, that in itself could kill Khushi, Arnav is her other half....Wondering when Khushi will discover she is pregnant? That was able to cross the timeline, like I had previously asked. Will Arnav and Khushi be reunited by then and how will her parents react? It appears as though Arnav doesn't remember Khushi yet and as the voice had said their love will be tested, if he chose Khushi and their unborn child, does Sheetal and her father have a role in that? Although Arnav has the feeling that he is late for something and that somebody is waiting, he does not appear to remember anything else, perhaps Sheetal and her father will take him in, I hope Arnav and Sheetal don't fall in love!! From the title of the next chapter "Memories", does that mean Arnav will see certain signs that will jolt his memory about Khushi, how will he recognise her, I wonder, she had given him back his ring.... or does it mean they will not be reunited soon....Waiting with bated breath for the update and the manner in which Arnav and Khushi will be finally reunited :)

    BHO - Part 10
    Mr Sexy and Sushi turning up the heat!!!! And Sushi being rather bold:) Even though Butterball has melted away, trust Maddy Bua to ruin a passionate, romantic moment, both in name and in person! I was right about the disguise:) Quite a change for the normally traditional Khushi, she would be too cute anyway. Thrilled to bits that Arnav Singh Raizada has acknowledged that he is in-love with Khushi Kumari Gupta, wow!!!! Can't wait for the "Fairy" Tale date:)

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    1. You're on track for sure in FL. The Maliks will take him in but while sheetal may develop feelings for Arnav, he will not (he may not realize it, but his heart knows he's taken ;) more soon!

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  37. FATEFUL LOVE 12
    yes, i know that he or she will shift each of their world's, hope arnav's face will not change , which will help khushi to find him, continue soon.............

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    1. no worries, his face hasn't been changed. he's the same man, but memory has been affected

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  38. FL 12
    pleaassee dont let arnav go with sheetal i would diee :'(
    please tinaji please
    He is finally in her time it was such a amazing thing to read
    Please dont ruin it :'(

    ..XxYasmina06

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    1. he won't go with sheetal, his heart, love for Khushi, and memories won't let him :)

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  39. FL: Omg that was an amazing update...arnav is in the khushi's time... and looks like he does not remember wat he was going to do... does he not remember khushi?? i hope he does and if he does not,.. i hope he recognizes her when he meets her... n i hope tht happens soon... OMG OMG im so excited!!! :D oh n i hope sheetal does not develop feelings for arnav...n arnav is feeling obligated to say yes to her... i hope thts not how tht story will go ... i trust u :D

    BHO: tht was a cute update...khushi as a blond :D... this made me remember madhuri from one of her movies....did mady bua suspect these 2 to be involved???

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    1. i was just re-reading my comment... n i saw lots of hopes in there :P

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    2. yes, arnav's finally in her time and they're that much closer to being together forever :)

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  40. BHO 10
    Khushi finally declared,she is crazy for Arnav..that makes two of us :P
    Ahh Buaji is alws ruining their rabba ve moments...tchk tchk...Personally i wud love to see our Mr.Hotshot giving a foot massgae to Khushi in his own way .hopefully one that would make her forget her own name :P
    but khushi wid a wig!!! Wooh...id luv to c her in sucj a diff look..no doubt she will rock it too....... fingers crossed for their HOT DATE!!
    And butterball finally ran wid his tail between his legs.he could nvr handle a fire spitting angel in his lifetime..hope he never returns :)

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    1. agreed, she'd look awesome in the disguise :) More soon in BHO!

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  41. FL and BHO

    absolutely loved both posts! BHO - glad arnav realised his feeling for khushi first!

    SB

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  42. new chapters of both FATEFUL LOVE and BHO were amazing.

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  43. BHO.......................I love the Krazy Khushi!................
    And FL....................awesome twist!

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  44. Fateful Love :
    I'm not able to comment May be because a limited words are allowed for the comment to get published? I shall therefore post my comment in parts..
    I guess I'll comment on the story so far as I've not been able to, up until now. I'd first come across when the chapter was 4-5 chapters old, I guess. All the uniqueness of the tale( would like to call it that, hope u don't mind?), the bizarre feeling of the concept in its own, the time travel still trying to sink into my mind with all it's 'ajeeb-ness' and the writing, blew me completely! Fabulous I'd say because ideas can crop up but to give them words and logical reasoning and well, framing it for the world to read, is quite something I can find no word for! Kudos to you! :)

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  45. I kept waiting for updates and I've to give it to you doc, you really made me cry! :'( Like shedding the real aansu, while learning the heart-wrenching pain Arshi go through, specially when Khushi goes through his letters and realises he'd written those after all the day's hard work, for her. Making her fall for him, even more. And what painful truth it was, when Ram Jha informed her of Chote uncle's death at the age of 22! *Wails and cries!*

    You know how they'd discovered that thing which triggers their meet, for them both to b present at the set of the sun, their mutual fondness and friendship in their childhood, them being each other's support through the trying times that had befallen Sheesh mahal! the portrait! the ASR-KKG, the feather traveling into Khushi's time and well I could keep on going. But what I truly felt while reading was, though they are trying ways to become one and be together always, there's always this question lurking as to how that's even possible for two people from different times? - how they even meet in the first place is intriguing, but I shall let it pass and enjoy the story! :P Then I remembered the Harry Potter scene where Harry, Ron and Hermione thought the buckbeak had been slaughtered. How miserable they'd felt and then Dumbledoor gives the time travel key to Harry and Hermione and makes them rewind the time to make amends. And they do! We are shown how they see themselves in front of them and even hit their past selves to distract them so they can save buckbeak without letting their past selves see their future selves and freak out! So, when they'd managed to save buckbeak and travelled back, I got some sense that it was to happen after all, buckbeak was never to be killed(destiny?), only time was that had kept them from knowing it and also time was what had helped them in doing what they wanted to do, prevent it from being killed..? You getting me, right? :P I'm hoping hard you've watched HP series, or read it atleast? ;)

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    1. im a potterhead no worries :) Aww, agreed, FL is quite emotional. actually i think its the most emotional story i've written so far.

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  46. So here, I knew that Arshi will unite and even though Khushi is a 100 years ahead of Arnav's time,, their destinies are already written and what is to happen has already been decided and so, I knew that even though they're able to stop Anjali's wedding with Shyam. Something will definitely happen that will lead to Arnav's ... I don't want to use the fatal word here, for him.. And how he will escape death and come back to Khushi because he has to ( his promise) and how the people around him just didn't come to know about his disappearance, in his time. There can only b a way : he ..., and so the news about him. But then what originally happened and what led him to travel a 100 years ahead is something to talk about and ponder upon. Then comes the maha update with the answers and now I'm all but jumping with joy to know as I'd all along known, he's alive and breathing! I think it's not a dream, it's actually a divine message to him and when the choice he was given, I couldn't help but compare it again to Harry's last imagination in the series. He thought he'd died and he'd asked Dumbledoor about the same to which he was given a choice but he was left wondering when DD said that it's not a dream but that doesn't mean it's not happening in his head! It as actually to enlighten him about what he wants to do with his life for which he was given a choice, how lucky! So likewise, Arnav definitely didn't dream about it, am I right so far? Somehow, people in his time were made to believe he was no more where as in actuality, for he'd to travel time and manage a leap of 100 years, right? God, my Emoshuns! :P :D The only thing I'd not expected was for him to lose his memory! Shoot, how'd you make him recover? *faints with curiosity* And then, how will they really unite because the Gupta family already knows how he looks like na.. Will they just let it pass or will then dig more? I guess Arshi won't disclose the real thing to the words because no one will ever believe them or understand them? Just hope Khushi stays strong through all this though and Arnav remembers everything once again.. Please, a very pretty, ASR-ish please, update soon? ;) :)

    To the Writer : Tina, a wonderful writer you are and I'm glad I chanced upon your writings! I'm amazed as to how an individual can possess it all with such modesty and humbleness(I'm talking about your talents btw- doc, writing, sense of wit and humor, wisdom in ur knowledge and yet so down to earth!) How is it even remotely possible for a single person to b so.. Blessed? Touchwood! :) I can't help but envy you, you know! Don't take me wrong, Hun! But yes, you're really blessed to be all that you are and well I can only admire you for that. That's all! :) You're probably wanting to skip through my comment, right? I know I do that to people with my insane comments and bore them to hell! :D Love ya and your writings, even more! :P
    Cheers! ;)
    Happy New Years! :)

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  47. Hey Tina'

    Wonderful update. I loved it to the core.Tina u r an amazing writer, credits to ur creativity. I am ur huge fan.crazy abt ur ff's . ln FL, please don't make arnav go with sheethal.this is my hmble request. I loved the crazy and cutie khushi in bho. please update secret passion soon.eagerly waiting . god bless you.take care.

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  48. baby hold on!
    loved the update....the blonde part had me laughing....thank god there was no shyam in this update...he gives that buttery feeling to me too now..hahaha...poor arnav....the shower broke down at such a time..hahaha...

    fateful love
    so my guess was correct..arnav did woke up in khushi's time....i can't express my happiness...but the god or someone up there answering his questions was too good....
    khushi is carrying arnav's child??????wowww...double treat for us...but the hilarious part is that u had put this pregnancy part as a teaser for "secret passion" but the effect is showing here in "fateful love"...hahahaha...
    but the sad part is that arnav don't remember anything now..i just hope khushi and arnav meets soon..i can't see a broken khushi or lost arnav....
    continue soon

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  49. Hi Tina:)

    I wanted to ask you, is secret passion completed or is it put on hold?

    Maira

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  50. awesome awesome.. arnav in present still i can't believe..
    continue soon..
    BHO also superb.. waiting for next..
    please please update FL fast

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  51. FL - chapter 12

    wow... finally Arnav woke up in Khushi time....
    one part of mine dancing in joy for arnav & other cried along with khushi when she came to know about arnavs death... pls let khushi know about arnav being in her time so that if he has forget everthing about him n her, she can help him & remind him their memories together..

    & Tina.. what can i say for you, i m speechless as always.. how brilliantly u have answerd to all are readers question which is nagging in our mind since start that being from different centuries how they become friends, lover , soulmates and everything etc..through this part.
    & for me that voice is not any hellucination or divine concept or anything, for that voice is yours who talk to arnav..

    BHO- chapter 10

    disguise.. hmm.. khushi is intelligent.. that blonde part was amazing... hope that toad never comeback...
    finally atleast arnav has realises his love for hoping that khushi soon realises too..
    waiting for Real date..

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  52. Tina, as usual I am waiting for the updates of all the stories, but I would really appreciate it if you would post SP soon, it's been long enough and I am getting desperate!...
    And love the latest updates of BHO and FL,
    want to know about that too and hopefully soon, especially now that Arnav is now in Khushi's time in FL, please reunite them soon, now i know, like you said you are not a fan of tragedies, so i could be really hopeful that maybe in the next update they'd be together or at least closer!...
    BHO-Now that Butterball has ran away, can't wait the real Arshi date, it would definitely be awesome!...
    DH updates are more then welcome, really want them to end the journey to the north reaches be together but that might not be so soon because of Shaym and Akash!...
    sorry for the lengthy comment!!! :D
    xoxo

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      more updates soon! and no worries about the length :)

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  53. Wow...FL...update was amazing!! loved the way you connected the story and the reasoning...and the fact that you left it vague enough for us to fill in the blanks..a bond between their souls..you're brain is amazingly creative..

    BHO~!!!! fun as always....loved reading Arnav's perspective...blonde disguise...awesome!!! all the kissing and making out!! super hot!!

    Cheers
    what_the

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  54. FL 13
    Nice update...
    Happy to see Arnav still connected to Khushi by that mystical connection n feel that she needed him or when she left Lucknow...
    But Sheetal....I'm worried... Will she cause troubles for Khushi...? Hope Khushi n baby would be fine...
    Hope ARSHI will meen n the mysterious pull n Devine help will get them over all the obstacles....

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  55. Tina you made me cry the second time with a update of FL, it was really emotional, and you were right crucial as well. (*sniff* *sniff*)...
    Love the fact that though Arnav doesn't remember anything he still feels that Khushi needs him and he is so not interested in Sheetal, yeahy!!
    Poor Khushi, the way Garima behaved with her! :'(
    But I was jumping in the end with joy when Arnav decided to go to Dehli!
    Now I am just hoping that Arnav gets his memories back and they meet each other soon...Khushi and the Baby need him...
    *
    Oh! and the SP note, I will be waiting coz I know it'll be worth it, though I hope its quite lengthy since its taking so much time!
    ***
    Love your work Dammit!!!... ;)

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  56. Fateful Love ch 13
    damn he still doesn't remember
    thankfully Arnav dislikes Sheetal on sight, she better keep her grubby hands off him
    crap Garima is so nasty, I never liked her character
    So sad for Khushi, she thinks her love is dead
    Good that Khushi is going to Delhi, Arnav will be there too
    can't wait for them to meet

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  57. FL - Ch13
    The update was heart-wrenching and very emotional....Once the doctor had drawn the bloods, I knew they were to discover that Khushi is pregnant. Loved her strength and devotion to their love that she is willing to protect their baby fiercly. Very cruel and nasty of Garima but her character from the beginning has displayed this attitude towards Khushi, the way she thought Khushi was crazy after her first encounter with Arnav. I guess there was no way for Payal to defend Khushi, as she might have an inclination as she had heard Khushi crying out for Arnav in the past when he had been forced to leave and she had lent Khushi her books to read on time-travel. Hope that Khushi's life in Delhi will not be made a living hell by Buaji (hope in this story Buaji is more compasssionate). Heart-warming the way Khushi considers Sheesh Mahal to be her home and that she will return there someday....just like Arnav did....and when that does happen, wonder what Garima's reaction will be? Arnav's memory was truly amazing....only to be ruined by Sheetal. In my previous comment, had wondered whether Sheetal and her Dad would play a role in Arnav's life now, by taking him in and hoping that there is no love between Sheetal and Arnav. Really glad that Arnav has not taken notice of Sheetal and doesn't appear to like her much, however looks like Sheetal will cause trouble due to unrequited love. Trust that Arnav and Khushi's love will triumph above all else though:) Even though the chapter was sad, the thing I found truly endearing was the bond between Arnav and Khushi, even though he can't remember everything, they are communicating almost through mental telepathy.... and he is following his heart and going to Delhi, what he doesn't realise is that the owner of his heart is going there too!!!! Hope Arnav has more uninterrupted memories and is able to see Khushi's face this time....From the title of the next chapter, I am assuming that Arnav will adopt Malik as his surname for now....Very excited about what is to come:)

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  58. FL 13
    i was in tears; arnav has lost his memory - as it is he had a lot going bc of the time difference- now this
    khushi is so broken but she has her baby to hold on to

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  59. Fateful love chapter 13...

    I have words except thank god Arnav has some inking of Khushi's existence. I feel so sorry for Khushi right now: grieving, pregnant and alone....

    Moomin4455 on IF

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  60. FL love was absolutely amazing - so glad he still knows she exists - well kind of...hope is not lost.

    Quick Q - when will you be updating DH and BHO?

    SB

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  61. hope arnav will get his memory back up on seeing khushi in delhi, make they meet soon, don't make sheetal as a huddle between them, continue soon..............................

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  62. Hey Tina…Just finished reading Secret Passion till chapter 19 and wanted to comment first but little bit confused where to comment….I going both ways on the comment folder and on the FF…I loved the story and comment for the first time….they both are going through the love and the pain….which is very common in love sick people…they started their journey of love with hating each other but end up loving each other…how cute…he may be running away from her…but hate to hurt her…I hated when he called her mistress…and then regretted…he wants to run from Khushi and his old memories but he end up fall in love with Khushi…
    Your Khushi is really strong….she has not given up…as she knew he loves him but his insecurities are more than his love…she is very well aware of that her love will win…the amazing part was when he told junior Bradley… that she is his wife and he loves her more than anything else…but I don’t understand why her family is against their love…as their older daughter is married in the same house…and I really don’t like this Karan…she told him that she loves only Arnav but he is still after her…go away dear…she does not love you…simply brilliant story…and I am loving it…I have to read chapter 19 and then will comment.

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      Glad to hear you're liking SP--it is ASR and Khushi's love story so there are always twists and turns. And agreed, Karan is very annoying! :P Happy reading!

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  63. FL 13..
    my heart cries for arshi...
    y is garima so strict... even though she shud be mad tht khushi is pregnant y cant she once think y khushi is taking arnav's name? she cud atleast doubt tht khushi is mentally ill to think tht the father of the child is dead ages ago...

    already loving sheetal's evil plans:-)) will sheetal see arnavs pic with khushi and try to separate them?? too easy rt:-))

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  64. SP 20..
    Another great passionate and intense update.... Though I did guess his immediate reaction to the pregnancy.... I believe he will come in terms with it soon ....
    As per the sister thing...it would be Anjali as she can have easy access and resources to hire people even in US and she is possessive...and she would be the one affected by Khushis presence in Arnav's life... But feel sorry for for Arnav...he would be shattered to know the truth that his sister can go to such extent as killing his love n life... Where as he feeds n tolerates Shyam only because he loves his sister n that creep is his life... Hate Anjali...

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  65. Secret passion ! its payal ! its payal ! isn't she the one ?
    anjali might be the obvious choice ! traumatised sister but actuall the villain !!!... but that's not the case here ! ..
    its payal ! the insistence in her phone call to khushi to marry karan when she denied !.. she kept an eye on khushi when she came to shantivan to support arnav because he was worried about anjali !... payal giving khushi hard looks when arnav and khushi were leaving shantivan!... the motive though is something I can't guess ! ...
    khushi's pregnancy.. arnav will come around or tell her to abort !.. but also he'll try as hell not to hurt khushi !.. confrontation ! can't wait :).. and obviously their passionate moments always get you hot under the collar!... because its perfectly written:) ... love your writing Tina ! ... Anusha:)

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      Aww glad u liked the office scenes. blush!

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  66. Yeahy! Finally got the update of SP Tina, this is the third time I am writing the comment for this chapter, but before I click on publish my laptop just freezes, its irritating but anyway loved the update, though it was quite lengthy I felt that it ended too soon!
    About Arnavs reaction, well I did think that he would be angry, confused and would not accept it soon but but I did not expect him to leave the house without a word, but I guess he'll come around and even Khushi was not expecting a typical hubby reaction!
    As for that guy saying '...the sister...' before dying, my mind straight away ticked saying Anjali, but the way that guy said it, it made me feel that its someone acting all innocent but the story is quite different all together, I think he didn't mean Arnavs
    's sister but Khu...
    well! I'll leave it for you to tell us who it is, the next chapter, confrontation hmm...! well cant wait and also cant wait for the update of DH as its been long and also FL and BHO...!

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      Glad u liked the mahaupdate, and yes, it's between anjali and payal. More soon!

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  67. SP - Episode 20
    The intensity of Arnav and Khushi's passionate encounters is combustible!! They really cannot have enough of each other!! Glad that Khushi was honest about the call from the housekeeper in New York. Although I do understand Khushi's reasons for not telling Arnav initially that she maybe pregnant, but knowing how Arnav feels about lies and the fact that he told her not to keep any secrets from him, she still went ahead and did exactly that....Khushi should have remembered their words "them versus the world". I think Arnav's reaction was expected. It was a huge step understanding and accepting the concept of marriage and now so soon into their marriage to have a baby....But as we all know Arnav is short-tempered and hot-headed and just like in the past, he storms off and drives off the anger, I think once he has calmed down, he will come to Khushi and be more accepting. At least Khushi was prepared although hoping for a different reaction. Like I mentioned in my previous comment, Arnav brought up the contraceptive pills, hope he does not hold it against her for missing some days. I also think now that the police have a small confession from the dead, hired man, Arnav's focus is going to be on protecting Khushi, and now their unborn child. Maybe a call from the police will bring him back home in a hurry!! As for the confession of "the sister", it could be either Anjali or Payal....Arnav had spent time and told Anjali about Khushi....also Anjali seems to be caught up in her own world trying to get Shyam's attention, so perhaps the jealous dark horse is the unsuspecting Payal???? Since you are not a fan of tragedies too Tina, we will wait to read how Arnav and Khushi cross this hurdle and allow their love to win....In the upcoming chapter, Confrontations, will Arnav be confronting Khushi, or the both of them confronting their respective sisters, me wonders????

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      Agreed, Arnav acted as expected but like Khushi, there was a hope of a different reaction nonetheless. But it is just too soon. He needs to think on own.. The confrontations refers to several, but Arshi are a given. More soon!

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  68. Another good and passionate update of Secret Passion dear…I did not expect him to react like this after hearing the news…I hope he will not tell her to abort…Is it Payal or Anjali…I think Anjali but she loves him more than anything….. and can’t be Payal as she loves her sister…than why she will order somebody to kill her….to confused but will wait till you reveal it…thanks for a wonderful update and the photographs you updated…Now I can start with other FF….

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  69. Dear TINA and Satina! Thanks so much for this update. As I already wrote to TINA at IF that the long wait for this update nearly killed me... I really visited this blog every day to check if you already updated and you maybe forgot to send me a message! But today... at work, at lunch time... I nearly got a shock as your e-mail popped up! Hubby couldn't stop laughing at my reaction! Told him that today I had to come home earlier to read SP...
    Waow! What a passion between the new wedded! They are not getting enough of each other... sweet and very hot! Loved the conference room scene! And of course Arnav's search for Khushi... her secret to get to the clinic, his anger to know that she lied to him and and and...
    According to me now, the „other woman“ could only be Payal... but why on earth would she want to kill her??? Have no idea... I've to think about this... maybe I'll read all the chapters again... maybe you two have mentioned something in the past chapters! hmmmm.... As for Arnav's reaction: well, I kind of understand that, because to him accepting this marriage was hard work and I thought that he might react that way, but I really hope he will come back soon... maybe the time when the inspector will call him and inform him about the dead man make him realise how bad his reaction towards his wife had been! Really hope it... Thanks a lot for this great update. Thumbs up! Eagerly waiting now for the next chapter! Please take your time, but like always I won't stalke you, but keep always visiting this blog ;-)... Cheers, Chanya.

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  70. Secret Passion ch 20
    hmmm my, my what a lunch date that was!!!!!!
    very very hot and intense

    I knew Arnav would go ballistic when he found out she was pregnant
    damn she was hurt by his reaction although she knew he was going to be pissed

    ah I may not be right after all, the sister could be Payal or is it Anjali as I suspected?
    can't wait to find out

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  71. @f.l part 13..
    Hey tina.!! Iam sorry iam late for d cmnt,bt i hv read d update as sn as u postd bt didnt gt d tym to cmnt..such an wonderful update..u made me emotional,i was cryng whle rdng..my guess was rite,arnav dosnt rembr anythng..poor khushi!! Hope they meet soon,khushi needs him..and @S.P.:- woah! It was so passionate nd later so emotional, hope arnav wl rct positivly.fingers crsd to knw who is d culprit,bt iam sure d real 1 is dadi.update b.h.o sn dear.nd thnx u did cnsdrd my requst,i did read again d teri meri sequence in MG.

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  72. FL - chapter 13

    I m feeling very sad for Arshi.. both are facing problems on their own but i m feeling bit relieved that atleast sumthing with eachother Arnav with khushi littil memory & he know that he love her deeply & khushi with arnavs baby...
    hate garima very much, cant she understand her but anyways she was not fond of khushi & always suspicious about her so she make her leave Sheesh mahel wit this opportunity..

    SP -chapter 20
    Love the Mahaupdate very much. but still we greedy reader of your work think its short. wink.

    but seriousley their intense, passionate, morning romance, lunch time, lots of love for each other... loved it very much..
    i m glad tht khushi didnt hide about houskeepers phone & she did tell him about the pregnancy also but after confirmation.. i think he is not upset with her for that news but for him this pregnancy is too early bcoz he is still not completely accept the marriage thing, it is still dark word for him bcoz his past..
    & for that women. i m just simply guessin that ther e are only two sisters anjali and payal..for me i think that women is anjali bcoz that women had giuded ht men towrds arnavs room in newyork palace on phone.. which i think payal dont know..
    i m just eagerly waiting for next ..

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  73. SP: wow tht was some lunch date...with no lunch :P ...I hope arnav takes the news it positively...n i think he will :) ... poor khsuhi feel bad for her...
    oh n the sister i think is anjali for some reason

    FL: how can garima be so cruel... oh i hope arnav will remember soon or at least them bump into each other soon... SHeetal...grrrrrrrrrrr

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  74. Teri Meri Anniversary
    Mind Games was and is one of my most favourite stories
    Their connection was so strong
    Most fitting tribute

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  75. Hi Tina had a great tym reading all d updates... FL was heart wrenching... now an arnav will change his surname to malik...... hope khushi doesn't have to face many hardships in Delhi...... hope arshi meets very soon in Delhi........ SP as always was mind blowing...... hope arnav takes the news of khushi's pregnancy in a positive way.... nd the Tina 4 the special Teri meri segment... MG is one of my favourite works I read it almost for 30 times... hope u start the 3rd volume of MG too.....

    nivi21-IF

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  76. The last chapter of Desert Heat was fabulous. Will miss Rebel though. How will they cover the remaining journey?

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  77. Hi Tina
    I came across your blog a few weeks ago and to be completely honest, I was stumped. I can honestly say that I had not watched IPKKND and was unfamiliar with ArShi. In fact, I met them through you, your words, your imagination. Since my first visit to your blog, I've watched so many of their scenes and have read everything that's available for reading on you blog.

    I've fallen head-over-heals for the cute and hot ArShi of BHO. I have to admit that I thoroughly enjoyed every minute of it. It was brilliant to see Arnav admit his love so easily. I'm really looking forward to their date. I really hope to see them move a little closer without Maddy Bua interrupting their Rabba Ve moments.

    Secret Passion is so different from BHO. It could potentially give me whiplash but who am I kidding? I'm loving it. I've read every single chapter in such a short span of time that I'm actually a bit overwhelmed by the intensity of your imagination and creativity. Hat's off to you, Tina. Your talent and your creativity are mind-blowing.

    I almost don't want to talk about Fateful Love. I fear that I might mar it by commenting on it. Its simply perfect. I haven't read FL, I have felt it. Its been an emotional journey and I've felt the intensity of ArShi's pain as well as their love. I don't know why, but I truly believe that Arnav will find Khushi. And when they meet, I hope he'll remember everything and not do anything that would hurt her in any way. Nervously waiting for the rest of FL.

    I don't know you personally, but from the comments I've read it seems that you aren't fond of tragedies. That is certainly a source of great relief for me because I've grown greatly attached to your work and was truly miserable at Rebel's death. The brutality of the act suggests emphasizes the danger ArShi are facing in DH. I haven't read Ch1-13 of DH but I love all the rest of them. Even though I missed the beginning, I feel very connected to DH and ArShi. I sincerely hope to be able to read the first 13 chapters sometime in the future. Meanwhile, I shall wait for your update.

    I want to thank you for sharing your blog with everyone. I have a great deal of respect for you and your talent and it has grown even more because you're taking a risk with your creative property. Also, I want to apologize for this ridiculously long comment. I couldn't stop myself. I just felt so many emotions on reading your work that I had to break my silence & comment.

    Thanks once again
    Take care
    Looking forward to more of your fabulous work, Tina.
    Leah

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    2. I was just being honest and I can completely understand why you haven't been able to stop writing. You have so much talent that to stop writing would be a sin. Trust me, all your readers will agree with me.
      And yes, I loved the BHO update!! Picture perfect date. I was a little quizzical at Arnav getting ready to punch the guy at the fair but his explanation (that the other guy was eyeing Khushi) made the entire sequence simply perfect. I was completely in love with your work but you seem to have no trouble in making me fall harder for your writing.
      Looking for to the rest ;)
      Also, the only reason I didn't comment on Mind Games earlier was that it would be an understatement to say that I loved it. It was better than any fantasy. What I mean to say is that the idea was magical but the emotions were so real that the ArShi managed to be surreal and at the same time real. I know that my comment is weird but the fact remains that you've been so skillful in your visualization and wording that you've managed to bridge the gap between fantasy and reality. You created a space for ArShi that is grounded in reality yet perfectly magical. I feel blessed to have found your work. I am honored that I met ArShi through your eyes. May God always bless you abundantly, Tina.

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    3. Aww I'm so glad to have introduced you to Arshi :) That feels awesome being a fan of them. By the way, would you mind if I added your original comment to my reviews section??

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  78. i now read ur story chapter 20 of desert heat
    and rebel died i was shocked
    very much so
    no words to describe how much i loved this chapter in starting but in end i was
    crying
    and then secret passion i read your last chapter about screts
    and loved it so its sister anjali why would she do that was not she a lunatic
    or is she just doing a drama to get sympthy and money from arnav
    god i really never liked anjali in IPKKND also she loved her brother but she never
    wanted his happiness and his happiness was with khushi
    and what a bitch she was to again bring shyamein house when she knew what sort of snake is is
    and i would not be amazed if in secret passion she is the cruelpit
    amazing story
    and then about fatefull love
    god sheetal is their and want arnav such a bitch (stay away from khushis arnav)
    and garima what abitch she is
    i know every parent would be shocked if their daughter would get pregnent but
    is this the way to talk with the child (khushi would be always achild to garima)
    and i think she would have talked to her rather then trowing always insult as you are adopted
    hate garima

    Bby hold on
    butter ball gone and now full space for arnav and khushi
    khushi seriously as blond gos
    loved the update

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    1. Aww I'm sad too about poor Rebel :( But his death is not in vain.
      Glad you liked the others too, BHO coming up momentarily ;)

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  79. @B.H.O part 11.:- SUPERB update yar,awesome...amazing..it was sooooo cute..awww! Clearly a fairy tale date.i lov this story..every part is more amazing then d previous,if d last date was hillarious.. dis was so romantic nd funny..and o.m.g! I'm more excitd for d next part,rub nd tub.:-) update sn dear.

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  80. OMG what a date
    Hmmm Raizada sure knows how to distract Khushi
    kissing, kissing, kissing!!!!!

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  81. Hey Tina thnx so mch 4 the BHO update.... Sure MR.Sexy knows how to distract khushi..... loved the update...... I m so confused to choose which is my favourite ff......I love all your works though I m a bit partial towards MG..... I just adore it.... and thnx 4 starting the volume 3 of MG.... waiting 4 all d updates eagerly.....

    Nivi21-IF

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  82. Hey Tina,

    Just a question, why is it that everytime i go to the individual story page, there is a grey shade which comes along and i cannot comment do anything on that page?

    IF: Alai123

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    1. The grey is there to prevent copying. unfortunately, its necessary :(

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  83. BHO 11
    Loved the update...Awwww... Khishi sooo jealous... Sooo possessive.... Sooo much in love with him...
    Can't wait for next update ....

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  84. BHO 11A
    lovely update
    khushi was so possessive, but never thought arnav fought with the shop wala out of green eye
    , funny
    buaji commenting arnav with a blonde,funny

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  85. BHO - Part 11
    An awesome update!! I think this 'fairy'tale date was perfect for Mr Sexy and Sushi, the usual would have been boring....wow, what a rollercoaster ride and what a way for Arnav to help Khushi calm down, no wonder she wanted to go on the ride again:) Arnav and Khushi are so much in love, their chemistry is crackling and their moments together go from being sweet and funny to intensely passionate, they certainly cannot get enough of each other!! Love their possessiveness over each other and loved the way Khushi told Miss Kashyap, she is Arnav's wife, and he was able to read into her jealously and even find the humour in it. Hope the annoying Miss Kashyap does not become a pemanent feature. I think Arnie is cute, sweet first gift:) Now a love-triangle has been unwittingly formed with 'the blonde'....wonder how Arnav will talk his way out of this one. Also, really curious as to what Maddy Bua's reaction to the Arnav-Khushi relationship will be?? Super excited about the upcoming update....looks like Arnav will be in the tub but who is going to get the rub, looking forward to more naughty, romantic moments between Mr Sexy and Sushi!! :)

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  86. hey tina just read ur update BHO
    i loved it
    and cute arnie i loved it
    and u know how older we are we always like stuffed toyes
    my bro is 14 years and he got a cute stuffed bear its brown with red bows and my sister is 22 she even got ice bear white with black bow
    and finaly i am alos going to by on my birthday one a green cutterpiller with differen culours
    i know i would not get another pandora charmed band
    and i would be waiting for very hot update of BHO for next weak
    looking forward
    love ur writing
    (and tina i have exames till 30 januri i promise that i wound not log on in IF so until exames are done and thats why i didnt comment i am bewuster
    but when iam really not in mod of studying i would go to blog
    so i just read your story and commetned but on indian form i can only commetn after my exames i have been away since november i really have lots of work
    i hopr u understand)
    love the chapters

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  87. Awesome update of BHO of chapter 11
    The date was fantastic!!!
    Waiting for the next part

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  88. BHO: OMg that was an amazng chapter :P
    Wife hahaha... n the roller-coaster ride was awesome!

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  89. BHO

    W-I-F-E! Hilarious......our Arnav is a keeper, any other guy would have run away!!! Oooo but how to explain his blonde friend?...FAB update as usual!

    SB

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  90. Hey Tina,
    I loved the update. You're one of the most talented writers I ever met and I do hope you continue to write Arshi fanfics. I was quite sad when ippknd ended and have been living on fanfiction this year, especially yours. I urge you to write more of these amazing fanfics and give us more things to look forward to everyday.

    Anaya

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    1. Aww thanks hun. I love Arshi too <3

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  91. BHO - chaptr 11

    truely a 'Fairytale date' with the touch fun & adventure.. amazing update.
    Mr.Sexy understantd his Sushi very well about what she wants, her fear of heights...& his distraction method was amazing..
    loved the part when she introduced herself as his wife to lavanya.. she is very possesive i must say.
    eagerly waiting for next 'rub n tub'

    & very happy teri meri anniversary..

    sorry for being very late on commenting these days & a big big thanks for making that post...
    that episode was epic..with your MG i always can relive teri meri's magic again n again..

    for me MG holds a very special place in my heart and always will be..this is the first story i hav read of yours with diff plot since then im in love with u n respect u alot.. n wishing to read MG vol 3 soon.. thanks once again

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    1. Aww you're so sweet. hopefully I'll be able to write MG vol3 in the Spring. :)

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  92. Hi tina I know that you know that you are just awesome and you also know that arnav and khushi are a part of our lives and only barun and sanaya can make it possible from their spellbounding chemistry.
    Tina I am here to make a request. This was not only mine but many of arshi fans dream to see barun and sanaya together even in real lives but that could not happen but you can make it possible by writing a beautiful sarun love story.
    See I really respect barun and sanaya and their real lives too but just a story to enjoy sarun in real life. Only tina you can make them love each other same as arnav and khushi in your ff.
    Pleasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrereeeeeeeerrerrr tina this is my last hope pleasee don't break it and give sarun fans a beautiful and passionate love story with barun and sanaya and the whole ispkkd gang back with a new story.
    Plese use your writing skills and just think about it once.
    I hope you will not return one of yours biggest and one of saruns biggest fan.
    Pleaseee reply soooooon I'll be waiting tina.

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    1. hi there. well I only write on onscreen jodis and specifically only arshi. I don't want to change that. Hope you understand.

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